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<div>Thanks for your notes. I guess I made that distinction intentionally. It is my understanding that everyone would consider enforceability ideal but some simply differ on whether it is worth the consequences. Does that make sense?<br>
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Dear Jonathan,</div>
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Quite a readable piece, and in my opinion you hit the key issue well.</div>
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You did not really succeed however, in your attempt to be neutral. It doesn’t read that way.</div>
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However, there are some within the community that believe…”</span><font face="Calibri,sans-serif"> to introduce the other.</font></div>
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<span style="font-weight: bold;">From: </span>Jonathan Zuck <<a href="mailto:JZuck@actonline.org" target="_parent">JZuck@actonline.org</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight: bold;">Date: </span>dinsdag 16 juni 2015 13:12<br>
<span style="font-weight: bold;">To: </span>Jordan Carter <<a href="mailto:jordan@internetnz.net.nz" target="_parent">jordan@internetnz.net.nz</a>>, "<a href="mailto:wp1@icann.org" target="_parent">wp1@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:wp1@icann.org" target="_parent">wp1@icann.org</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight: bold;">Subject: </span>Re: [WP1] Thanks, next work steps (pls read)<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri,sans-serif; font-size: 11pt;">Okay, after I accidentally volunteered on the last call to try and boil down the enforceability discussion to a bite sized morsel, I immediately regretted
it but took a shot at it anyway. You all know where I stand but I attempted to be neutral. I welcome any feedback on how to be more so. I’m sure I left out everyone’s favorite detail but my goal was to reduce this to the philosophical question it should be
and lay to rest of the factual questions that are all but resolved.</span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri,sans-serif; font-size: 11pt;">Ducking now…
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<b>Sent:</b> Sunday, June 14, 2015 6:01 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href="mailto:wp1@icann.org" target="_parent">wp1@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [WP1] Thanks, next work steps (pls read)</span></p>
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Thanks for the calls in the past few days and the work done assessing the public comments so far.</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">We have some commentary in our google doc on each comment, some summaries prepared, and a sense of the key issues that have come through. Great progress.</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">So we have some work to do to finalse outputs for the CCWG face to face, with a "freeze" on documents due at 2359UTC on Tuesday 16 June.</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">A. A high level Issues Paper, that sets out the state of play with some critical matters still for debate (UAs, enforceability, ???)</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">B. A paper with all the summaries in one place (for each question/set of questions), that also includes the separate comment analysis piece for the mechanism</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">The things we need to do and hoped for / agreed volunteers (people identified in
<b>bold</b>) - and realistically speaking, we need to have this sorted by <b>2359 on Mon 15th</b> to allow the WP to review documents. </p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">So - some quick work needed!</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">3. <b>Drafters for each section</b> to review and analyse the new comments imported today (identified in
<span style="background: rgb(213, 166, 189);">pink</span> and with different identifier numbers) - that is
<b>Steve Avri Fiona Keith Roelof Matthew Robin Jordan </b></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">4. Draft the high level Issues Paper, with people chipping in on the lists with topic suggestions, and
<b>Jonathan Z</b> doing lead drafting on the first part.</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I think that is all - if anyone picked up additional action items that need doing, please advise ASAP.</p>
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