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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:windowtext">Hi Niels, Nigel:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:windowtext"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:windowtext">I would like to note a particular request to our intrepid drafting team of Tatiana, Matthew, Jorge, and Greg for today’s call, if possible.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:windowtext">It would be interesting to hear their perspectives on the utility of using Google docs at this stage. I have to admit I am struggling with it – and I have
just been a reader of this document so far, not a contributor.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:windowtext">It seems to me a very useful tool when the number of commenters and comments is manageable but loses its usefulness as those grow.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:windowtext">I also admit a preference, probably developed in WS1, for the development of issues on list prior to putting pen to paper for a rough or final draft.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:windowtext">The problem might simply be uniquely mine and I will have to deal with it. But as our drafters worked up page after page I wonder if they developed views
on this tool at this stage of our work.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:windowtext">Thank you<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:windowtext">David McAuley<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<b>On Behalf Of </b>Dr. Tatiana Tropina<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, October 11, 2016 5:32 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> ws2-hr@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Ws2-hr] Proposed agenda + documents meeting October 11 - 19:00 UTC<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p>Hi Niels,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p>since the new FoI document proposal is still work in progress, can we perhaps rephrase the agenda item 3 to reflect this? Right now the agenda item sounds like the small team produced the new document, but in fact we are still discussing and drafting - and
our points of disagreement actually reflect the general disagreements of the group as a whole. Shall we rather say "3. Analysis and discussion on the progress of the drafting team working on the new proposal for FoI" or something like this?
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<p>Cheers<o:p></o:p></p>
<p>Tanya <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On 11/10/16 11:00, Niels ten Oever wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<pre>Dear all,<o:p></o:p></pre>
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<pre>I hope this email finds you well. Please find underneath the proposed<o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>agenda for the call of our subgroup on 11 October 19:00 UTC.<o:p></o:p></pre>
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<pre>Please find also attached the proposed slides as well as the document<o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>the Drafting Team consisting of Greg, Tatiana, Matt and Jorge, have been<o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>working on this week. You can also find that document here:<o:p></o:p></pre>
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<pre><a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XFmkzSFh4CuVR7uWWh6-ZUNii4iVd-jQwx9eZ01CGFw/edit">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XFmkzSFh4CuVR7uWWh6-ZUNii4iVd-jQwx9eZ01CGFw/edit</a><o:p></o:p></pre>
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<pre>All your comments and suggestions are of course very welcome.<o:p></o:p></pre>
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<pre>1. Administrivia<o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>Roll call, absentees, SoIs, etc<o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>2. Analysis and discussion of proposed definition of applicable law by<o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>David McAuley<o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>3. Analysis and discussion on new draft FoI document produced by<o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>Drafting Team<o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>4. AOB<o:p></o:p></pre>
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<pre>I'm greatly looking forward to see you all on the call.<o:p></o:p></pre>
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<pre>Best,<o:p></o:p></pre>
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<pre>Niels<o:p></o:p></pre>
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