<div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><div class="gmail_default">Kavouss, </div><div class="gmail_default"><br></div><div class="gmail_default">As previously noted, I have responded in detail (twice) regarding the remaining elements of your suggested text. Please read these responses. I assure you it will take far less time to read them than it took me to write them. Please reply to the points raised in these responses if you have any remaining concerns.</div><div class="gmail_default"><br></div><div class="gmail_default">Best regards,</div><div class="gmail_default"><br></div><div class="gmail_default">Greg</div></div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Thu, Sep 21, 2017 at 4:12 AM, Kavouss Arasteh <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com" target="_blank">kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr"><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><div style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:106%"><span lang="EN-US"><font color="#000000" face="Calibri" size="3">Greg</font></span></div><div style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:106%"><span lang="EN-US"><font color="#000000" face="Calibri" size="3">In addition to the elements of my last proposal that you have included in the last version you have posted quite recently , I have had other proposal which I did ask you to look at them and include them either in the itroduction ,as relevant, or preamble to the Recommendation . See below<span></span></font></span></div><div style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:106%"><span lang="EN-US"><font color="#000000" face="Calibri" size="3"><br></font></span></div><div style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:106%"><span lang="EN-US"><font color="#000000" face="Calibri" size="3">Greg </font></span></div><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><div style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:106%"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Calibri"><font color="#0000ff" size="3"><em>1.The last
sentence reads” unless the results of the study
demonstrate that it would be inappropriate for ICANN to pursue these licenses.”To
this effect the first sentensce below “ what Criteria……inappropriate Because
you qualify the study by being inappropriate and I did suggest what criteria will
be use to make the judgement </em></font></font></span></div><div style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:106%"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:rgb(37,9,87)"><font color="#0000ff" face="Calibri" size="3"><em>Thus
the first sentence would fir .You may include my comment by modifying the
sentence as follows </em></font></span></div><font color="#0000ff" face="Times New Roman" size="3"><em>
</em></font><div style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:106%"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:rgb(37,9,87)"><font face="Calibri" size="3"><font color="#0000ff"><em>UNLESS
,USING APPROPRIATE CRITERIA, THE RESULTS OF STUDY DEMONSTRATE THAT IT WOULD BE
INAPPROPRIATE FOR ICANN TO PURSUE THESE STUDIES</em></font>.</font></span></div><div style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:106%"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:rgb(37,9,87)"><font face="Calibri" size="3"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Calibri"><font color="#ff0000" size="3"><span style="color:rgb(0,32,96)"><font color="#ff0000">This has been covered in part </font><span></span></span></font></font></span></font></span></div><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:106%"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:rgb(37,9,87)"><font face="Calibri" size="3"> </font></span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:106%"><span lang="EN-US"><font color="#000000" face="Calibri" size="3">2.</font></span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:106%"><span lang="EN-US" style="line-height:106%;font-size:16pt"><font color="#0000ff" face="Calibri"><em>Generally, ICANN should pursue the application for general
license at arliest time and should remind the registries not to copy and paste
the general agreements found in US-based registrars. </em></font></span></p><font color="#0000ff" face="Times New Roman" size="3"><em>
</em></font><p style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:106%"><span lang="EN-US" style="line-height:106%;font-size:16pt"><font color="#000000" face="Calibri"><em><font color="#0000ff">This also fits</font></em> </font></span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:106%"><span lang="EN-US" style="line-height:106%;font-size:16pt"><font color="#000000" face="Calibri"> <span lang="EN-US"><font face="Calibri"><font color="#ff0000" size="3"><span style="color:rgb(0,32,96)"><font color="#ff0000">This has been covered in part </font><span></span></span></font></font></span></font></span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:106%"><span lang="EN-US" style="line-height:106%;font-size:16pt"><font color="#000000" face="Calibri"><font color="#0000ff">3. The role of ICANN, to make awareness about such
situation is critical and should not be undermined.</font> </font></span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><div style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:106%"><span lang="EN-US" style="line-height:106%;font-size:16pt"><font color="#0000ff" face="Calibri"><em>This part is talking about awareness that was
extensively discussed and thus fits </em></font></span></div><div style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:106%"><span lang="EN-US" style="line-height:106%;font-size:16pt"><font color="#0000ff" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Calibri"><font color="#ff0000" size="3"><span style="color:rgb(0,32,96)"><font color="#ff0000">This has been covered in part </font><span></span></span></font></font></span></font></span></div><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:106%"><span lang="EN-US" style="line-height:106%;font-size:16pt"><font color="#0000ff" face="Calibri"><em>4. There are several reports in the media that
US-Based and Non-US registrars have asked registrants to transfer out their
domains immediately because they might get affected by US sanctions</em></font></span></p><font color="#0000ff" face="Times New Roman" size="3"><em>
</em></font><div style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:106%"><span lang="EN-US" style="line-height:106%;font-size:16pt"><font color="#0000ff" face="Calibri"><em>This could be included in appropriate part .if it does
not fit with the recommends part </em></font></span></div><div style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:106%"><span lang="EN-US" style="line-height:106%;font-size:16pt"><font color="#0000ff" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-US" style="line-height:106%;font-size:16pt"><font color="#0000ff" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Calibri"><font color="#ff0000" size="3"><span style="color:rgb(0,32,96)"><font color="#ff0000">This has NOT been covered in part <span></span></font><span></span></span></font></font></span></font></span></font></span></div><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><div style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:106%"><span lang="EN-US" style="line-height:106%;font-size:16pt"><font color="#0000ff" face="Calibri"><em>5.Examples of that are related to Godaddy and Online
Nic, which made pressure against registrants having citizenship of Sanction coountries.
This could be included in the introductory part of the OFAC sanctions and
registrar</em></font></span></div><div style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:106%"><span lang="EN-US" style="line-height:106%;font-size:16pt"><font color="#0000ff" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-US" style="line-height:106%;font-size:16pt"><font color="#0000ff" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Calibri"><font color="#ff0000" size="3"><span style="color:rgb(0,32,96)"><font color="#ff0000">This has NOT been covered in part <span></span></font><span></span></span></font></font></span></font></span></font></span></div><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><div style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:106%"><span lang="EN-US" style="line-height:106%;font-size:16pt"><font color="#0000ff" face="Calibri"><em>6 Registrars should
be reminded that they should not normally examine zero risk policy in regard of
penalties imposed by OFAC.</em></font></span></div><div style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:106%"><span lang="EN-US" style="line-height:106%;font-size:16pt"><font color="#0000ff" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-US" style="line-height:106%;font-size:16pt"><font color="#000000" face="Calibri"><font color="#0000ff"><em>This could be included either in the recommends part or preamble of the recommend part </em></font><span><span><span></span></span></span></font></span></font></span></div><div style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:106%"><span lang="EN-US" style="line-height:106%;font-size:16pt"><font color="#ff0000" face="Calibri">This seems not covered. </font></span></div><div style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:106%"><span lang="EN-US" style="line-height:106%"><font color="#ff0000" face="Calibri">Pls kindly advise about those which are not covered in any part of the report or if covered , I have nor seen it</font></span></div><div style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:106%"><span lang="EN-US" style="line-height:106%"><font color="#000000" face="Calibri">I am grateful to you for that guidance </font></span></div><div style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:106%"><span lang="EN-US" style="line-height:106%"><font color="#000000" face="Calibri">Regards</font></span></div><span class="HOEnZb"><font color="#888888"><div style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:106%"><span lang="EN-US" style="line-height:106%"><font color="#000000" face="Calibri">Kavouss </font></span></div><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman">
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