[Ws2-jurisdiction] Fwd: PLEASE REVIEW: Almost Final Draft Report for Review before Submission to Plenary on 2 March

[Greg Shatan]

All,



Attached in Word and PDF is the almost final Draft Report, based on today’s
call.  This is also available in Google Docs at
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rdMJyvZdyN9TApT6gx_3NwpdvIL7YKHEUD7tNfLf6hU/edit?usp=sharing.




Please review and comment.  I have marked in the margin the sections
corresponding to the “Notes” in the chart distributed before today’s call.



In particular please review and respond to the suggested text on page 12 at
the end of the “Overview of the Work of the Subgroup.”  There are two
proposed additions that grew out of Note 4.1.  The first received broad
support on the call without noted objections.



The second received both support and objections on the call.  Since there
was no clear path forward from the call, it is important that as many
participants as possible give this careful consideration and provide their
views on this second proposed addition.  This text reads as follows:



The late suggestion added to the report that “Further Discussions of
Jurisdiction-Related Concerns” are needed, in particular on jurisdictional
immunities, found echo in several comments subsequently received, but these
comments did not bring any changes to the report, nor could they be
considered in detail, on the understanding that the existing support for
“further discussions” to address unresolved concerns, including in other
fora, had already been acknowledged.



I look forward to hearing from you all, with regard to the report as a
whole and any specific aspects, in particular the proposed text above.



Since the final draft must be submitted no later than 23:59 UTC on 2 March,
I am setting *a deadline of 18:00 UTC on 2 March* for all responses.



Thank you!



Greg



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