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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Good job Greg.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1F497D">I have reviewed the document. Thanks for the quick turnaround.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1F497D">I found a sentence whose ending seems to have gotten lost in the editorial process.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1F497D">I want to replace one “could” with a “should”
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1F497D">I propose a rewording of part of the recommendation related to general license, because I thought we had agreed to specify that ICANN would come back
 to the community if it ran into serious obstacles. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Dr. Milton Mueller<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Georgia Institute of Technology<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><a href="http://www.internetgovernance.org/"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1F497D;text-decoration:none"><img border="0" width="243" height="52" id="Picture_x0020_1" src="cid:image002.jpg@01D3314F.E96564B0" alt="IGP_logo_gold block_email sig"></span></a><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1F497D"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"> ws2-jurisdiction-bounces@icann.org [mailto:ws2-jurisdiction-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Greg Shatan<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, September 19, 2017 3:26 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> ws2-jurisdiction &lt;ws2-jurisdiction@icann.org&gt;<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Ws2-jurisdiction] Revised OFAC Recommendation<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif">All,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif">Based on our very fruitful discussions today, I have revised the OFAC Recommendation in the Google Doc.&nbsp; Clean and track changes copies are attached in Word and PDF, showing changes made to
 the draft that existed prior to today's call.&nbsp; You may find it easier to read the &quot;clean&quot; version, since the call today resulted in a number of recommendations becoming much more focused, which also resulted in changes to the text leading up to each recommendation.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif">Please make comments here or in the Google Doc ASAP.&nbsp; Our plan is to present this to the Plenary at the upcoming meeting.&nbsp; The deadline for documents is 23:59 UTC on Wednesday, September 20.&nbsp;
 To allow for final clean-up, all comments should be received and resolved no later than 20:00 UTC on Wednesday.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif">Thank you for your attention to these documents.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,sans-serif">Greg<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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