<div dir="ltr"><div>Dear Greg, Thanks for efforts</div><div>While I am reviewing those element you included in the recommands part, I did suggest to also include other parts of the suggested paragraph in the introductory and preamble part as amendedby me last night making them softened ,taking account of Milton's and Paul? s comments</div><div>If yes pls advise where ( in the introductory and / or preamble part of the documents) ) these other elements are included .$</div><div>Tks </div><div>Kavouss </div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Thu, Sep 21, 2017 at 7:29 AM, Greg Shatan <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com" target="_blank">gregshatanipc@gmail.com</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;padding-left:1ex;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-width:1px;border-left-style:solid"><div dir="ltr"><div style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">All,</div><div style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">I have attached Word and PDF versions of the Google Doc as it now stands, showing suggestions added by Thiago, and suggestions based on list contributions from Kavouss and Paul Rosenzweig.</div><div style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Please review these suggested changes and indicate your views by replying here and/or making suggestions in the Google Doc.</div><div style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">it is important that we have broad review of these suggestions. Thank you.</div><div style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Best regards,</div><div style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Greg</div></div>
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