[Ws2-hr] Proposed agenda + documents meeting October 11 - 19:00 UTC​

[Niels ten Oever]

Dear all,

Thank you very much for your inputs. Based on your comments I made a new
version of tonights agenda and amended the slides in line with that as
well. Please find them underneath and attached.

1. Administrivia
Roll call, absentees, SoIs, etc
2. Discussion on Working Methods
3. Analysis and discussion of proposed definition of applicable law
4. Analysis and discussion on the progress of the drafting team working
on the new proposal for FoI
5. AOB

Best,

Niels

On 10/11/2016 03:27 PM, McAuley, David wrote:
> Hi Niels, Nigel:
> 
>  
> 
> I would like to note a particular request to our intrepid drafting team
> of Tatiana, Matthew, Jorge, and Greg for today’s call, if possible.
> 
>  
> 
> It would be interesting to hear their perspectives on the utility of
> using Google docs at this stage. I have to admit I am struggling with it
> – and I have just been a reader of this document so far, not a contributor.
> 
>  
> 
> It seems to me a very useful tool when the number of commenters and
> comments is manageable but loses its usefulness as those grow.
> 
>  
> 
> I also admit a preference, probably developed in WS1, for the
> development of issues on list prior to putting pen to paper for a rough
> or final draft.
> 
>  
> 
> The problem might simply be uniquely mine and I will have to deal with
> it. But as our drafters worked up page after page I wonder if they
> developed views on this tool at this stage of our work.
> 
>  
> 
> Thank you
> 
>  
> 
> David
> 
>  
> 
> David McAuley
> 
> International Policy Manager
> 
> Verisign Inc.
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> 703-948-4154
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>  
> 
> *From:*ws2-hr-bounces at icann.org [mailto:ws2-hr-bounces at icann.org] *On
> Behalf Of *Dr. Tatiana Tropina
> *Sent:* Tuesday, October 11, 2016 5:32 AM
> *To:* ws2-hr at icann.org
> *Subject:* Re: [Ws2-hr] Proposed agenda + documents meeting October 11 -
> 19:00 UTC​
> 
>  
> 
> Hi Niels,
> 
> since the new FoI document proposal is still work in progress, can we
> perhaps rephrase the agenda item 3 to reflect this? Right now the agenda
> item sounds like the small team produced the new document, but in fact
> we are still discussing and drafting - and our points of disagreement
> actually reflect the general disagreements of the group as a whole.
> Shall we rather say "3. Analysis and discussion on the progress of the
> drafting team working on the new proposal for FoI" or something like this?
> 
> Cheers
> 
> Tanya
> 
>  
> 
> On 11/10/16 11:00, Niels ten Oever wrote:
> 
>     Dear all,
> 
>      
> 
>     I hope this email finds you well. Please find underneath the proposed
> 
>     agenda for the call of our subgroup on 11 October 19:00 UTC.
> 
>      
> 
>     Please find also attached the proposed slides as well as the document
> 
>     the Drafting Team consisting of Greg, Tatiana, Matt and Jorge, have been
> 
>     working on this week. You can also find that document here:
> 
>      
> 
>     https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XFmkzSFh4CuVR7uWWh6-ZUNii4iVd-jQwx9eZ01CGFw/edit
> 
>      
> 
>     All your comments and suggestions are of course very welcome.
> 
>      
> 
>     1. Administrivia
> 
>     Roll call, absentees, SoIs, etc
> 
>     2. Analysis and discussion of proposed definition of applicable law by
> 
>     David McAuley
> 
>     3. Analysis and discussion on new draft FoI document produced by
> 
>     Drafting Team
> 
>     4. AOB
> 
>      
> 
>     I'm greatly looking forward to see you all on the call.
> 
>      
> 
>     Best,
> 
>      
> 
>     Niels
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>      
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>      
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