<div dir="ltr">Confirming now we know why - this was draft text wrongly included, staff are prepping a further version.<div><br></div><div>Jordan</div><div><br></div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On 23 July 2015 at 06:50, Alan Greenberg <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca" target="_blank">alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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OK, I see the problem. That message included both redline and clean, but
they quite different versions. The Redline included a lot that was not in
the clean version.<span class="HOEnZb"><font color="#888888"><br><br>
Alan</font></span><div><div class="h5"><br><br>
At 22/07/2015 02:37 PM, Jordan Carter wrote:<br>
<blockquote type="cite">hi Alan, all<br><br>
This was attached in the file with redline in the filename, in my email
titled "Draft content for 22 July - Community Empowerment
Model" sent to the WP1 list yesterday - around 23 hrs ago.<br><br>
Needs updating, evidently!<br><br>
Speak soon,<br>
Jordan<br><br>
On 23 July 2015 at 02:39, Alan Greenberg
<<a href="mailto:alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca" target="_blank">alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca</a>
> wrote:<br>
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<dd>I can find no record of having received this. When was it
sent?<br><br>
</dd><dd>Regardless, it still has discussion of the ICA members voting, which
I thought was now no longer the case.<br><br>
</dd><dd>Alan<br><br>
<br>
</dd><dd>At 22/07/2015 07:02 AM, Jordan Carter wrote:<br>
<blockquote type="cite">
<dd>hi all, hi Alan<br><br>
</dd><dd>The redline draft from Grace and Bernie did actually include some
words about the voting weights and the ICANN Community Assembly - but I
don't know if everyone saw it.<br><br>
</dd><dd>Attached clean of mark up for easy access.<br><br>
</dd><dd>best<br>
</dd><dd>Jordan<br><br>
<br>
</dd><dd>On 22 July 2015 at 17:08, Alan Greenberg
<<a href="mailto:alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca" target="_blank">alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca</a>
> wrote:
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<dd>For discussion at the Wednesday WP1 meeting.<br>
</dd><dd>- comments on the community mechanism draft from Grace and
Bernie<br>
</dd><dd>- revised section on removing dorectors.<font color="#888888"><br>
</font></dd><dd><font color="#888888">Alan</font></dd>
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<dd>-- <br>
</dd><dd>Jordan Carter<br><br>
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</dd><dd>Content-Type:
application/vnd.openxmlformats-officedocument.wordprocessingml.document;<br>
</dd><dd> name="Section
5A2 - Community Mechanism_voting_Redline-2.docx"<br>
</dd><dd>Content-Disposition: attachment;<br>
</dd><dd>
filename="Section 5A2 - Community
Mechanism_voting_Redline-2.docx"<br>
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</dd><dd>Content-Type: application/pdf;<br>
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5A2 - Community Mechanism_voting_Redline-2.pdf"<br>
</dd><dd>Content-Disposition: attachment;<br>
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filename="Section 5A2 - Community
Mechanism_voting_Redline-2.pdf"<br>
</dd><dd>X-Attachment-Id: f_icenvbvo5</dd></blockquote><br>
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</blockquote></div><br><br clear="all"><div><br></div>-- <br><div class="gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr">Jordan Carter<br><br>Chief Executive <br><b>InternetNZ</b><br><br>04 495 2118 (office) | +64 21 442 649 (mob)<br><a href="mailto:jordan@internetnz.net.nz" target="_blank">jordan@internetnz.net.nz</a> <br>Skype: jordancarter<br><br><i>A better world through a better Internet </i><br><br></div></div></div></div>
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