<div dir="ltr">Thanks Malcolm. I now also discover that WP2 did indeed analyse the comments, as represented in this doc (link in .docx first and .pdf second):<div><br></div><div><a href="https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/52888740/Public%20Comment%20-%20Frozen%20Shell%20-%20WP2%20BB%20annotation.docx?version=1&modificationDate=1436309530000&api=v2">https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/52888740/Public%20Comment%20-%20Frozen%20Shell%20-%20WP2%20BB%20annotation.docx?version=1&modificationDate=1436309530000&api=v2</a><br></div><div><br></div><div><a href="https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/52888740/Public%20Comment%20-%20Frozen%20Shell%20-%20WP2%20BB%20annotation.pdf?version=1&modificationDate=1436309537000&api=v2">https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/52888740/Public%20Comment%20-%20Frozen%20Shell%20-%20WP2%20BB%20annotation.pdf?version=1&modificationDate=1436309537000&api=v2</a><br></div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div>Given that WP1 wrote the content, I am going to assume for the time being we should propose the revision. </div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div>thanks, </div><div><br></div><div>Jordan</div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On 13 July 2015 at 21:25, Malcolm Hutty <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:malcolm@linx.net" target="_blank">malcolm@linx.net</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><span class=""><br>
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On 13/07/2015 06:13, Jordan Carter wrote:<br>
> Hi all<br>
><br>
> I intended to send you my draft document on fundamental bylaws about now.<br>
><br>
> However, in reviewing the comments I noticed the linkage between the<br>
> community powers material on these (5.4), and the explanation of what<br>
> these Fundamental bylaws are and should be (3.2).<br>
><br>
> I discovered that there has been no public comments analysis done of the<br>
> comments received - or if there has been, I cannot locate it.<br>
<br>
</span>Jordan,<br>
<br>
Attached is some analysis of public comments received on Fundamental<br>
Bylaws from WP2.<br>
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Malcolm.<br>
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