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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:windowtext">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:windowtext"> wp2-bounces@icann.org [mailto:wp2-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Matthew Shears<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, July 23, 2015 10:40 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> McAuley, David; Burr, Becky; wp2@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [WP2] revised IRP checklist based on call<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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And a couple of comments on section 6 on the panel based on our discussion on yesterday's call. Hope they make sense.<br>
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Matthew<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On 7/23/2015 2:29 AM, McAuley, David wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">I have been out of the loop these past four hours for a family matter, celebration.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">I offer a few comments attached in track changes.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Thanks all, especially Becky, for the incredible work on this today.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">David McAuley</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">
<a href="mailto:wp2-bounces@icann.org">wp2-bounces@icann.org</a> [<a href="mailto:wp2-bounces@icann.org">mailto:wp2-bounces@icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Burr, Becky<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, July 22, 2015 5:02 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href="mailto:wp2@icann.org">wp2@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [WP2] revised IRP checklist based on call<br>
<b>Importance:</b> High</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">Please review and comment. Note that some things are highlighted for further discussion.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">Also, please review Greg’s proposed bylaw markup – I think it is a very handy tool to make sure we’ve covered the basic bases.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">J. Beckwith Burr</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<pre>-- <o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>Matthew Shears<o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>Global Internet Policy and Human Rights<o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>Center for Democracy & Technology (CDT)<o:p></o:p></pre>
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