[Wp4] WP4 Deliverable: Elaborating an ICANN Commitment to Human RIghts

[Greg Shatan]

Leon,

Do you want to send this deliverable to the CCWG so that there will be some
time for review, or shall I?

Greg

On Mon, Nov 2, 2015 at 9:48 PM, Paul Twomey <paul.twomey at argopacific.com>
wrote:

> Greg, Niels, Tatiana and Matt
>
> Well done on a good document.
>
> Paul
>
>
> On 11/3/15 12:36 PM, Greg Shatan wrote:
>
> All:
>
> Attached are Word and PDF versions of a proposed final draft of the
> deliverable of WP4, which is intended to become part of the next Report of
> the CCWG.
>
> Niels and Tatiana and Matt went through the document after our call and
> edited and resolved the proposed changes in the document.  I followed with
> further edits and formatting work.  I believe that all of us sought to be
> neutral *rapporteurs* carrying out the sense of today's call and the work
> of our group.
>
> I felt that we needed a section which specifically set out the process and
> results of our discussions on refining the language of the Bylaw, rather
> than leaving this to our recommendations in the final section of the
> document.  Therefore, I took the liberty of creating such a section, and
> hope that you will find that this section reflects our work.
>
> This document also remains available on Google Drive.
>
> I look forward to any comments.
>
> Best regards,
>
> Greg
>
>
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