<div dir="ltr"><div>Dear Mathiew</div><div>Dear All,</div><div>Thank you very much for the draft.</div><div>I have noted reference to DOC.I understand that we are preparing  REVISED BALAWS DEALING WITH transition AND POST ttransition</div><div>MAY YOU KINDLY ADVISE WHAT role DOC will BE EXPECTED TO PLAY AFTER TRANSION </div><div>please READ WHAT IS INCLUDED IN THE Draft </div><div> </div><div><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">

</font><p style="margin:0in 0in 0pt"><em><b><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;font-size:14pt"><font color="#000000">Quote</font></span></b></em></p><p style="margin:0in 0in 0pt"><em><b><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;font-size:14pt"><font color="#000000">4.</font></span></b><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;font-size:11pt"><font color="#000000">
<strong>DOC</strong> affirms its commitment to a multi-stakeholder, private sector led,
bottom-up policy development model for DNS technical coordination that acts for
the benefit of global Internet users. A private coordinating process, the
outcomes of which reflect the public interest, is best able to flexibly meet
the changing needs of the Internet and of Internet users.</font></span></em></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3"><em>

</em></font><p style="margin:0in 0in 0pt"><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;font-size:11pt"><font color="#000000"><em> </em></font></span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3"><em>

</em></font><p style="margin:0in 0in 0pt 0.5in"><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;font-size:11pt"><font color="#000000"><em>The above are <strong>DOC</strong> commitments.</em></font></span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3"><em>

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</em></font><p style="margin:0in 0in 0pt"><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;font-size:11pt"><font color="#000000"><em>ICANN and <strong>DOC</strong> recognize that there is a group of participants
that engage in ICANN&#39;s processes to a greater extent than Internet users
generally. To ensure that its decisions are in the public interest, and not
just the interests of a particular set of stakeholders, ICANN commits to
perform and publish analyses of the positive and negative effects of its
decisions on the public, including any financial impact on the public, and the
positive or negative impact (if any) on the systemic security, stability and
resiliency of the DNS.</em></font></span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">

</font></div><div><strong>Unquote </strong></div><div><strong>Regards</strong></div><div><strong>Kavouss </strong></div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">2015-03-17 11:51 GMT+01:00 Matthew Shears <span dir="ltr">&lt;<a href="mailto:mshears@cdt.org" target="_blank">mshears@cdt.org</a>&gt;</span>:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
  
    
  
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    Hi all<br>
    <br>
    Attached a revised version (incorporating feedback from Steve and
    Robin) of the paper on additional items that could be inserted in
    the bylaws, etc., from the Affirmation of commitments.  <br>
    <br>
    Thoughts/comments very welcome.<span class="HOEnZb"><font color="#888888"><br>
    <br>
    Matthew</font></span><div><div class="h5"><br>
    <br>
    <div>On 3/8/2015 9:03 PM, Robin Gross wrote:<br>
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    </div></div><blockquote type="cite"><div><div class="h5">Thanks very much for this discussion paper, Matthew.
       A few comments / suggestions redlined in the attached draft.
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      </div>
      <div>Thanks again,</div>
      <div>Robin</div>
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          <div><span>
            <div>On Mar 8, 2015, at 1:05 PM, Matthew Shears wrote:</div>
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                Dear all - attached please find an overview of other
                elements of the AoC that need to be further discussed
                within the WP as well as some suggestions that could be
                brought into the bylaws.<br>
                <br>
                Looking forward to your thoughts/comments.<br>
                <br>
                Matthew<br>
                <br>
                <div>On 3/4/2015 5:38 PM, Steve
                  DelBianco wrote:<br>
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                      <div>Regarding Kavouss’ point about the ATRT
                        assessing the &#39;effectiveness of the GAC’.   </div>
                      <div>A deeper read of ICANN bylaws tells me that
                        ‘effectiveness’ is part of what the structural
                        reviews are about.   So while these structural
                        reviews don’t actually assess the effectiveness
                        of the GNSO, CCNSO, etc., they do make
                        recommendations about how to improve the
                        effectiveness.  (see bylaws below)</div>
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                      <div><font face="Calibri,sans-serif">Section 4.
                          PERIODIC REVIEW OF ICANN STRUCTURE AND
                          OPERATIONS</font></div>
                      <div><font face="Calibri,sans-serif"><br>
                        </font></div>
                      <div><font face="Calibri,sans-serif">1. The Board
                          shall cause a periodic review of the
                          performance and operation of each Supporting
                          Organization, each Supporting Organization
                          Council, each Advisory Committee (other than
                          the Governmental Advisory Committee), and the
                          Nominating Committee by an entity or entities
                          independent of the organization under review.
                          The goal of the review, to be undertaken
                          pursuant to such criteria and standards as the
                          Board shall direct, shall be to determine (i)
                          whether that organization has a continuing
                          purpose in the ICANN structure, and (ii) i<span style="background-color:rgb(255,255,0)">f
                            so, whether any change in structure or
                            operations is desirable to improve its
                            effectiveness.</span></font></div>
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                  <div style="color:rgb(0,0,0);font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-size:16px"> <br>
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                  <span style="color:rgb(0,0,0);font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-size:16px">
                    <div style="border-width:1pt medium medium;border-style:solid none none;border-color:rgb(181,196,223) currentColor currentColor;padding:3pt 0in 0in;text-align:left;color:black;font-family:Calibri;font-size:12pt"> <span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span>Steve
                      DelBianco<br>
                      <span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Wednesday,
                      March 4, 2015 at 5:27 PM<br>
                      <span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span>Jordan
                      Carter, &quot;<a href="mailto:wp1@icann.org" target="_blank">wp1@icann.org</a>&quot;<br>
                      <span style="font-weight:bold">Cc: </span>Matthew
                      Shears, Fiona Asonga, ACCT-Staff<br>
                      <span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>WP1:
                      Draft 5, with all Affirmation Reviews implemented
                      as Bylaws changes<br>
                    </div>
                    <div><br>
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                        <div>
                          <div>
                            <div>Draft v5 (attached) reflects the
                              discussion/suggestions from our call on
                              4-Mar-2015.</div>
                            <div><br>
                            </div>
                          </div>
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                        <span>
                          <div style="border-width:1pt medium medium;border-style:solid none none;border-color:rgb(181,196,223) currentColor currentColor;padding:3pt 0in 0in;text-align:left;color:black;font-family:Calibri;font-size:12pt"> <span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span>Steve

                            DelBianco<br>
                            <span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Monday,

                            March 2, 2015 at 3:56 PM<br>
                            <span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span>Jordan

                            Carter, &quot;<a href="mailto:wp1@icann.org" target="_blank">wp1@icann.org</a>&quot;<br>
                            <span style="font-weight:bold">Cc: </span>Matthew

                            Shears, Fiona Asonga, ACCT-Staff<br>
                            <span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>WP1:

                            Draft 4, with all Affirmation Reviews
                            implemented as Bylaws changes<br>
                          </div>
                          <div><br>
                          </div>
                          <div>
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                              <div>
                                <div>
                                  <div>here’s an updated doc for
                                    Matthew, Fiona, and me, where we are
                                    importing the <i>Affirmation of
                                      Commitments</i> Reviews into the
                                    ICANN Bylaws.  The last 2 pages of
                                    this doc show proposed bylaws
                                    language for all 4 reviews.</div>
                                </div>
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                                  <div>
                                    <div>Matthew Shears also has draft
                                      language regarding other
                                      commitments from AoC that should
                                      be considered for import into
                                      ICANN bylaws.</div>
                                    <div> </div>
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                                        <div>Best,</div>
                                        <div>
                                          <div>Steve </div>
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