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<div>This time with attachment. I think it would be really helpful if everyone would review and provide comments on Greg’s draft.</div>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; "><span style="font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif;">J. Beckwith Burr<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span><Burr>, Becky Burr <<a href="mailto:becky.burr@neustar.biz">becky.burr@neustar.biz</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Wednesday, July 22, 2015 at 3:40 PM<br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span>Greg Shatan <<a href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com">gregshatanipc@gmail.com</a>>, Malcolm Hutty <<a href="mailto:malcolm@linx.net">malcolm@linx.net</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Cc: </span>David Post <<a href="mailto:david.g.post@gmail.com">david.g.post@gmail.com</a>>, "<a href="mailto:wp2@icann.org">wp2@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:wp2@icann.org">wp2@icann.org</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>Re: [WP2] this is the document we'll use for our discussion of the IRP<br>
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<div>I’ve attached a really quick mark up – only one substantive thing I saw. This helps to frame the conversation.</div>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; "><span style="font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif;">J. Beckwith Burr<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span>Greg Shatan <<a href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com">gregshatanipc@gmail.com</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Wednesday, July 22, 2015 at 2:56 PM<br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span>Malcolm Hutty <<a href="mailto:malcolm@linx.net">malcolm@linx.net</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Cc: </span>David Post <<a href="mailto:david.g.post@gmail.com">david.g.post@gmail.com</a>>, Becky Burr <<a href="mailto:becky.burr@neustar.biz">becky.burr@neustar.biz</a>>, "<a href="mailto:wp2@icann.org">wp2@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:wp2@icann.org">wp2@icann.org</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>Re: [WP2] this is the document we'll use for our discussion of the IRP<br>
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<div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">It was more of a normative suggestion than a disagreement. Perhaps agreement in part/disagreement in part with each of you. I don't think the document Becky offered up implies or will require
volumes of detail, at least not in the Bylaws. I think that all of the features of this document can be captured relatively easily in a revised Bylaw.</div>
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<div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Since one picture is worth 1000 words (or something like that), I have revised Article IV, Section 3 of the Bylaws to capture every aspect of the document under discussion, at the level of detail
generally expected in Bylaws. It's about 500 words longer than the unrevised bylaw (which was 1400 words). This is attached, with my changes in track changes. This is merely a first draft, and more to demonstrate that it is manageable task we have to revise
the Bylaws appropriately.</div>
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<div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">In addition we will need to provide guidance for the implementation of these bylaws, with the drafting of rules, procedures, etc., which should be done initially in WS2 (which may decide to further
deputize other groups to carry out various aspects of detail work).</div>
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<div class="gmail_quote">On Wed, Jul 22, 2015 at 1:19 PM, Malcolm Hutty <span dir="ltr">
<<a href="mailto:malcolm@linx.net" target="_blank">malcolm@linx.net</a>></span> wrote:<br>
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On 22/07/2015 16:28, Greg Shatan wrote:<br>
> Malcolm,<br>
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> I think the level of detail we have should mirror the level of detail in<br>
> the current bylaws section on the IRP (Article IX, Section 3), unless<br>
> there are strong reasons to do otherwise. We are essentially revising<br>
> the current bylaws, not creating new text from whole cloth. I would not<br>
</span>> be in favor of providing significantly /less/ detail in the revised<br>
<span class="">> bylaws as compared to the current bylaws. We may want to provide<br>
> additional guidance for the implementation of these bylaws, but this<br>
> guidance need not and should not appear in the bylaws themselves.<br>
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</span>From your tone I suspect you meant to disagree with my suggestion, but<br>
actually it was offered as a way of avoiding the need to introduce the<br>
volumes of extra detail implied by Becky's paper.<br>
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Becky's paper does helpfully identify a considerable number of issues<br>
that will need to be addressed sooner or later - and I don't think it's<br>
even exhaustive. If we don't want to add huge amounts of new detail now,<br>
and we don't create some form of community power to develop the IRP as I<br>
suggest, how do you suggest we ensure those issues ever get resolved?<br>
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Malcolm.<br>
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> Perhaps we need to be more careful to keep current bylaws provisions in<br>
> front of us when we are discussing their revised versions.<br>
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> Greg<br>
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