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<div>Per Jordan’s request, the attached document includes my edits to our Public Comment replies on bringing AoC into the bylaws. I cited specific paragraph numbers in our 2nd draft where public comments were accomodated.</div>
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<span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span><<a href="mailto:wp1-bounces@icann.org">wp1-bounces@icann.org</a>> on behalf of Jordan Carter<br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Saturday, August 15, 2015 at 11:13 PM<br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span>"<a href="mailto:wp1@icann.org">wp1@icann.org</a>"<br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>[WP1] Responding to public comments on PC1 - bylaws,<br>
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<div>As you know we have until 18 August to finalise our replies to all the comments we received in Public Comment 1 to our first draft report.</div>
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<div>I attach proposed replies for the comments on Standard Bylaws and Fundamental Bylaws for your review. Any feedback welcome.</div>
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<div>I've asked Steve DelBianco to look at the replies for the <b>AOC into the Bylaws</b>, and Jonathan Zuck is looking at the replies to the
<b>Budget and Plans veto</b>. </div>
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<div>I'll share comments on the last three sections (the general comments on the Community Mechanism; removal of individual ICANN directors; recall of the ICANN Board) for your review over the next 24 hrs.</div>
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<div><b>If anyone wants to pick up any of those three areas, let me know</b>.</div>
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<div>Otherwise - happy reading!<br>
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