<div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">I believe that we all agree that the discussion is ongoing and open, nothing is foreclosed, and that all the suggestions currently in the document are just that - suggestions. I am happy to clarify that to the list (indeed, I think I just have). For the good of the process, I'm happy to recirculate the documents with that clarification as well.</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">I hope that resolves matters, and we can get back to discussing the substance, rather than the process.</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Best regards,</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Greg</div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Wed, Sep 27, 2017 at 12:06 PM, <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch" target="_blank">Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Dear Raphaël,<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Allow me just to clarify: what I meant is not that you agree with my suggestions, but that –according to the document
data- you worked on the document on September 21 and 22 (after I had made my suggestions on Sept. 19 – the last day I worked on the doc), and that you did not object to my wording proposals – again: this is not in any way an agreement on your side. It just
shows that the discussion was ongoing and open, and that no re-editing from the Rapporteur was warranted in my view.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Kind regards<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="DE" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Von:</span></b><span lang="DE" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"> Raphaël BEAUREGARD-LACROIX [mailto:<a href="mailto:raphael.beauregardlacroix@sciencespo.fr" target="_blank">raphael.<wbr>beauregardlacroix@sciencespo.<wbr>fr</a>]
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<b>Gesendet:</b> Mittwoch, 27. September 2017 17:58<span class=""><br>
<b>An:</b> Cancio Jorge BAKOM <<a href="mailto:Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch" target="_blank">Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch</a>><br>
</span><b>Cc:</b> <a href="mailto:ws2-jurisdiction@icann.org" target="_blank">ws2-jurisdiction@icann.org</a>; <a href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com" target="_blank">gregshatanipc@gmail.com</a></span></p><div><div class="h5"><br>
<b>Betreff:</b> Re: [Ws2-jurisdiction] Updated "Applicable Law and Choice of Venue Provisions" Recommendation<u></u><u></u></div></div><p></p><div><div class="h5">
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<p class="MsoNormal">Jorge,<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I unfortunately haven't had more than a cursory reading of your proposed changes. I should certainly have done so before in order to give you proper feedback, but since my last inputs from last week I haven't had enough time to give them
a proper read. As such, as of now, I cannot really state my position on the whole matter (and I am unfortunately not in circumstances where I can spare enough time before the call to do so.) Rest assured that I will go over your edits tomorrow. <u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Best, <u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On 27 Sep 2017 17:47, <<a href="mailto:Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch" target="_blank">Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch</a>> wrote:<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Dear Greg,</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1f497d">I feel we have different views of what the rapporteur role is. The facts are that there
was an open document, where all Subgroup members could suggest edits. Raphaël and I did so. I saw Raphaëls text and he saw mine – and did not object to the way I saw things. Nobody else did comment or object to my suggested wording. Moreover, the “menu” approach
had been supported on list, with different nuances, on list by various other subgroup participants.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1f497d">You made changes, taking a specific view not supported by anyone else in the document
comments, and after making those changes you immediately sent out the text with your revised text – hence not giving any chance to react to your “reverting” or “putting back”.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1f497d">I find that irregular and improper to the role of the Rapporteur. And it is quite puzzling
that you pretend that with my “suggestions” I was closing any debate – I was just proposing wording, which as I said was not objected nor commented by anyone during more than one week.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Btw: I have never taken out the Californian option – I presented it as a potential outcome
of the overall Menu approach. See attached the word document I saved in my PC after making my suggestions to the Google Doc on September 19.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Best</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Von:</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"> Greg
Shatan [mailto:<a href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com" target="_blank">gregshatanipc@gmail.<wbr>com</a>]
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<b>Gesendet:</b> Mi</span><span lang="DE" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">ttwoch, 27. September 2017 17:36<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<b>An:</b> Cancio Jorge BAKOM <<a href="mailto:Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch" target="_blank">Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch</a>><br>
<b>Cc:</b> ws2-jurisdiction <<a href="mailto:ws2-jurisdiction@icann.org" target="_blank">ws2-jurisdiction@icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Betreff:</b> Re: [Ws2-jurisdiction] Updated "Applicable Law and Choice of Venue Provisions" Recommendation<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">These changes were made in my role as rapporteur. A key aspect of the rapporteur role is helping the group find outcomes the group
broadly supports. Part of this is avoiding a push to define "common ground" prematurely. In my view as rapporteur, the group is not yet at the point where a "common ground" can be declared, and other options eliminated. You will see that today's agenda
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">I am as eager as you are to find common ground, and I thank you for offering your assistance in identifying what you believe to be
common ground. However, I believe that it's premature to identify a result at this time. Thus, I edited the text to keep our options open. (I don't believe it's accurate to say I "reverted" the text, since all your suggestions are still in the document,
and only a few changes were made by me, to reflect where we stand in our process.) This in no way prevents the group from considering whether the "Menu" option is one where the Subgroup can find common ground. It merely reflects that we have not already
done so.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">I'm a little puzzled also by your statement that I am "</span><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">intervening in an open
discussion within the group taking very specific positions, instead of letting the debate go forward and helping it reaching consensus when needed."
</span><span style="font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">The changes I made were to back the document away from the very specific positions you inserted, in order to keep the debate and discussion open. I'm sorry that was not clear to you.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">In the end, this text needs to be revised to identify a result and a recommendation, unless there is a divergence of opinion (and
thus no common ground, although this itself would be a "result"). We can also discuss whether to identify the options we did not adopt and the reasons for doing so, or to take your approach and eliminate them from the document (as you did with the "California"
option). I hope we can move through this rapidly, while avoiding hasty conclusions, and arrive at a document that reflects a finding of common ground in the group.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">I hope this clarifies matters.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On Wed, Sep 27, 2017 at 1:49 AM, <<a href="mailto:Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch" target="_blank">Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch</a>> wrote:<u></u><u></u></p>
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In the pdf this is not clear.<br>
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Are these changes made in your capacity as rapporteur? or are they personal contributions?<br>
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I guess they are the latter. In such case this should be made clear in order to avoid any misunderstandings.<br>
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I note for the record that I find troublesome that (without making that clear) you are once again intervening in an open discussion within the group taking very specific positions, instead of letting the debate go forward and helping it reaching consensus when
needed.<br>
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I cannot speak for Raphaêl of course, bit I wonder why you "revert" to his initial text, which I had suggested to amend aiming at a "common ground" I saw emerging, when Raphaël himself had not done so or had not objected to my suggestions.<br>
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Hence, I would like to see the document distributed without your changes or if you insist to circulate the version you have changed that you clearly identify your edits as your personal opinion.<br>
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best<br>
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Jorge<br>
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Von: Greg Shatan <<a href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com" target="_blank">gregshatanipc@gmail.com</a>><br>
Datum: 27. September 2017 um 07:40:41 MESZ<br>
An: Cancio Jorge BAKOM <<a href="mailto:Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch" target="_blank">Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch</a>><br>
Cc: ws2-jurisdiction <<a href="mailto:ws2-jurisdiction@icann.org" target="_blank">ws2-jurisdiction@icann.org</a>><br>
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Jorge,<br>
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Yes. This is reflected in the Google Doc, and if you mouse over the changes in Word.<br>
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Greg<br>
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On Wed, Sep 27, 2017 at 1:39 AM, <<a href="mailto:Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch" target="_blank">Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch</a><<wbr>mailto:<a href="mailto:Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch" target="_blank">Jorge.Cancio@bakom.<wbr>admin.ch</a>>> wrote:<br>
Dear Greg,<br>
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The changes in "red ink" are from you?<br>
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Thanks for clarifying.<br>
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regards<br>
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Jorge<br>
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Datum: 27. September 2017 um 07:33:38 MESZ<br>
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All,<br>
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Attached is an updated version of this recommendation in Word and PDF formats, found at
<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xAyla8FTaL7jZ0D2rYtAzQUr3gEnirTKiAG-kqD0ZSs/edit?usp=sharing" target="_blank">
https://docs.google.com/<wbr>document/d/<wbr>1xAyla8FTaL7jZ0D2rYtAzQUr3gEni<wbr>rTKiAG-kqD0ZSs/edit?usp=<wbr>sharing</a> (please make all changes in SUGGEST mode).<br>
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Please review and be prepared to discuss.<br>
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Thank you.<br>
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Greg<br>
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