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    And a couple of comments on section 6 on the panel based on our
    discussion on yesterday's call.  Hope they make sense.<br>
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    Matthew<br>
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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 7/23/2015 2:29 AM, McAuley, David
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        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Hi
            Becky,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">I
            have been out of the loop these past four hours for a family
            matter, celebration.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">I
            offer a few comments attached in track changes.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Thanks
            all, especially Becky, for the incredible work on this
            today.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">David
              McAuley<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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            <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span
style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">
                <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:wp2-bounces@icann.org">wp2-bounces@icann.org</a> [<a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="mailto:wp2-bounces@icann.org">mailto:wp2-bounces@icann.org</a>]
                <b>On Behalf Of </b>Burr, Becky<br>
                <b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, July 22, 2015 5:02 PM<br>
                <b>To:</b> <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:wp2@icann.org">wp2@icann.org</a><br>
                <b>Subject:</b> [WP2] revised IRP checklist based on
                call<br>
                <b>Importance:</b> High<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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        <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Please
                  review and comment.  Note that some things are
                  highlighted for further discussion.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Also,
                  please review Greg’s proposed bylaw markup – I think
                  it is a very handy tool to make sure we’ve covered the
                  basic bases.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">J.
                  Beckwith Burr</span><span
                  style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
              <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#068658">Neustar,
                    Inc. /</span></b><span
style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"> Deputy
                  General Counsel and Chief Privacy Officer</span><span
                  style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">1775
                  Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington, DC 20006</span><span
                  style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#068658">Office</span><span
style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">:
                  + 1.202.533.2932 </span><span
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style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">: 

                  +1.202.352.6367  </span><span
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                    moz-do-not-send="true"
                    href="mailto:becky.burr@neustar.biz"><span
                      style="color:purple"><a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:becky.burr@neustar.biz">becky.burr@neustar.biz</a></span></a> /
                  <a moz-do-not-send="true"
                    href="http://www.neustar.biz">www.neustar.biz</a></span><span
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Matthew Shears
Global Internet Policy and Human Rights
Center for Democracy &amp; Technology (CDT)
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