<div dir="ltr">Hi all<div><br></div><div>Attached is a PDF copy of Izumi's paper, and the original Word version again if you need it.</div><div><br></div><div>cheers</div><div>Jordan</div><div><br></div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On 22 July 2015 at 23:46, Izumi Okutani <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:izumi@nic.ad.jp" target="_blank">izumi@nic.ad.jp</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">Hi all,<br>
<br>
<br>
If you look at the "reference" there three points we want to consider, in addressing public comments.<br>
Please find the attached changes from ver.2, which attempts to address these points.<br>
<br>
<br>
Changes from ver.2:<br>
* Clarify Review period is not the only opportunity for the community to provide feedback<br>
i. e. there will be a public comment for the community before excercising this power<br>
<br>
--> Review whether this influences the need to extend the review period<br>
--> Review whether this addresses concerns on possible delays in changes needed<br>
<br>
* Additional explanation on how this power is not likely to destabilize ICANN<br>
--> Added the rationale provided by budget/strategic/operational plan section<br>
<br>
<br>
Changes needed but not reflected:<br>
* Explanation on how we described this how Member status can be created and maintained without undue costs, complexity, or liability<br>
--> Preferable to provide common explanation to be given under the section single membership model<br>
--> How we trigger the mechanism to bring ICANN to court in relation to this power<br>
<br>
Discussion points:<br>
* Does additional explanation on comment period give sufficient justification for short review period,<br>
or does we see the need to extend the review period to more than two weeks as requested?<br>
* Does additional explanation give sufficient confidence on this power being a blocking factor to the changes needed?<br>
* Does additional explanation give sufficient confidence this power still maintains stability to ICANN?<br>
* How do we address "Changes needed but not reflected" issues?<br>
<br>
<br>
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Reference: Points raised on the public comment<br>
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* The community review period<br>
- CCWG needs to agree on the alternative<br>
- Alternative options expressed from the public comment:<br>
a) 30 days<br>
b) 60 days<br>
c) 15-30 calendar days<br>
d) The end of the next ICANN meeting that begins no sooner than one month after the Board posts notice of adoption<br>
Prior to such changes becoming effective<br>
<br>
* Explain member structure<br>
- Requested to explain how Member status can be created and maintained without undue costs, complexity, or liability (325)<br>
- Needs an explanation once the mechanism is fixed<br>
<br>
* Consider mechanisms for limiting procedural impasse and possible delays<br>
<br>
* Consider a cap on the number of times this power can be utilized.<br>
-->No consensus to reflect<br>
<br>
* Increase compostions other than ccNSO and GAC (341)<br>
-->No consensus to reflect<br>
<br>
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On 2015/07/22 20:12, Jordan Carter wrote:<br>
> Hi all<br>
><br>
> I am building off Grace's email below to build the agenda for the meeting<br>
> in eight hours or so - forgive the formatting.<br>
><br>
</span>> On 22 July 2015 at 20:36, Grace Abuhamad <<a href="mailto:grace.abuhamad@icann.org">grace.abuhamad@icann.org</a>> wrote:<br>
>><br>
>><br>
>> *22 July - meeting #20*<br>
<span class="">>><br>
>> 1. Community Model<br>
>> - overall description of CMSM model (first WP1 review of text, follows<br>
</span>>> CCWG discussion on 21 July) [*Grace* and *Jordan* first draft] ��� sent to<br>
>> WP1 list<br>
>> - voting weights (update following Paris, *finalise* if poss) [*Alan*] ���<br>
<span class="">>> sent to WP1 list in Jordan's email around 11.04am UTC<br>
>> - Community Forum (first WP1 review of text, replacement for ICANN<br>
</span>>> Community Council) [*Alan* and *Jordan*]��� sent to WP1 list in Jordan's<br>
<span class="">>> email around 11.04am UTC<br>
>><br>
>> 2. Fundamental Bylaws (review if anything outstanding from CCWG discussion<br>
</span>>> on 21 July, finalise) [*Jordan*] ��� same text as previously circulated.<br>
>><br>
>> 3. Standard Bylaws (review if any other changes, *finalise* if poss) [<br>
>> *Izumi*] ��� sent to WP1 list by Izumi around the same time as this email<br>
>><br>
>> 4. AOC Reviews into the ICANN Bylaws (*finalise* if poss) [*Steve*] ���<br>
<span class="">>> sent to WP1 list, needs staff revision before call<br>
>><br>
>><br>
> Then items 5 and 6 are a bit different to those previously identified, and<br>
> there's a new #7:<br>
><br>
</span>> 5. Removal of Individual Directors (review, choose option, *agree for CCWG<br>
> on 23 July*) ��� sent to WP1 by Jordan just before 11am UTC, building on<br>
> Alan's draft<br>
><br>
> 6. Recall of the entire ICANN Board (review material from lawyers, *agree<br>
> for CCWG on 23 July*) ��� sent to WP1 list by Jordan around 19h20 on 21 July<br>
<span class="">><br>
> 7. ICANN Budget (review Jonathan's updated paper) ��� sent to WP1 list by<br>
> Jonathan Zuck a few hours ago.<br>
><br>
> Then 7 below becomes 8.<br>
><br>
>> 7. Identification of any other bits of work we need to do to wrap this up [<br>
</span>>> *EVERYONE*]<br>
<span class="">>><br>
>><br>
> 9. Agree Agenda outline for meeting #21.<br>
><br>
><br>
> Thanks all, speak with you in ~8 hours.<br>
><br>
><br>
> Jordan<br>
><br>
><br>
><br>
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