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<div>Jordan — I realize Annex 1 was there to show what you were thinking in July. But I updated that Annex 1 text to reflect some ideas to consider before bringing back all of your July work for the next version, which is in Section B. (see updated Google
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<div>Sorry if that isn’t exactly what you wanted, but I didn’t want to paste a whole block from Annex 1 into section B before we discuss as a group.</div>
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<span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span><<a href="mailto:wp1-bounces@icann.org">wp1-bounces@icann.org</a>> on behalf of Jordan Carter<br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Monday, September 14, 2015 at 12:37 AM<br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span>"<a href="mailto:wp1@icann.org">wp1@icann.org</a>"<br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>[WP1] WP1 meeting - 19h UTC on 14 Sep<br>
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<div>I realise that many of you are taking time to read and digest the feedback so we are keeping the meeting very simple on the 14th.</div>
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<div>Here is a link to a google doc you could helpfully look at before the meeting:</div>
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<div><a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ja7jj-9z4QSYyFV5puZM6NC_zWt36VhxXRQQUWwOPzM/edit">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ja7jj-9z4QSYyFV5puZM6NC_zWt36VhxXRQQUWwOPzM/edit</a></div>
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<div>It is meant to be a place for you to add your thoughts about the subject of how we make the Community Forum part of the Second Draft Proposal more comprehensive.</div>
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<div>Jorge's comments are there.</div>
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<div>The doc is set to tracked changes so.... please feel free to add your thoughts!</div>
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<div>We will discuss the issue and record thoughts from the call in the same document. </div>
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<div>The rest of the doc contains a copy of what we put in the second draft proposal as a base to update and amend; then the wording precisely as in the Second Draft Proposal for the record; and then the earlier draft we had done which did have more precision.</div>
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<div>Speak with you soon,</div>
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<div>Jordan</div>
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