<div dir="ltr">Hi all<div><br></div><div>Here is another example for your consideration.</div><div><br></div><div>best</div><div>Jordan</div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div><span id="docs-internal-guid-417a237d-ea4f-2316-2ca2-6fbf194a5947"><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.2;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><span style="font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);font-weight:bold;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">Summary:</span></p><br><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.2;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><span style="font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">There were </span><span style="font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);font-weight:bold;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">twenty-two </span><span style="font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">comments in this section. </span></p><br><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.2;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><span style="font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);text-decoration:underline;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">17</span><span style="font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent"> comments suggested </span><span style="font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);font-weight:bold;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">agreement;</span><span style="font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent"> </span><span style="font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);text-decoration:underline;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">11</span><span style="font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent"> comments noted </span><span style="font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);font-weight:bold;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">concerns</span><span style="font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">. </span></p><br><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.2;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><span style="font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">There were </span><span style="font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);text-decoration:underline;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">no</span><span style="font-size:14.6666666666667px;font-family:Cambria;color:rgb(0,0,0);vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent"> </span><span style="font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);font-weight:bold;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">confusion</span><span style="font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent"> rated comments. </span></p><br><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.2;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><span style="font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">There were </span><span style="font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);text-decoration:underline;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">two</span><span style="font-size:14.6666666666667px;font-family:Cambria;color:rgb(0,0,0);vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent"> </span><span style="font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);font-weight:bold;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">divergent </span><span style="font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">rated comments.</span></p><br><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.2;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><span style="font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">There was </span><span style="font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);font-weight:bold;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">broad agreement that this power would enhance ICANN accountability</span><span style="font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">, but </span><span style="font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);font-weight:bold;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">significant concern</span><span style="font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent"> that this power would have to be implemented in a way that does not compromise ICANN’s effectiveness.</span></p><br><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.2;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><span style="font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">The </span><span style="font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);font-weight:bold;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">main issue/s or concerns:</span></p><br><ul style="margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><li dir="ltr" style="list-style-type:disc;font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);vertical-align:baseline;background-color:transparent"><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.2;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><span style="vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">Impact on ICANN’s operational effectiveness arising from this power</span></p></li><li dir="ltr" style="list-style-type:disc;font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);vertical-align:baseline;background-color:transparent"><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.2;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><span style="vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">Desire for more incorporation of all relevant community input in the planning process, so as to make rejection less likely </span></p></li></ul><br><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.2;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><span style="font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);font-weight:bold;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">Specific </span><span style="font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">concerns or suggestions for further follow up and WP1/CCWG discussion:</span></p><br><ul style="margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><li dir="ltr" style="list-style-type:disc;font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);vertical-align:baseline;background-color:transparent"><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.2;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><span style="vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">Greater transparency earlier in the process & more complete reporting (270)</span></p></li><li dir="ltr" style="list-style-type:disc;font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);vertical-align:baseline;background-color:transparent"><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.2;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><span style="vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">Planning process must deal with all input on a fair and equal basis (271)</span></p></li><li dir="ltr" style="list-style-type:disc;font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);vertical-align:baseline;background-color:transparent"><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.2;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><span style="vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">Better quality staff/board/community interactions before plans are approved (272)</span></p></li><li dir="ltr" style="list-style-type:disc;font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);vertical-align:baseline;background-color:transparent"><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.2;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><span style="vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">Limit rejection of a plan to once per cycle (273)</span></p></li><li dir="ltr" style="list-style-type:disc;font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);vertical-align:baseline;background-color:transparent"><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.2;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><span style="vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">Limit rejection of a plan to twice per cycle (281)</span></p></li><li dir="ltr" style="list-style-type:disc;font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);vertical-align:baseline;background-color:transparent"><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.2;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><span style="vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">Concern for impact of sustained rejection, some limit (275, 277, 283, 286, 289)</span></p></li><li dir="ltr" style="list-style-type:disc;font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);vertical-align:baseline;background-color:transparent"><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.2;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><span style="vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">Improved engagement and dialogue to prevent matters coming to the point of rejection (276, 282, 283, 285)</span></p></li><li dir="ltr" style="list-style-type:disc;font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);vertical-align:baseline;background-color:transparent"><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.2;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><span style="vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">Doubtful of value or effectiveness, opposed to strengthening (278)</span></p></li><li dir="ltr" style="list-style-type:disc;font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);vertical-align:baseline;background-color:transparent"><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.2;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><span style="vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">Need greater IANA budget transparency (288)</span></p></li><li dir="ltr" style="list-style-type:disc;font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);vertical-align:baseline;background-color:transparent"><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.2;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><span style="vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">Clarify that aim is not to re-write a budget in the community mechanism, but to return to Board for adjustment (288)</span></p></li></ul><br><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.2;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><span style="font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);font-weight:bold;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">Proposed CCWG response/approach to resolution</span></p><br><ul style="margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><li dir="ltr" style="list-style-type:disc;font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);vertical-align:baseline;background-color:transparent"><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.2;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><span style="vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">WS2 will look at the planning process to improve quality of engagement & inclusion of input between Board, staff and community, and lead to a lower likelihood of plan rejection</span></p></li><li dir="ltr" style="list-style-type:disc;font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);vertical-align:baseline;background-color:transparent"><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.2;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><span style="vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">CCWG will consider limit to number of times a plan/budget can be rejected</span></p></li><li dir="ltr" style="list-style-type:disc;font-size:12px;font-family:'Avenir Book';color:rgb(0,0,0);vertical-align:baseline;background-color:transparent"><span style="vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:transparent">CCWG will elaborate on caretaker approach where a plan/budget is rejected to minimise operational impact</span></li></ul></span><div><br></div>-- <br><div class="gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr">Jordan Carter<br><br>Chief Executive <br><b>InternetNZ</b><br><br>04 495 2118 (office) | +64 21 442 649 (mob)<br><a href="mailto:jordan@internetnz.net.nz" target="_blank">jordan@internetnz.net.nz</a> <br>Skype: jordancarter<br><br><i>A better world through a better Internet </i><br><br></div></div></div></div>
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