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    <p>I would like to express my full support for the views of both
      David and Greg.  <br>
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    <p>Matthew<br>
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    <br>
    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 27/09/2017 00:07, Greg Shatan wrote:<br>
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        <div class="gmail_default"><font face="verdana, sans-serif">All, </font></div>
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        <div class="gmail_default"><font face="verdana, sans-serif">With
            regard to the statement "</font><span
            style="font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:12.8px">However,
            the Subgroup did not undertake an inclusive effort to
            determine if a compromise text could be formulated that
            would accommodate this position of the three governments,"</span><span
            style="font-size:12.8px"><font face="verdana, sans-serif"> I
              am still at a loss to understand what was not "inclusive"
              about the efforts of the Subgroup and in particular our
              Rapporteur, Niels ten Oever.</font></span><span
            style="font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:12.8px"> </span></div>
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        <div class="gmail_default"><span style="font-size:12.8px"><font
              face="verdana, sans-serif">Since the reference to the last
              drafting team was removed, I assume it was not the
              drafting team.  Since the drafting team did most of its
              work on the main Subgroup list, was open to everybody
              (minor procedural flaws in the call for volunteers aside),
              and the drafting team's suggested changes were not even
              adopted, that seems like the right result.</font></span></div>
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        <div class="gmail_default"><span style="font-size:12.8px"><font
              face="verdana, sans-serif">In any event there were ample
              opportunities to contribute suggested alternatives to the
              list -- the drafting team did not have a monopoly.</font></span></div>
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        <div class="gmail_default"><span style="font-size:12.8px"><font
              face="verdana, sans-serif">If the drafting team isn't the
              issue, then what was the issue?  The floor and the email
              list were open at all times to all participants in the
              Subgroup.  No one in the Subgroup was excluded.</font></span></div>
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        <div class="gmail_default"><span style="font-size:12.8px"><font
              face="verdana, sans-serif">The public comments were read,
              fully considered and extensively discussed.  There is no
              presumption that any particular public comment or comments
              will result in a change to a draft Report. As such, while
              "</font></span><font face="verdana, sans-serif"><span
              style="font-size:12.8px">Their expectation was that a
              properly balanced result would reflect some if not all of
              the positions and proposals made in their responses,"
              there was no basis for that expectation. </span></font></div>
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        <div class="gmail_default"><span style="font-size:12.8px"><font
              face="verdana, sans-serif">The consideration of public
              comments is too nuanced to reduce to simple rules, but I
              have observed that public comments that do result in
              changes tend to fall into the following categories: (1)
              suggestions that do not change the substance, but improve
              the expression, (2) comments that bring new facts to
              light, so that the basis of the recommendation is no
              longer accurate, or (3) multiple diverse comments that
              persuasively show the group that they got it wrong the
              first time and that they have missed the sense of the
              multistakeholder community.  The comments in question,
              eloquent and well stated though they may have been, did
              none of the above.</font></span></div>
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        <div class="gmail_default"><span style="font-size:12.8px"><font
              face="verdana, sans-serif">One category of public comment
              that has not been particularly effective, in my
              experience, is a comment from a group participant (or
              related participants) that seeks to accomplish a
              substantive change via comment what was not accomplished
              in the group.  In part, this may be because it is not a
              new voice or viewpoint for the Subgroup.  (Of course I
              understand that the participants here were individuals
              while the comments came from entities, but that is typical
              -- most participants do not file individual comments.)</font></span></div>
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        <div class="gmail_default"><span style="font-size:12.8px"><font
              face="verdana, sans-serif">In any event, if the process
              was not the problem, what was the problem, aside from
              disappointment in the result -- that what was a minority
              position remained a minority position?</font></span></div>
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        <div class="gmail_default"><span style="font-size:12.8px"><font
              face="verdana, sans-serif">I note that the dissent,
              although advertised as concentrating on substance,
              actually contains little substance, aside from the
              statement that "</font></span><font face="verdana,
            sans-serif"><span style="font-size:12.8px">the three
              Governments were in full agreement that the FOI text
              should make stronger reference to the UN Guiding
              Principles as the most relevant voluntary international
              standard."</span></font></div>
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        <div class="gmail_default"><font face="verdana, sans-serif"><span
              style="font-size:12.8px">What's missing is a statement
              identifying the portion of the Subgroup report where the
              submitters did not join the consensus.  (I am assuming
              that they are not dissenting from the whole of the
              document.)  What's also missing is the actual "minority
              position" -- the text that the dissent would have
              supported if it had been in the Report.  Without these
              elements, the dissent regrettably reads more like a
              complaint than a minority report.</span></font></div>
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        <div class="gmail_default"><font face="verdana, sans-serif"><span
              style="font-size:12.8px">Finally, I would note that the
              formal predicate for including a minority report is that
              it comes from the Subgroup participants who did not join
              the group's consensus.  As such, it seems out of order to
              include any submitters other than participants.  I suppose
              we are being a little more relaxed, since this is merely
              CCWG business.  However, if the dissent insists on
              including a minority report in the full CCWG report put
              out for public comments, I hope that the process will be
              honored. </span></font></div>
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              style="font-size:12.8px">Best regards,</span></font></div>
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        <div class="gmail_default"><font face="verdana, sans-serif"><span
              style="font-size:12.8px">Greg</span></font></div>
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        <div class="gmail_quote">On Tue, Sep 26, 2017 at 9:31 PM,
          McAuley, David via Ws2-hr <span dir="ltr">&lt;<a
              href="mailto:ws2-hr@icann.org" target="_blank"
              moz-do-not-send="true">ws2-hr@icann.org</a>&gt;</span>
          wrote:<br>
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                    style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif">Dear
                    co-chairs and all,</span></p>
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                    style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"> </span></p>
                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                    style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif">I
                    plan to participate in the CCWG Plenary tomorrow,
                    but it will be from a public setting where I will
                    most likely be unable to comment other than by chat.</span></p>
                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                    style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"> </span></p>
                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                    style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif">Thus,
                    I wish to respond to Jorge’s email here (noting as
                    well that I participated in the drafting team that
                    is at the center of some of the concern that has
                    lately arisen).</span></p>
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                    style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"> </span></p>
                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                    style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif">First,
                    let me say that it has been a pleasure to be a part
                    of the Subgroup on HR. The subgroup was very well
                    led, and participants included serious, principled,
                    and thoughtful individuals on all sides of the
                    issues discussed. </span></p>
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                    style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"> </span></p>
                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                    style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif">With
                    respect to the draft ‘dissenting opinion,’ it is, in
                    my opinion, difficult not to embrace the public
                    comments of the governments of Brazil, Switzerland,
                    and the United Kingdom when it comes to HR. </span></p>
                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                    style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif">Nonetheless,
                    that is where I find myself on the narrow issue of
                    making stronger reference to the Ruggie Principles
                    (UN Guiding Principles on Business and Human Rights
                    – UNGP) in the HR FOI and Considerations document.</span></p>
                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                    style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"> </span></p>
                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                    style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif">The
                    subgroup draft appears to me to be properly balanced
                    by stating that certain aspects of the UNGP
                    <span style="color:black;background:white">could be
                      considered as a useful guide in the process of
                      applying the Human Rights Core Value.
                    </span></span></p>
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                    style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"> </span></p>
                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                    style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif">Under
                    the UNGP, the responsibility to respect human rights
                    requires that businesses, among other things, seek
                    to mitigate adverse human rights impacts that are
                    directly linked to their operations or services by
                    their “business relationships,” even if they have
                    not contributed to those impacts.  This is one
                    particular area of my concern when it comes to
                    ICANN, which as a ‘business’ is unique.</span></p>
                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                    style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"> </span></p>
                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                    style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif">“Business
                    relationships” is a very broad term in the UNGP -
                    including relationships with business partners,
                    entities in its value chain, and any others directly
                    linked to its business operations, products or
                    services. That must include registrants, among
                    others.
                  </span></p>
                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                    style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"> </span></p>
                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                    style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif">And
                    while the UNGP try to accommodate various
                    complexities, they still provide that If the
                    business enterprise has leverage to prevent or
                    mitigate the adverse impact, it should exercise it.</span></p>
                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                    style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif">It
                    seems to me this aspect of the UNGP could
                    inappropriately force ICANN into content issues
                    outside its narrow mission.
                  </span></p>
                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                    style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"> </span></p>
                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                    style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif">The
                    new Core Value is a part of ICANN’s bylaws and as
                    such is subject to IRP claims where potential
                    claimants allege that ICANN violated the Core Value
                    by its action or inaction. HR-based claims will
                    almost inevitably wind up in front of the
                    soon-to-be-constituted IRP panel. These (at least)
                    seven new panelists will be drawn from legal circles
                    independent of ICANN. There is simply no way to
                    envision how they would interpret reference to the
                    UNGP and no guarantee that this new
                    precedent-setting body might not try to stretch
                    ICANN’s mission to accommodate the UNGP. They will
                    receive training on the DNS but we have no idea
                    whether or to what extent they might appreciate
                    ICANN’s unique mission, especially at the outset of
                    their work where they will nevertheless have the
                    power to set precedent. 
                  </span></p>
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                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                    style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif">In
                    its eloquent public comment, the government of the
                    UK remarked that absent a stronger reference to UNGP
                    the ICANN community would effectively miss an
                    opportunity “to be a global transnational beacon for
                    advancing corporate respect for human rights.”
                  </span></p>
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                    style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"> </span></p>
                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                    style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif">I
                    respectfully disagree, thinking that ICANN has
                    embraced that opportunity by explicitly adopting a
                    core value aimed at respecting HR.</span></p>
                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
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                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                    style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif">Given
                    ICANN’s unique mission (and potential damage from
                    mission-creep), its open and participatory
                    community, and the newness of the IRP panel to come,
                    there appears to be no demonstrable need to make
                    reference to the UNGP at present, but downside-risk
                    does seem possible. If the community in the future
                    discerns that such a need has subsequently arisen,
                    then steps can be taken at that time to consider
                    such a reference as appropriately tailored to take
                    account of ICANN’s uniqueness. By that time,
                    presumably, the IRP panel will have taken shape and
                    have become a little more predictable than it is at
                    the moment.</span></p>
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                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                    style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif">Best
                    regards,</span></p>
                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                    style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif">David</span><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"></span></p>
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                    style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"> </span></p>
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                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                      style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif">David
                      McAuley</span></p>
                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                      style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif">Sr
                      International Policy &amp; Business Development
                      Manager</span></p>
                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                      style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif">Verisign
                      Inc.</span></p>
                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                      style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"><a
                        href="tel:%28703%29%20948-4154"
                        value="+17039484154" target="_blank"
                        moz-do-not-send="true">703-948-4154</a></span></p>
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                    style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"> </span></p>
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                    <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
                          style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif">From:</span></b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"> <a
                          href="mailto:ws2-hr-bounces@icann.org"
                          target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">ws2-hr-bounces@icann.org</a>
                        [mailto:<a
                          href="mailto:ws2-hr-bounces@icann.org"
                          target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">ws2-hr-bounces@icann.<wbr>org</a>]
                        <b>On Behalf Of </b><a
                          href="mailto:Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch"
                          target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch</a><br>
                        <b>Sent:</b> Monday, September 18, 2017 5:46 AM<br>
                        <b>To:</b> <a href="mailto:ws2-hr@icann.org"
                          target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">ws2-hr@icann.org</a><br>
                        <b>Subject:</b> [EXTERNAL] [Ws2-hr] WG:
                        dissenting opinion - final-final text for CCWG</span></p>
                  </div>
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                    <p class="MsoNormal"> </p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">For
                        your information</span></p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Kind
                        regards</span></p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Jorge
                      </span></p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                    <div>
                      <div style="border:none;border-top:solid #e1e1e1
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                        <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
                              style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"
                              lang="DE">Von:</span></b><span
                            style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"
                            lang="DE"> Cancio Jorge BAKOM
                            <br>
                            <b>Gesendet:</b> Montag, 18. September 2017
                            11:45<br>
                            <b>An:</b> 'León Felipe Sánchez Ambía' &lt;<a
                              href="mailto:leonfelipe@sanchez.mx"
                              target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">leonfelipe@sanchez.mx</a>&gt;;
                            'Thomas Rickert' &lt;<a
                              href="mailto:thomas@rickert.net"
                              target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">thomas@rickert.net</a>&gt;;
                            'Jordan Carter' &lt;<a
                              href="mailto:jordan@internetnz.net.nz"
                              target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">jordan@internetnz.net.nz</a>&gt;<br>
                            <b>Cc:</b> 'Niels ten Oever' &lt;<a
                              href="mailto:lists@nielstenoever.net"
                              target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">lists@nielstenoever.net</a>&gt;;
                            'Bernard Turcotte' &lt;<a
                              href="mailto:turcotte.bernard@gmail.com"
                              target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">turcotte.bernard@gmail.com</a>&gt;;
                            'Arasteh' &lt;<a
                              href="mailto:kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com"
                              target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com</a>&gt;;
                            'Mark Carvell' &lt;<a
                              href="mailto:mark.carvell@culture.gov.uk"
                              target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">mark.carvell@culture.gov.uk</a>&gt;;
                            'María Milagros Castañon Seoane' &lt;<a
                              href="mailto:mcastanon@rree.gob.pe"
                              target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">mcastanon@rree.gob.pe</a>&gt;;
                            'Thiago Braz Jardim Oliveira' &lt;<a
                              href="mailto:thiago.jardim@itamaraty.gov.br"
                              target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">thiago.jardim@itamaraty.gov.<wbr>br</a>&gt;<br>
                            <b>Betreff:</b> AW: dissenting opinion -
                            final-final text for CCWG</span></p>
                      </div>
                    </div>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="DE-CH"> </span></p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Dear
                        co-chairs and all,</span></p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">I
                        note with appreciation the constructive and
                        forward-looking Email Thomas Rickert sent on
                        your behalf last week on the constitution of
                        “drafting teams”.</span></p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">In
                        order to allow for an as constructive as
                        possible discussion on the CCWG Plenary on
                        September 27, I would like to file with you the
                        following
                        <i><u>amended version of our dissent</u></i>,
                        which tries to focus only on the substantive
                        issues that hopefully may be bridged during our
                        discussions in the CCWG Plenary:</span></p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:35.4pt">
                      "This dissenting opinion is based on serious
                      concerns about the Sub-Group's treatment of the
                      substantial comments and proposals submitted
                      during the public comment period by the
                      Governments of Brazil, Switzerland and the United
                      Kingdom (who are all active members of the GAC's
                      Human Rights and International Law Working
                      Group). </p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:35.4pt">
                      Their expectation was that a properly balanced
                      result would reflect some if not all of the
                      positions and proposals made in their responses.
                      The governments are dismayed to note, however,
                      that there are no changes of any significance to
                      the draft FoI and Considerations documents that
                      addresses any of the substantial issueswhich they
                      raised.</p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:35.4pt">
                      In particular, the three Governments were in full
                      agreement that the FOI text should make stronger
                      reference to the UN Guiding Principles as the most
                      relevant voluntary international standard.
                      However, the Subgroup did not undertake an
                      inclusive effort to determine if a compromise text
                      could be formulated that would accommodate this
                      position of the three governments. </p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:35.4pt">
                      This dissenting opinion is supported by Jorge
                      Cancio (Switzerland) and Kavouss Arasteh (Iran),
                      members of this Subgroup, and the representatives
                      of the Governments of Brazil and UK who are
                      observers on this Subgroup, and the representative
                      of the Government of Peru.”</p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Hope
                        this may be helpful.</span></p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Kind
                        regards</span></p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Jorge
                      </span></p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                    <div>
                      <div style="border:none;border-top:solid #e1e1e1
                        1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in">
                        <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
                              style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"
                              lang="DE">Von:</span></b><span
                            style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"
                            lang="DE"> Cancio Jorge BAKOM
                            <br>
                            <b>Gesendet:</b> Mittwoch, 13. September
                            2017 08:35<br>
                            <b>An:</b> León Felipe Sánchez Ambía &lt;<a
                              href="mailto:leonfelipe@sanchez.mx"
                              target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">leonfelipe@sanchez.mx</a>&gt;;
                            Thomas Rickert &lt;<a
                              href="mailto:thomas@rickert.net"
                              target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">thomas@rickert.net</a>&gt;;
                            Jordan Carter &lt;<a
                              href="mailto:jordan@internetnz.net.nz"
                              target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">jordan@internetnz.net.nz</a>&gt;<br>
                            <b>Cc:</b> Niels ten Oever &lt;<a
                              href="mailto:lists@nielstenoever.net"
                              target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">lists@nielstenoever.net</a>&gt;;
                            Bernard Turcotte &lt;<a
                              href="mailto:turcotte.bernard@gmail.com"
                              target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">turcotte.bernard@gmail.com</a>&gt;;
                            Arasteh &lt;<a
                              href="mailto:kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com"
                              target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com</a>&gt;;
                            Mark Carvell &lt;<a
                              href="mailto:mark.carvell@culture.gov.uk"
                              target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">mark.carvell@culture.gov.uk</a>&gt;;
                            María Milagros Castañon Seoane &lt;<a
                              href="mailto:mcastanon@rree.gob.pe"
                              target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">mcastanon@rree.gob.pe</a>&gt;;
                            Thiago Braz Jardim Oliveira &lt;<a
                              href="mailto:thiago.jardim@itamaraty.gov.br"
                              target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">thiago.jardim@itamaraty.gov.<wbr>br</a>&gt;<br>
                            <b>Betreff:</b> AW: dissenting opinion -
                            final-final text for CCWG</span></p>
                      </div>
                    </div>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="DE-CH"> </span></p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Dear
                        Co-Chairs and all,</span></p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">For
                        your convenience, here is the clean text version
                        of the dissent we would like to be submitted to
                        the Plenary for its consideration:</span></p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:35.4pt">
                      "This dissenting opinion is based on serious
                      concerns about the Sub-Group's treatment of the
                      substantial comments and proposals submitted
                      during the public comment period by the
                      Governments of Brazil, Switzerland and the United
                      Kingdom (who are all active members of the GAC's
                      Human Rights and International Law Working
                      Group). </p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:35.4pt">
                      Their expectation was that a properly balanced
                      result would reflect some if not all of the
                      positions and proposals made in their responses.
                      The governments are dismayed to note, however,
                      that there are no changes of any significance to
                      the draft FoI and Considerations documents that
                      addresses any of the substantial issueswhich they
                      raised.</p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:35.4pt">
                      In particular, the three Governments were in full
                      agreement that the FOI text should make stronger
                      reference to the UN Guiding Principles as the most
                      relevant voluntary international standard.
                      However, the Subgroup did not undertake an
                      inclusive effort to determine if a compromise text
                      could be formulated that would accommodate this
                      position of the three governments. </p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:35.4pt">
                      Furthermore, the drafting team which was created
                      by the Sub-Group in order to develop changes to
                      the draft texts following consideration of the
                      inputs received, lacked appropriate stakeholder
                      balance as in our view there was not an
                      appropriate communication and outreach on its
                      constitution, which contributed to having no
                      Government representation on this team.</p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:35.4pt">
                      This dissenting opinion is supported by Jorge
                      Cancio (Switzerland) and Kavouss Arasteh (Iran),
                      members of this Subgroup, and the representatives
                      of the Governments of Brazil and UK who are
                      observers on this Subgroup, and the representative
                      of the Government of Peru.”</p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Thanks
                        again and regards</span></p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Jorge
                      </span></p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                    <div>
                      <div style="border:none;border-top:solid #e1e1e1
                        1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in">
                        <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
                              style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"
                              lang="DE">Von:</span></b><span
                            style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"
                            lang="DE"> Cancio Jorge BAKOM
                            <br>
                            <b>Gesendet:</b> Mittwoch, 13. September
                            2017 07:03<br>
                            <b>An:</b> León Felipe Sánchez Ambía &lt;<a
                              href="mailto:leonfelipe@sanchez.mx"
                              target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">leonfelipe@sanchez.mx</a>&gt;;
                            Thomas Rickert &lt;<a
                              href="mailto:thomas@rickert.net"
                              target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">thomas@rickert.net</a>&gt;;
                            Jordan Carter &lt;<a
                              href="mailto:jordan@internetnz.net.nz"
                              target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">jordan@internetnz.net.nz</a>&gt;<br>
                            <b>Cc:</b> Niels ten Oever &lt;<a
                              href="mailto:lists@nielstenoever.net"
                              target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">lists@nielstenoever.net</a>&gt;;
                            Bernard Turcotte &lt;<a
                              href="mailto:turcotte.bernard@gmail.com"
                              target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">turcotte.bernard@gmail.com</a>&gt;;
                            Arasteh &lt;<a
                              href="mailto:kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com"
                              target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com</a>&gt;;
                            Mark Carvell &lt;<a
                              href="mailto:mark.carvell@culture.gov.uk"
                              target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">mark.carvell@culture.gov.uk</a>&gt;;
                            María Milagros Castañon Seoane &lt;<a
                              href="mailto:mcastanon@rree.gob.pe"
                              target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">mcastanon@rree.gob.pe</a>&gt;;
                            Thiago Braz Jardim Oliveira &lt;<a
                              href="mailto:thiago.jardim@itamaraty.gov.br"
                              target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">thiago.jardim@itamaraty.gov.<wbr>br</a>&gt;<br>
                            <b>Betreff:</b> dissenting opinion -
                            final-final text for CCWG</span></p>
                      </div>
                    </div>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="DE-CH"> </span></p>
                    <div>
                      <div>
                        <div>
                          <div>
                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"
                                lang="DE-CH">Dear Co-Chairs</span></p>
                          </div>
                          <div>
                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"
                                lang="DE-CH"> </span></p>
                          </div>
                          <div>
                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"
                                lang="DE-CH">please find below for your
                                convenience and in order to avoid any
                                misunderstandings on the final text, the
                                final version of the dissenting opinion
                                we have filed for Plenary.</span></p>
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                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"
                                lang="DE-CH">Kind regards</span></p>
                          </div>
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                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"
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                          <div>
                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"
                                lang="DE-CH">Jorge</span></p>
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                                  style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"
                                  lang="DE-CH"> </span></p>
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                              style="text-align:center" align="center"><span
style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif" lang="DE-CH">
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                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                  style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"
                                  lang="DE-CH"><br>
                                  <b>Von:</b> Cancio Jorge BAKOM &lt;<a
href="mailto:Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch" target="_blank"
                                    moz-do-not-send="true">Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch</a>&gt;<br>
                                  <b>Datum:</b> 5. September 2017 um
                                  12:33:00 MESZ<br>
                                  <b>An:</b> Greg Shatan &lt;<a
                                    href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com"
                                    target="_blank"
                                    moz-do-not-send="true">gregshatanipc@gmail.com</a>&gt;,
                                  Aikman-Scalese, Anne &lt;<a
                                    href="mailto:AAikman@lrrc.com"
                                    target="_blank"
                                    moz-do-not-send="true">AAikman@lrrc.com</a>&gt;<br>
                                  <b>Cc:</b> <a
                                    href="mailto:thiago.jardim@itamaraty.gov.br"
                                    target="_blank"
                                    moz-do-not-send="true">thiago.jardim@itamaraty.gov.br</a>
                                  &lt;<a
                                    href="mailto:thiago.jardim@itamaraty.gov.br"
                                    target="_blank"
                                    moz-do-not-send="true">thiago.jardim@itamaraty.gov.<wbr>br</a>&gt;,
                                  <a href="mailto:ws2-hr@icann.org"
                                    target="_blank"
                                    moz-do-not-send="true">ws2-hr@icann.org</a>
                                  &lt;<a href="mailto:ws2-hr@icann.org"
                                    target="_blank"
                                    moz-do-not-send="true">ws2-hr@icann.org</a>&gt;,
                                  <a
                                    href="mailto:lists@nielstenoever.net"
                                    target="_blank"
                                    moz-do-not-send="true">lists@nielstenoever.net</a>
                                  &lt;<a
                                    href="mailto:lists@nielstenoever.net"
                                    target="_blank"
                                    moz-do-not-send="true">lists@nielstenoever.net</a>&gt;<br>
                                  <b>Betreff:</b> AW: [Ws2-hr]
                                  dissenting opinion - final version for
                                  transmittal to CCWG plenary</span></p>
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                            <p class="MsoNormal"
                              style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span
                                style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"
                                lang="DE-CH"> </span></p>
                            <div>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Thanks
                                  to Greg for this thorough
                                  investigation to the origins of the
                                  „drafting team“. Apparently only the
                                  transcript of the call on August 8<sup>th</sup>
                                  provides some clarity on how the
                                  drafting team was constituted, as the
                                  agenda, the notes of the call, and the
                                  subsequent emails did not contain an
                                  open call for participating in such a
                                  drafting team.
                                </span><span lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span><span
                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Nonetheless,
                                  and recognizing that at least in the
                                  call itself there was such a call for
                                  forming the drafting team, I would
                                  like to slightly amend the dissenting
                                  opinion as follows:</span><span
                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span><span
                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">==</span><span
                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"
                                style="margin-left:35.4pt">
                                "This dissenting opinion is based on
                                serious concerns about the Sub-Group's
                                treatment of the substantial comments
                                and proposals submitted during the
                                public comment period by the Governments
                                of Brazil, Switzerland and the United
                                Kingdom (who are all active members of
                                the GAC's Human Rights and International
                                Law Working Group). <span lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"
                                style="margin-left:35.4pt">
                                Their expectation was that a properly
                                balanced result would reflect some if
                                not all of the positions and proposals
                                made in their responses. The governments
                                are dismayed to note, however, that
                                there are no changes of any significance
                                to the draft FoI and Considerations
                                documents that addresses any of the
                                substantial issueswhich they raised.<span
                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"
                                style="margin-left:35.4pt">
                                In particular, the three Governments
                                were in full agreement that the FOI text
                                should make stronger reference to the UN
                                Guiding Principles as the most relevant
                                voluntary international standard.
                                However, the Subgroup did not undertake
                                an inclusive effort to determine if a
                                compromise text could be formulated that
                                would accommodate this position of the
                                three governments. <span lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"
                                style="margin-left:35.4pt">
                                Furthermore, the drafting team which was
                                created by the Sub-Group in order to
                                develop changes to the draft texts
                                following consideration of the inputs
                                received, lacked appropriate stakeholder
                                balance as
                                <span style="color:red">in our view </span>there
                                was no<span style="color:red">t an
                                  appropriate communication and outreach
                                  on its constitution<s>open invitation
                                    to participate in the drafting team</s></span>,
                                which contributed to having no
                                Government representation on this team.<span
                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"
                                style="margin-left:35.4pt">
                                This dissenting opinion is supported by
                                Jorge Cancio (Switzerland) and Kavouss
                                Arasteh (Iran), members of this
                                Subgroup, and the representatives of the
                                Governments of Brazil and UK who are
                                observers on this Subgroup, and the
                                representative of the Government of
                                Peru.”<span lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">==</span><span
                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span><span
                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Kind
                                  regards</span><span lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span><span
                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Jorge
                                </span><span lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span><span
                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
                                    style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"
                                    lang="DE">Von:</span></b><span
                                  style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"
                                  lang="DE"> Greg Shatan [<a
                                    href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com"
                                    target="_blank"
                                    moz-do-not-send="true">mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.<wbr>com</a>]<br>
                                  <b>Gesendet:</b> Dienstag, 5.
                                  September 2017 08:21<br>
                                  <b>An:</b> Aikman-Scalese, Anne &lt;<a
                                    href="mailto:AAikman@lrrc.com"
                                    target="_blank"
                                    moz-do-not-send="true">AAikman@lrrc.com</a>&gt;<br>
                                  <b>Cc:</b> Cancio Jorge BAKOM &lt;<a
                                    href="mailto:Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch"
                                    target="_blank"
                                    moz-do-not-send="true">Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch</a>&gt;;
                                  <a
                                    href="mailto:lists@nielstenoever.net"
                                    target="_blank"
                                    moz-do-not-send="true">lists@nielstenoever.net</a>;
                                  <a
                                    href="mailto:thiago.jardim@itamaraty.gov.br"
                                    target="_blank"
                                    moz-do-not-send="true">
                                    thiago.jardim@itamaraty.gov.br</a><wbr>;
                                  <a href="mailto:ws2-hr@icann.org"
                                    target="_blank"
                                    moz-do-not-send="true">ws2-hr@icann.org</a><br>
                                  <b>Betreff:</b> Re: [Ws2-hr]
                                  dissenting opinion - final version for
                                  transmittal to CCWG plenary</span><span
                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="DE-CH"> </span></p>
                              <div>
                                <div>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                      style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif"
                                      lang="DE-CH">All,</span><span
                                      lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
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                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                      style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif"
                                      lang="DE-CH"> </span><span
                                      lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
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                                <div>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                      style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif"
                                      lang="DE-CH">I think it would be
                                      helpful to review the course of
                                      events under discussion here and
                                      in the minority statement.  I've
                                      taken the time to comb through the
                                      email list and the relevant
                                      meeting transcripts, and as far as
                                      I can determine, this is what took
                                      place.  I'll provide this without
                                      further comment, but I hope it is
                                      useful to all members of the
                                      Subgroup.</span><span lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                </div>
                                <div>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                      style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif"
                                      lang="DE-CH"> </span><span
                                      lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                </div>
                                <div>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                      style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif"
                                      lang="DE-CH">1.  Niels made a
                                      request for volunteers to join a
                                      drafting team on the August 8,
                                      2017 Working Group call. 
                                      Attendance records show that
                                      Kavouss Arasteh and Mark Carvell
                                      were on the call (the latter as an
                                      Observer).  Three people on the
                                      call (David Macauley, myself and
                                      Tatiana Tropina) volunteered for
                                      the drafting team.  Anne also
                                      apparently volunteered, but this
                                      was not noted in the call notes;
                                      this was subsequently clarified.</span><span
                                      lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                </div>
                                <div>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                      style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif"
                                      lang="DE-CH"> </span><span
                                      lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                </div>
                                <div>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                      style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif"
                                      lang="DE-CH">2.  Almost directly
                                      after the call (or possibly even
                                      during the end of the call), Niels
                                      sent to the subgroup list an email
                                      with two versions of the paragraph
                                      in question ("Original text" and
                                      "Text proposed by me on the
                                      call"), and said "I am greatly
                                      looking forward to the suggestion
                                      of the drafting team."</span><span
                                      lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                </div>
                                <div>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                      style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif"
                                      lang="DE-CH"> </span><span
                                      lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                </div>
                                <div>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                      style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif"
                                      lang="DE-CH">3.  Matthew Shears
                                      replied to that thread a couple of
                                      hours later and volunteered to be
                                      on the drafting team.  Rudy
                                      Daniel, Anne Aikman-Scalese and
                                      Kavouss Arasteh also replied to
                                      that thread, with contributions. 
                                      Rudy also sent a follow-on email
                                      with further observations; David
                                      responded to this.</span><span
                                      lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                </div>
                                <div>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                      style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif"
                                      lang="DE-CH"> </span><span
                                      lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                </div>
                                <div>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                      style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif"
                                      lang="DE-CH">4.  Within a few
                                      hours after that, MSSI Secretariat
                                      sent an email to both the CCWG and
                                      ws2-hr lists with Action Items and
                                      raw captioning from the August 8
                                      meeting.  The second Action Item
                                      from the meeting was:</span><span
                                      lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                </div>
                                <div>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                      style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif"
                                      lang="DE-CH"> </span><span
                                      lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                </div>
                                <ul type="disc">
                                  <li class="MsoNormal"
                                    style="color:#0432ff;margin-left:0in">
                                    <b><span
                                        style="font-size:9.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"
                                        lang="DE-CH">DM, GS, TT
                                        volunteer for drafting team for
                                        the two elements of text which
                                        were discussed on the call this
                                        week <br>
                                        for consideration at the next
                                        meeting.</span></b><span
                                      style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"
                                      lang="DE-CH"></span></li>
                                </ul>
                                <div>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                      style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif"
                                      lang="DE-CH"> </span><span
                                      lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                </div>
                                <div>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                      style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif"
                                      lang="DE-CH">5.  The next day,
                                      David sent another email on the
                                      topic, again to the full subgroup
                                      list.  Kavouss, Anne and Steve
                                      DelBianco all replied to this
                                      email, discussing various aspects
                                      and options for the text.</span><span
                                      lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                </div>
                                <div>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                      style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif"
                                      lang="DE-CH"> </span><span
                                      lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                </div>
                                <div>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                      style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif"
                                      lang="DE-CH">6.  Meanwhile, Anne
                                      sent an email directly after the
                                      call with some thoughts on the
                                      language of this paragraph, to
                                      which there were numerous
                                      responses by eight different
                                      members of the subgroup (Kavouss,
                                       Tijani, Steve, Rudy, Brett,
                                      Bastiaan, Seun and David) over the
                                      next couple of days.</span><span
                                      lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                </div>
                                <div>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                      style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif"
                                      lang="DE-CH"> </span><span
                                      lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                </div>
                                <div>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                      style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif"
                                      lang="DE-CH">7.  Members of the
                                      drafting team took note of these
                                      discussions on the list and then
                                      put together a suggested revised
                                      text to be discussed by the
                                      Subgroup.</span><span lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                </div>
                                <div>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                      style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif"
                                      lang="DE-CH"> </span><span
                                      lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                </div>
                                <div>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                      style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif"
                                      lang="DE-CH">8.  On August 15, the
                                      date set to return a text to the
                                      list, David Macauley on behalf of
                                      the Drafting Team sent a suggested
                                      text to the full list for the
                                      Subgroup to consider.  Brett and
                                      Anne (who had not yet seen the
                                      very final suggested text due to
                                      time zone differences) responded
                                      in support of the suggested text. 
                                      Jorge and Kavouss responded,
                                      objecting to the suggested text.</span><span
                                      lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                </div>
                                <div>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                      style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif"
                                      lang="DE-CH"> </span><span
                                      lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                </div>
                                <div>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                      style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif"
                                      lang="DE-CH">9.  There were also
                                      responses to Niels' agenda email
                                      to the list, commenting on the
                                      suggested text -- Brett, Matthew,
                                      Rudy, and Anne in support; Jorge
                                      and Kavouss objecting. </span><span
                                      lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                </div>
                                <div>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                      style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif"
                                      lang="DE-CH"> </span><span
                                      lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                </div>
                                <div>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                      style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif"
                                      lang="DE-CH">10.  This suggested
                                      text was then discussed on the
                                      August 15 call.  The decision on
                                      that call, as reported in the
                                      post-call email from MSSI
                                      Secretariat, was:</span><span
                                      lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                </div>
                                <div>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                      style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif"
                                      lang="DE-CH"> </span><span
                                      lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                </div>
                                <div>
                                  <ul type="disc">
                                    <li class="MsoNormal"
                                      style="margin-left:0in">
                                      <span
                                        style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,sans-serif"
                                        lang="DE-CH">The modifications
                                        proposed by the drafting team
                                        were not supported and as such
                                        are rejected. The original text
                                        used in the public consultation
                                        will be used.</span><span
                                        style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"
                                        lang="DE-CH"></span></li>
                                  </ul>
                                </div>
                                <div>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                      lang="DE-CH"> </span></p>
                                </div>
                                <blockquote
style="margin-left:30.0pt;margin-top:5.0pt;margin-right:0in;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                  <div>
                                    <div>
                                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                          style="font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,sans-serif"
                                          lang="DE-CH">​</span><span
                                          style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif"
                                          lang="DE-CH">Only David
                                          Macauley and Tatiana Tropina
                                          were present from the drafting
                                          team. Anne, Matthew and I were
                                          unable to attend. Kavouss was
                                          on the call and participated
                                          actively in the discussion of
                                          the revised text.  Mark
                                          Carvell was present as an
                                          Observer.</span><span
                                          lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                    </div>
                                  </div>
                                </blockquote>
                                <div>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                      lang="DE-CH"> </span></p>
                                </div>
                                <div>
                                  <div>
                                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                        style="font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,sans-serif"
                                        lang="DE-CH">​</span><span
                                        style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif"
                                        lang="DE-CH">11.  </span><span
                                        style="font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,sans-serif"
                                        lang="DE-CH">​</span><span
                                        style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif"
                                        lang="DE-CH">At the following
                                        meeting on August 22, there was
                                        no further discussion of the
                                        drafting team's text.  There was
                                        a second reading of the cover
                                        email to be sent to the Plenary
                                        with the Subgroup's report,
                                        including the language used to
                                        characterize the Subgroup's
                                        response to comments suggesting
                                        that the UNGP be expressly
                                        mentioned.  There was also a
                                        lengthy discussion of procedural
                                        matters relating to the minority
                                        statement submitted by Jorge.</span><span
                                        lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                  </div>
                                  <div>
                                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                        style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif"
                                        lang="DE-CH"> </span><span
                                        lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                  </div>
                                  <div>
                                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                        style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif"
                                        lang="DE-CH">Best regards,</span><span
                                        lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                  </div>
                                  <div>
                                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                        style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif"
                                        lang="DE-CH"> </span><span
                                        lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                  </div>
                                  <div>
                                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                        style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif"
                                        lang="DE-CH">Greg</span><span
                                        lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                  </div>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                      lang="DE-CH"> </span></p>
                                </div>
                                <div>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                      lang="DE-CH"> </span></p>
                                  <div>
                                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                        lang="DE-CH">On Thu, Aug 31,
                                        2017 at 1:24 PM, Aikman-Scalese,
                                        Anne &lt;<a
                                          href="mailto:AAikman@lrrc.com"
                                          target="_blank"
                                          moz-do-not-send="true">AAikman@lrrc.com</a>&gt;
                                        wrote:</span></p>
                                    <blockquote
                                      style="border:none;border-left:solid
                                      #cccccc 1.0pt;padding:0in 0in 0in
6.0pt;margin-left:4.8pt;margin-top:5.0pt;margin-right:0in;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                      <div>
                                        <div>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                              style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d">Thanks
                                              Jorge.  You may recall
                                              that in one version of the
                                              revised “Considerations”
                                              language proposed by me on
                                              the list, I included a
                                              specific reference to
                                              ICANN the organisation
                                              using the assessment tool
                                              specified in Ruggie
                                              Principle 18(b).  This
                                              suggestion was rejected by
                                              the rest of the drafting
                                              team.  As far as I know,
                                              there were not  separate
                                              drafting team calls and
                                              everyone participated on
                                              the list and proposed
                                              language on the general
                                              list.    </span><span
                                              lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                              style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d"> </span><span
                                              lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                              style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d">I
                                              am not certain how the
                                              final language arose, but
                                              in the end I elected to
                                              support it.  I do think
                                              that if either Kavouss or
                                              you as active members
                                              would have chosen to
                                              become drafting team
                                              members, the language
                                              might have been better.</span><span
                                              lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                              style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d"> </span><span
                                              lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                              style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d">Thank
                                              you</span><span
                                              lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                              style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d">Anne</span><span
                                              lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                              style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d"> </span><span
                                              lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                          <div>
                                            <table
                                              class="m_4422862865267373713MsoNormalTable"
style="border-collapse:collapse" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"
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                                                    style="width:3.5in;padding:0in
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                                                    width="336">
                                                    <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,sans-serif;color:#af272f">Anne
                                                          E.
                                                          Aikman-Scalese</span></b></p>
                                                  </td>
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                                                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,sans-serif;color:#323232">Of
                                                        Counsel</span></p>
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                                                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,sans-serif;color:#323232"><a
href="tel:%28520%29%20629-4428" target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">520.629.4428</a>
                                                        office</span></p>
                                                  </td>
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                                                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,sans-serif;color:#323232"><a
href="tel:%28520%29%20879-4725" target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">520.879.4725</a>
                                                        fax</span></p>
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                                                    style="width:3.5in;padding:0in
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                                                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"><a
href="mailto:AAikman@lrrc.com" title="Email User" target="_blank"
                                                          moz-do-not-send="true"><span
style="color:#323232">AAikman@lrrc.com</span></a></span></p>
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                                                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,sans-serif;color:#323232">_____________________________</span></p>
                                                  </td>
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                                                    style="width:3.5in;padding:0in
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                                                    width="336">
                                                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"><img
style="width:1.1979in;height:.4791in"
id="m_4422862865267373713m_-3169709561400069612m_-5814852159388772699gmail-m_5044246175922307840_x005f_x0000_i1026"
src="cid:part53.2C225AD9.28C6C67A@intpolicy.com" class="" height="46"
                                                          width="115"
                                                          border="0"></span></p>
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                                                    style="width:3.5in;padding:0in
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                                                    width="336">
                                                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,sans-serif;color:#323232">Lewis
                                                        Roca Rothgerber
                                                        Christie LLP</span></p>
                                                  </td>
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                                                  <td
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                                                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,sans-serif;color:#323232">One
                                                        South Church
                                                        Avenue, Suite
                                                        700</span></p>
                                                  </td>
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                                                  <td
                                                    style="width:3.5in;padding:0in
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                                                    width="336">
                                                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,sans-serif;color:#323232">Tucson,
                                                        Arizona
                                                        85701-1611</span></p>
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                                                  <td
                                                    style="width:3.5in;padding:0in
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                                                    width="336">
                                                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"><a
href="http://lrrc.com/" title="Lewis Roca Rothgerber Christie Webpage"
                                                          target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true"><span style="color:#323232">lrrc.com</span></a></span></p>
                                                  </td>
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                                                    style="width:3.5in;padding:0in
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                                                    width="336"><br>
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                                            </table>
                                          </div>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                              style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d"> </span><span
                                              lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                          <div>
                                            <div
                                              style="border:none;border-top:solid
                                              #b5c4df
                                              1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in
                                              0in 0in">
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,sans-serif">From:</span></b><span
style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,sans-serif"><a
                                                    href="mailto:ws2-hr-bounces@icann.org"
                                                    target="_blank"
                                                    moz-do-not-send="true">ws2-hr-bounces@icann.org</a>
                                                  [mailto:<a
                                                    href="mailto:ws2-hr-bounces@icann.org"
                                                    target="_blank"
                                                    moz-do-not-send="true">ws2-hr-bounces@icann.<wbr>org</a>]<b>On
                                                    Behalf Of
                                                  </b><a
                                                    href="mailto:Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch"
                                                    target="_blank"
                                                    moz-do-not-send="true">Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch</a><br>
                                                  <b>Sent:</b> Thursday,
                                                  August 31, 2017 9:04
                                                  AM<br>
                                                  <b>To:</b> <a
                                                    href="mailto:lists@nielstenoever.net"
                                                    target="_blank"
                                                    moz-do-not-send="true">lists@nielstenoever.net</a><br>
                                                  <b>Cc:</b> <a
                                                    href="mailto:thiago.jardim@itamaraty.gov.br"
                                                    target="_blank"
                                                    moz-do-not-send="true">thiago.jardim@itamaraty.gov.br</a><wbr>;<a
href="mailto:ws2-hr@icann.org" target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">ws2-hr@icann.org</a><br>
                                                  <b>Subject:</b>
                                                  [Ws2-hr] dissenting
                                                  opinion - final
                                                  version for
                                                  transmittal to CCWG
                                                  plenary</span><span
                                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                            </div>
                                          </div>
                                          <div>
                                            <div>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"> <span
                                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d" lang="DE-CH">Dear Niels,</span><span
                                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d" lang="DE-CH"> </span><span
                                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d">As anticipated, please find
                                                  hereunder the final
                                                  version of the
                                                  dissenting opinion I
                                                  would like to file to
                                                  the report from the
                                                  Subgroup:</span><span
                                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d"> </span><span lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d">==</span><span lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                style="margin-left:35.4pt">
                                                "This dissenting opinion
                                                is based on serious
                                                concerns about the
                                                Sub-Group's treatment of
                                                the substantial comments
                                                and proposals submitted
                                                during the public
                                                comment period by the
                                                Governments of Brazil,
                                                Switzerland and the
                                                United Kingdom (who are
                                                all active members of
                                                the GAC's Human Rights
                                                and International Law
                                                Working Group). <span
                                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                style="margin-left:35.4pt">
                                                Their expectation was
                                                that a properly balanced
                                                result would reflect
                                                some if not all of the
                                                positions and proposals
                                                made in their responses.
                                                The governments are
                                                dismayed to note,
                                                however, that there are
                                                no changes of any
                                                significance to the
                                                draft FoI and
                                                Considerations documents
                                                that addresses any of
                                                the substantial
                                                issueswhich they raised.<span
                                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                style="margin-left:35.4pt">
                                                In particular, the three
                                                Governments were in full
                                                agreement that the FOI
                                                text should make
                                                stronger reference to
                                                the UN Guiding
                                                Principles as the most
                                                relevant voluntary
                                                international standard.
                                                However, the Subgroup
                                                did not undertake an
                                                inclusive effort to
                                                determine if a
                                                compromise text could be
                                                formulated that would
                                                accommodate this
                                                position of the three
                                                governments. <span
                                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                style="margin-left:35.4pt">
                                                Furthermore, the
                                                drafting team which was
                                                created by the Sub-Group
                                                in order to develop
                                                changes to the draft
                                                texts following
                                                consideration of the
                                                inputs received, lacked
                                                appropriate stakeholder
                                                balance as there was no
                                                open invitation to
                                                participate in the
                                                drafting team, which
                                                contributed to having no
                                                Government
                                                representation on this
                                                team.<span lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                style="margin-left:35.4pt">
                                                This dissenting opinion
                                                is supported by Jorge
                                                Cancio (Switzerland) and
                                                Kavouss Arasteh (Iran),
                                                members of this
                                                Subgroup, and the
                                                representatives of the
                                                Governments of Brazil
                                                and UK who are observers
                                                on this Subgroup, and
                                                the representative of
                                                the Government of Peru.”<span
                                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d">==</span><span lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d"> </span><span lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d">Thanks for including it in the
                                                  final report to be
                                                  transmitted to the
                                                  CCWG Plenary for its
                                                  consideration.</span><span
                                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d"> </span><span lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d">Kind regards</span><span
                                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d"> </span><span lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d">Jorge
                                                </span><span
                                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d"> </span><span lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
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style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d"> </span><span lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
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                                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt" lang="DE">Von:</span></b><span
                                                      style="font-size:11.0pt"
                                                      lang="DE"><a
                                                        href="mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org"
                                                        target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">accountability-cross-<wbr>community-bounces@icann.org</a>
                                                      [<a
                                                        href="mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org"
                                                        target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">mailto:accountability-cross-<wbr>community-bounces@icann.org</a>]<b>Im
                                                        Auftrag von
                                                      </b>MSSI
                                                      Secretariat<br>
                                                      <b>Gesendet:</b>
                                                      Mittwoch, 30.
                                                      August 2017 00:54<br>
                                                      <b>An:</b> CCWG
                                                      Accountability
                                                      &lt;<a
                                                        href="mailto:accountability-cross-community@icann.org"
                                                        target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">accountability-cross-<wbr>community@icann.org</a>&gt;<br>
                                                      <b>Cc:</b> <a
                                                        href="mailto:ws2-hr@icann.org"
                                                        target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">ws2-hr@icann.org</a><br>
                                                      <b>Betreff:</b>
                                                      [CCWG-ACCT]
                                                      Recordings, DAIRs,
                                                      Raw Caption Notes
                                                      for Human Rights
                                                      Subgroup Meeting
                                                      #32 | 29 August
                                                      2017</span><span
                                                      lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
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                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                                  lang="DE-CH"> </span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Sylfaen&quot;,serif">Hello
                                                  all,</span><span
                                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Sylfaen&quot;,serif"> </span><span
                                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Sylfaen&quot;,serif">You may
                                                  find the recordings,<u>D</u>ecisions,
                                                  <u>A</u>ction <u>I</u>tems,
                                                  <u>R</u>equests
                                                  (DAIRs), and raw
                                                  caption notes for CCWG
                                                  Accountability WS2<b>Human
                                                    Rights Subgroup -
                                                    Meeting #32  </b>–  <b>29
                                                    August 2017</b>
                                                  <span
                                                    style="color:#1f497d"> </span>posted
                                                  at <span
                                                    style="color:#1f497d"><a
href="https://community.icann.org/x/LwIhB" target="_blank"
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style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Sylfaen&quot;,serif">The
                                                  transcript will be
                                                  posted on when it
                                                  becomes available
                                                  (usually in 3 to 5
                                                  business days after
                                                  the call).</span><span
                                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Sylfaen&quot;,serif"> </span><span
                                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Sylfaen&quot;,serif">A copy of
                                                  the DAIRs and raw
                                                  caption notes may be
                                                  found below. </span><span
                                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Sylfaen&quot;,serif"> </span><span
                                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Sylfaen&quot;,serif">Thank
                                                  you.</span><span
                                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
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style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><span lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
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style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Sylfaen&quot;,serif;color:#002060">Kind
                                                    Regards,
                                                  </span><span
                                                    lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                                <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Sylfaen&quot;,serif;color:#002060">Yvette
                                                      Guigneaux</span></b><span
                                                    lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                                <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:&quot;Sylfaen&quot;,serif;color:#002060">(MSSI)
                                                      Multistakeholder
                                                      Strategy &amp;
                                                      Strategic
                                                      Initiatives
                                                    </span></b><span
                                                    lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:&quot;Sylfaen&quot;,serif;color:#002060">Projects
                                                    &amp; Operations
                                                    Assistant.</span><span
                                                    lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:&quot;Sylfaen&quot;,serif;color:#002060"> </span><span
                                                    lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                                <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:&quot;Sylfaen&quot;,serif;color:#1f497d">ICANN
                                                      – Internet
                                                      Corporation for
                                                      Assigned Names and
                                                      Numbers</span></b><span
                                                    lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:&quot;Sylfaen&quot;,serif;color:#002060">Email: <a
href="mailto:yvette.guigneaux@icann.org" target="_blank"
                                                      moz-do-not-send="true">yvette.guigneaux@icann.<wbr>org</a></span><span
                                                    lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:&quot;Sylfaen&quot;,serif;color:#002060">Cell: <a
href="tel:%28310%29%20460-8432" target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">+1-310-460-8432</a></span><span
                                                    lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:&quot;Sylfaen&quot;,serif;color:#002060">Skype: 
yvette.guigneaux.icann</span><span lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:&quot;Sylfaen&quot;,serif;color:#002060"><a
href="http://www.icann.org/" target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">www.icann.org</a></span><span
                                                    lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
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style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:&quot;Sylfaen&quot;,serif;color:#002060"> </span><span
                                                    lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
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style="width:.6458in;height:.6458in"
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style="font-family:&quot;Sylfaen&quot;,serif">Raw Captioning Notes</span></b><span
                                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><i><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Sylfaen&quot;,serif">Disclaimer:
                                                    This rough edit
                                                    transcript, which
                                                    may contain missing,
                                                    misspelled or
                                                    paraphrased words,
                                                    is only provided for
                                                    your immediate
                                                    review and is not
                                                    certified as
                                                    verbatim and is not
                                                    to be cited in any
                                                    way. </span></i><span
                                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
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                                                      moz-do-not-send="true">Word
                                                      Doc</a></span></strong><span
style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif" lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
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style="font-size:7.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#333333">        
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href="https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/69272111/Raw%20Transcript_%20Human%20Rights_%20Meeting%2032_%2029AUG17.pdf?version=1&amp;modificationDate=1504045991224&amp;api=v2"
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style="color:red;text-decoration:none">PDF</span></a></span></strong><span
style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif" lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
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                                                <b><span
                                                    style="font-family:&quot;Sylfaen&quot;,serif;color:#333333">Decisions: 
                                                  </span></b><span
                                                  style="font-family:&quot;Sylfaen&quot;,serif;color:#333333">Decision
                                                  taken to proceed with
                                                  submitting the revised
                                                  report for
                                                  CCWG-Plenary’s
                                                  consideration.</span><span
                                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                style="margin-top:22.5pt;background:white">
                                                <b><span
                                                    style="font-family:&quot;Sylfaen&quot;,serif;color:blue">Action
                                                    Items:  </span></b><span
style="font-family:&quot;Sylfaen&quot;,serif;color:blue">NTO to submit
                                                  the revised report for
                                                  CCWG-Plenary’s
                                                  consideration.</span><span
                                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
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                                                <b><span
                                                    style="font-family:&quot;Sylfaen&quot;,serif;color:#333333">Requests: 
                                                  </span></b><span
                                                  style="font-family:&quot;Sylfaen&quot;,serif;color:#333333">Members
                                                  of the subgroup are
                                                  seeking clarification
                                                  on who has rights to
                                                  file a Minority
                                                  Statement, per the
                                                  CCWG charter, and what
                                                  has been done in the
                                                  past:</span><span
                                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                style="background:white">
                                                <span
                                                  style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Symbol;color:#333333">·</span><span
style="font-size:7.0pt;color:#333333">        
                                                </span><span
                                                  style="font-family:&quot;Sylfaen&quot;,serif;color:#333333">Has
                                                  an Observer filed a
                                                  Minority Statement in
                                                  CCWG Accountability
                                                  before? </span><span
                                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
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                                                style="background:white">
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                                                  style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Symbol;color:#333333">·</span><span
style="font-size:7.0pt;color:#333333">        
                                                </span><span
                                                  style="font-family:&quot;Sylfaen&quot;,serif;color:#333333">Has
                                                  anyone who wasn't an
                                                  official Member 
                                                  (appointed from an
                                                  SOAC)  filed a
                                                  Minority Statement in
                                                  CCWG before?</span><span
                                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                style="background:white">
                                                <span
                                                  style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Symbol;color:#333333">·</span><span
style="font-size:7.0pt;color:#333333">        
                                                </span><span
                                                  style="font-family:&quot;Sylfaen&quot;,serif;color:#333333">What
                                                  the CCWG Charter say
                                                  about who has rights
                                                  to file a Minority
                                                  Statement?</span><span
                                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                style="margin-top:22.5pt;background:white">
                                                <b><span
                                                    style="font-family:&quot;Sylfaen&quot;,serif;color:#333333">Documents
                                                    -<a
href="https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/69272111/Revisions%20to%20HR%20Subgroup%20email%20to%20CCWG%20Plenary%5B1%5D.pdf?version=1&amp;modificationDate=1504013260000&amp;api=v2"
                                                      target="_blank"
                                                      moz-do-not-send="true"><span
style="color:#3b73af;text-decoration:none">Revisions to HR Subgroup
                                                        email to CCWG
                                                        Plenary</span></a></span></b><span
                                                  lang="DE-CH"></span></p>
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+447712472987
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