<html><head><meta http-equiv="content-type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"></head><body dir="auto"><div>Dear Greg</div><div id="AppleMailSignature">Dear All</div><div id="AppleMailSignature">I support the replacement of "could " with " should" as suggested by </div><div id="AppleMailSignature">Milton</div><div id="AppleMailSignature">Regards</div><div id="AppleMailSignature">Kavouss<br><br>Sent from my iPhone</div><div><br>On 19 Sep 2017, at 22:02, Mueller, Milton L <<a href="mailto:milton@gatech.edu">milton@gatech.edu</a>> wrote:<br><br></div><blockquote type="cite"><div>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Good job Greg.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">I have reviewed the document. Thanks for the quick turnaround.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Looks to be 98% good to me. Three minor issues are flagged in the attached document, which has my comments:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><!--[endif]--><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">I found a sentence whose ending seems to have gotten lost in the editorial process.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><!--[endif]--><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">I want to replace one “could” with a “should”
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</span></span></span><!--[endif]--><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">I propose a rewording of part of the recommendation related to general license, because I thought we had agreed to specify that ICANN would come back
to the community if it ran into serious obstacles. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Dr. Milton Mueller<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Professor, School of Public Policy<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Georgia Institute of Technology<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"> <a href="mailto:ws2-jurisdiction-bounces@icann.org">ws2-jurisdiction-bounces@icann.org</a> [<a href="mailto:ws2-jurisdiction-bounces@icann.org">mailto:ws2-jurisdiction-bounces@icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Greg Shatan<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, September 19, 2017 3:26 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> ws2-jurisdiction <<a href="mailto:ws2-jurisdiction@icann.org">ws2-jurisdiction@icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Ws2-jurisdiction] Revised OFAC Recommendation<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">All,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">Based on our very fruitful discussions today, I have revised the OFAC Recommendation in the Google Doc. Clean and track changes copies are attached in Word and PDF, showing changes made to
the draft that existed prior to today's call. You may find it easier to read the "clean" version, since the call today resulted in a number of recommendations becoming much more focused, which also resulted in changes to the text leading up to each recommendation.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">Please make comments here or in the Google Doc ASAP. Our plan is to present this to the Plenary at the upcoming meeting. The deadline for documents is 23:59 UTC on Wednesday, September 20.
To allow for final clean-up, all comments should be received and resolved no later than 20:00 UTC on Wednesday.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">Thank you for your attention to these documents.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">Greg<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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