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<div>Working from Avri’s emails and discussions in Istanbul, here’s a new draft of how the CCWG could bring AoC reviews (and their explicit commitments) into the ICANN bylaws. </div>
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<div>I started with the <a href="https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/52888421/Draft%201-%20AoC%20Accountability%20Mechanisms%20%5BSteve%20v5%5D.pdf?version=1&modificationDate=1425509039000&api=v2">v5 document</a> we reviewed in Istanbul, and made
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<li>Added context and background on AoC termination, Stress Test 14, and citations — to make this easier for new reviewers to understand</li><li>Noted that AoC sections 3,4,7, and 8 include commitments that should be imported into Core Values section of ICANN’s bylaws (Mathew Shears and Becky Burr)</li><li>Re-arranged Fiona’s original doc so that actual AoC text is shown just above our proposed text.</li><li>Added a column of notes to explain where we are differing from original AoC text. </li><li>Re-phrased the review of effectiveness of GAC interaction, per several commenters.</li><li>Adopted Kavouss’ suggestion to require implementation of prior reviews before next round of new gTLDs</li><li>Adopted Avri’s suggested language for ATRT review item f</li><li>Added Avri’s suggestion for annual reports</li><li>Added comments from Sebastien, James Gannon, Alan Greenberg, and others.</li></ul>
<div>Look forward to discussion via email or on our next WP1 call.</div>
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<div>Best,</div>
<div>Steve</div>
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<div>Steve DelBianco</div>
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<div>NetChoice</div>
<div><a href="http://www.netchoice.org/">http://www.NetChoice.org</a> and <a href="http://blog.netchoice.org/">http://blog.netchoice.org</a></div>
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