[WP1] WP1 CCWG - Updated Doc; Community Mechanism comment analysis

Drazek, Keith kdrazek at verisign.com
Sun Jun 14 16:58:56 UTC 2015


All,

Attached are the redlined Word document for Questions 9 and 10 and the corresponding summary sheets.

Regards,
Keith

From: wp1-bounces at icann.org [mailto:wp1-bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of Fiona Asonga
Sent: Sunday, June 14, 2015 12:47 PM
To: Jordan Carter
Cc: wp1 at icann.org
Subject: Re: [WP1] WP1 CCWG - Updated Doc; Community Mechanism comment analysis

Hallo Jordan

Kindly find my updated  more detailed document to add into the Google doc.

Kind regards

Fiona Asonga

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From: "Jordan Carter" <jordan at internetnz.net.nz<mailto:jordan at internetnz.net.nz>>
To: wp1 at icann.org<mailto:wp1 at icann.org>
Cc: "Holly Gregory" <holly.gregory at sidley.com<mailto:holly.gregory at sidley.com>>, "Rosemary E. Fei" <rfei at adlercolvin.com<mailto:rfei at adlercolvin.com>>
Sent: Sunday, June 14, 2015 11:57:25 AM
Subject: [WP1] WP1 CCWG - Updated Doc; Community Mechanism comment analysis

Dear all

I hope this email finds you enjoying a happy and relaxing weekend.

Please find attached two documents:

- the main WP1 comment document, including now a summary of the Community Empowerment mechanism (in .pdf and .docx) - the usual Google Doc <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ViLPAuc_80PEgSqJ2sFJhwyM1gJ7HSlN115kT0YjUHM/edit?usp=sharing >

- the Community Empowerment mechanism comments analysis document (in .pdf and .docx)


The summary presented in the main document relies on the analysis in the second document.


I would ask, encourage, cajole you into please reading both documents and testing what is in them against your review of the public comments.

We have to get these summaries right and accurate, and what you see in these documents is my take, based on joint analysis of the comments themselves by Roelof and I. More eyes are certainly needed to improve the quality and accuracy of the work.


Look forward to your input.


Staff: if you have not already done so, it might be worth putting these and the links to the google docs on the Wiki?


best
Jordan

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