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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Regards,<br>
Keith<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> wp1-bounces@icann.org [mailto:wp1-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Fiona Asonga<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Sunday, June 14, 2015 12:47 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Jordan Carter<br>
<b>Cc:</b> wp1@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [WP1] WP1 CCWG - Updated Doc; Community Mechanism comment analysis<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black">Kindly find my updated more detailed document to add into the Google doc.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black">Fiona Asonga<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif";color:black">From:
</span></b><span style="font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif";color:black">"Jordan Carter" <<a href="mailto:jordan@internetnz.net.nz">jordan@internetnz.net.nz</a>><br>
<b>To: </b><a href="mailto:wp1@icann.org">wp1@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Cc: </b>"Holly Gregory" <<a href="mailto:holly.gregory@sidley.com">holly.gregory@sidley.com</a>>, "Rosemary E. Fei" <<a href="mailto:rfei@adlercolvin.com">rfei@adlercolvin.com</a>><br>
<b>Sent: </b>Sunday, June 14, 2015 11:57:25 AM<br>
<b>Subject: </b>[WP1] WP1 CCWG - Updated Doc; Community Mechanism comment analysis<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif";color:black">Dear all<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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I hope this email finds you enjoying a happy and relaxing weekend.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif";color:black">Please find attached two documents:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif";color:black">- the main WP1 comment document, including now a summary of the Community Empowerment mechanism (in .pdf and .docx) - the usual Google Doc <<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ViLPAuc_80PEgSqJ2sFJhwyM1gJ7HSlN115kT0YjUHM/edit?usp=sharing" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ViLPAuc_80PEgSqJ2sFJhwyM1gJ7HSlN115kT0YjUHM/edit?usp=sharing</a>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif";color:black">- the Community Empowerment mechanism comments analysis document (in .pdf and .docx)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif";color:black">The summary presented in the main document relies on the analysis in the second document.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif";color:black">I would ask, encourage, cajole you into please reading both documents and testing what is in them against your review of the public comments. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif";color:black">We have to get these summaries right and accurate, and what you see in these documents is my take, based on joint analysis of the comments themselves by Roelof and I. More eyes
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif";color:black">Look forward to your input.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif";color:black">Staff: if you have not already done so, it might be worth putting these and the links to the google docs on the Wiki?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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