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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Dear all,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Regarding the items listed by Greg, I do think it would be helpful to talk through these but I think it would
<u>unproductive to do so without putting the FOI itself out for public comment</u>.&nbsp; I strongly suggest we ask the plenary to put the draft FOI out for public comment and note in the public comment that we are asking for input in relation to certain of the
 bullet points that Greg has outlined.&nbsp; (I copy the Chairs since I do not know whether there is any procedural barrier to such an approach and we want to do this in a way to complete work by May 2017.)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">We are familiar with our own work and the reasoning and compromise behind it but we need a “check” on that work before we proceed with addressing suggestions
 for items listed in Greg’s bullet points. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">So I think we should ask the plenary to put the FOI out for interim public comment in the following manner:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">The CCWG-ACCT WS2 Human Rights subteam is soliciting public comment with respect to its draft Human Rights Framework of Interpretation.&nbsp; Input from public comment will
 be considered by the subteam and will influence further work to be completed by the subteam no later than May 2017, including possible changes to the existing draft FOI.&nbsp; Such further work will primarily address suggestions for how the HR FOI should be interpreted
 in relation to the following bullet points:<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
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</span><span style="font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Consider the policies and frameworks, if any, that ICANN needs to develop or enhance in order to fulfill its commitment to respect Human Rights.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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</span><span style="font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Consistent with ICANN’s existing processes and protocols, consider how these new frameworks should be discussed and drafted to ensure broad multistakeholder involvement in the process.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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</span><span style="font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Consider what effect, if any, this Bylaw would have on ICANN’s consideration of advice given by the Governmental Advisory Committee (GAC).</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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</span><span style="font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Consider how, if at all, this Bylaw will affect how ICANN’s operations are carried out.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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</span><span style="font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Consider how the interpretation and implementation of this Bylaw will interact with existing and future ICANN policies and procedures.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> ws2-hr-bounces@icann.org [mailto:ws2-hr-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Greg Shatan<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, January 27, 2017 1:54 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> matthew shears; &lt;ws2-hr@icann.org&gt;<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Ws2-hr] [Ws2-jurisdiction] [CCWG-ACCT] Scope of mandate on HR FOI<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Matthew,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Thanks for your response, and I'm glad to see we are converging in our thinking.&nbsp; I'm replying primarily to redirect this to the Human Rights mailing list -- you replied to the one I sent
 in error to the Jurisdiction list.&nbsp; Clearly a Freudian slip on my part.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Greg<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On Fri, Jan 27, 2017 at 3:49 PM, matthew shears &lt;<a href="mailto:mshears@cdt.org" target="_blank">mshears@cdt.org</a>&gt; wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p>Hi Greg - yes, see inline<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">On 27/01/2017 19:42, Greg Shatan wrote:<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">We have been asked to &quot;confirm that [the Human Rights subgroup] it has completed developing the Human Rights FOI per Annex 12.&quot; &nbsp;This can't be a rubber stamp.</span><span style="font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">&nbsp;</span><span style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">We
 need to satisfy ourselves that this FoI really reflects <i>how</i>&nbsp;and <i>that&nbsp;</i>we have considered each of the following:</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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</span><span style="font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Consider which specific Human Rights conventions or other instruments, if any, should be used by ICANN in interpreting and implementing the Human Rights Bylaw.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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</span><span style="font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Consider the policies and frameworks, if any, that ICANN needs to develop or enhance in order to fulfill its commitment to respect Human Rights.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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</span><span style="font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Consider what effect, if any, this Bylaw would have on ICANN’s consideration of advice given by the Governmental Advisory Committee (GAC).</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I agree we need to have this discussion.<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Do we want &quot;consider&quot; to be synonymous with &quot;duly take into account&quot; which can be satisfied by reviewing and considering an element (say, a public comment) and then
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<p class="MsoNormal">Agree.&nbsp; As I suggested in my e-mail.<br>
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 that separate documents/annexes/etc. were needed, then perhaps this could be put out for comment.&nbsp; But I question that as well.&nbsp; Those really are parts of the FoI package, and would also need to be put out for Public Comment before the Bylaw graduates from
 &quot;dormant&quot; status.&nbsp; Wouldn't it be better to have the whole package out there at once?&nbsp; As an alternative, we could put the FoI out for a second set of comments while putting the added pieces out for first comments (and possibly only comments).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Preferably one time - anything else will be confusing.<br>
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 was that we follow Annex 12, rather than Annex 6.&nbsp; Annex 12 calls for a single integrated document reflecting all considerations.&nbsp; Annex 6 calls for follow-on documents.&nbsp; Since we are going with Annex 12 any additional material needed to reflect our &quot;consideration&quot;
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<p class="MsoNormal">Should the sub-group feel that it should develop suggestions for ICANN implementing the HR FOI based on its work to date the Co-Chairs would be amenable to this and would invite the HR sub-group to submit any such suggestions to the plenary
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<p class="MsoNormal">SO: May I ask the Co-Chairs to clarify what part of the WS1 report mandates the HR subgroup to carry out the task above or is this WS2 assigning a new task to the subgroup?. Like I have said, it seem to me that all HR needed to produce
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