<div dir="auto">Hello Greg,<div dir="auto"><br></div><div dir="auto">I like to note 2 minor comments.</div><div dir="auto"><br></div><div dir="auto">1. Calling an issue "generally" doesn't seem to communicate well. I suggest something in the line of "US sanction on countries"<br><div dir="auto"><br></div><div dir="auto">2. Last paragraph on page 6 can start from "Initially..."<br><br>Regards<br><div data-smartmail="gmail_signature" dir="auto">Sent from my mobile<br>Kindly excuse brevity and typos</div></div></div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Sep 18, 2017 6:46 AM, "Greg Shatan" <<a href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com">gregshatanipc@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br type="attribution"><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">All,</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Attached are copies of the OFAC recommendation, revised to reflect the issues raised and the results of discussions during the reading of the recommendation on last week's call. The Google Doc has been revised following that reading, and Word and PDF copies reflecting these revisions are attached.</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Please review this version prior to the call. I would like to suggest that the upcoming call be considered the "second reading" of the Recommendation, and the Recommendation be left open for 48 hours afterwards for comments from those unable to attend the call. </div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">I look forward to our call.</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Greg </div></div>
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