<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=us-ascii"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space;" class="">Dear colleagues,<div class="">I hope you will not hate me too much (or more than already), but I mistakingly made edits to the doc a few days back and did not change to edit mode. I have now made a diff and added comments and highlights in green to explain what I did based on that. </div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">There was no intention whatsoever to camouflage the edits. </div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Sorry for this.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">All the best,</div><div class="">Thomas</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""><div><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">Am 10.10.2017 um 05:57 schrieb Greg Shatan <<a href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com" class="">gregshatanipc@gmail.com</a>>:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">All,</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br class=""></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Please review the Choice of Law and Choice of Venue Recommendation as soon as possible. In about 24 hours, I will turn another version of the document, accepting as many edits as possible. If there are parts of the text or the edits that you strongly object to, please say so now.</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br class=""></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">The Google Doc is at <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xAyla8FTaL7jZ0D2rYtAzQUr3gEnirTKiAG-kqD0ZSs/edit?usp=sharing" class="">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xAyla8FTaL7jZ0D2rYtAzQUr3gEnirTKiAG-kqD0ZSs/edit?usp=sharing</a></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br class=""></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Word and PDF versions are attached. (In the PDF, the blue changes are by Raphael, the pink ones by David McAuley and the purple ones by me.)</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><b class="">A VERSION OF THIS WILL BE REVIEWED IN OUR MEETING OF OCTOBER 11 AT 19:00 UTC ON OCTOBER 11, 2017</b></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br class=""></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><b class=""><u class="">THIS MUST BE SUBMITTED (AS PART OF OUR REPORT) BY 23:59 UTC ON OCTOBER 11, 2017.</u></b></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br class=""></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Thank you for taking the time to review this.</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br class=""></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Greg</div></div>
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