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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On Thursday 12 October 2017 12:25 AM,
      Greg Shatan wrote:<br>
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          style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Welcome back to the
          Subgroup. <br>
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    Thanks Greg.<br>
    <br>
    Meanwhile I must explain that I was held by urgent deadlines on some
    projects and some amount of travel whereby my attention to the
    group's working has been less than I would have wanted it to be. I
    seek no concessions for that, just explaining. <br>
    <br>
    I did see that recs on OFAC and choice of venue were being
    discussed. I had no indication these are the only recs that would be
    discussed, in the face of the fact that customised immunity related
    possible recs were being discussed repeatedly by many of us. I
    thought that it is after these two recs were done with that other
    possible recs will be taken up, when I suddenly saw that the full
    report was claimed to be ready, and then delivered. People who
    wanted t focus on other recs were not given a proper chance at all,
    and indecent haste was employed to close matters. <br>
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          style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"> If you had been
          participating in the Subgroup or Plenary recently, you would
          know that the time for considering and submitting
          recommendations for consideration by the group has passed some
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    I would request you to point me to the decision of the sub group
    laying timelines for submitting and considering recs. I dont
    remember seeing them. Even if they existed they were not prominent
    enough for people to know them well, after all these were one of the
    most important timelines for the group. But then do point out where
    and when they were publicised. Thanks. <br>
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          style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">The deadline for any
          Subgroup to submit a draft report <b>to the Plenary</b> that
          could be part of the CCWG Report is<b> 23:59 UTC today</b>.
          This has been clearly communicated for some months now.</div>
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    Yes months ago. But closer to the deadline it is the chairs
    responsibility to make them repeatedly clear -- unless the intention
    is not to remind people who may have forgotten them. <br>
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          style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">This report is not
          intended to be a full record of all the group's
          deliberations.  Its focus is the recommendations that have
          reached consensus (i.e., broad support, but not necessarily
          unanimity or lack of objection) in the Subgroup. As such, it
          does not generally reflect discussion of items that did not
          garner broad support.</div>
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    But it need not mislead people that the group was discussing change
    of ICANN jurisdiction, when it hardly ever discussed it, and not
    mention the fact that "customised immunity for ICANN" was hotly and
    repeatedly discussed -- despite attempts by process keepers to
    discourage that discussion. To me, it just attempts to make the
    positions of those who wanted some recs in this area look very
    unreasonable, by mentioning that discussions involved changing
    ICANN's jursidiction, rather than seeking "customised immunity" for
    it under the US IOI Act, which looks so much a reasonable
    proposition. Can you please explain why this was done.<br>
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          style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">You can review the
          Subgroup's emails and meetings to see how we arrived at these
          two recommendations as being the ones to be included in the
          Subgroup's report.  This was based on identifying these
          recommendations as ones where the group could find common
          ground and where concrete recommendations could be made. 
          Based on the meetings and emails over the last several weeks,
          I am fairly confident that these two recommendations have the
          consensus support of the Subgroup.<br>
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          style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"> We will confirm on
          today's call that the Report as a whole has that same support.</div>
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    You got at least two disagreements with the report even before the
    meeting. However, you nevertheless chose to send the report to the
    plenary as a consensus report. Can you please explain this.<br>
    <br>
    Also, it was decided that at an earlier time that all decisions in
    tele-meetings will be put to the elist for some time (esp when the
    tele meeting takes place at a time which past midnight for a very
    big part of the population of the world) before these are considered
    final. You did not do this in the present case, neither gave any
    warning that you wont be ding it.<br>
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    parminder <br>
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          style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">However, if the Report
          does not have consensus support of the Subgroup, we will have
          no choice but to not submit the Report.</div>
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          style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Best regards,</div>
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        <div class="gmail_quote">On Wed, Oct 11, 2017 at 2:27 PM,
          parminder <span dir="ltr">&lt;<a
              href="mailto:parminder@itforchange.net" target="_blank"
              moz-do-not-send="true">parminder@itforchange.net</a>&gt;</span>
          wrote:<br>
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              <p><font face="Verdana">Since there is no response on how
                  and when was it decided to chose only OFAC and choice
                  of venue as the issues to give recs on, and how the
                  issue of possible immunity from US jurisdiction
                  excluded from this exercise, i want to put it on
                  record before today's meeting (which I will not be
                  able to attend) that I, and perhaps others, would like
                  to put up a draft rec on the immunity issue for the
                  group.... It is up to the group to accept it or
                  not.... If it is unable to reach consensus it is
                  possible that I, and perhaps others, may want to put
                  it as a dissenting view, that will be requested to be
                  attached to the group's report. Please let me know the
                  process and time line for submitting (1) draft rec on
                  customised immunity for ICANN, (2) in case there is no
                  consensus on it. to give a dissenting view. <br>
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              <p><font face="Verdana">Also, I disagree with the manner
                  that the current report does a very partial job of the
                  mandate given to it, cherry picking one or two aspects
                  of the mandate and ignoring other, without a due and
                  clear process. I also disagree with the manner in
                  which its narrative glosses over the major discussions
                  ans dynamics in the sub group, especially around the
                  issue of US gov's jurisdiction and possibilities of
                  seeking customised immunity under the US IOI Act.....
                  It is most astounding how the report manages to
                  completely avoid even a mention of the immunity issue
                  which was hotly argued and discussed by the sub group,
                  and on which so many members had such strong views. <br>
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              <p><font face="Verdana">It can hardly be said that there
                  is a consensus on the group's outputs as mentioned in
                  the draft report...</font></p>
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                  <p><font face="Verdana">parminder </font><br>
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                  <div class="m_9065613103414112323moz-cite-prefix">On
                    Wednesday 11 October 2017 06:52 PM, parminder wrote:<br>
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                    <div class="m_9065613103414112323moz-cite-prefix">On
                      Wednesday 11 October 2017 03:40 AM, Greg Shatan
                      wrote:<br>
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                          style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">I have
                          received no comments on the Draft Subgroup
                          Report.</div>
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                    Greg, I was able to see it only just now and have
                    the following quick comments before today's meeting.
                    Will give more comments later on<br>
                    <br>
                    At 2 places the report notes that the sub group got
                    into discussing to topic of of "changing ICANN’s
                    headquarters or jurisdiction of incorporation".<br>
                    <br>
                    As I have previously mentioned on this list, I
                    recall no real discussion at any time on actually
                    "changing ICANN's headquarters or jurisdiction of
                    incorporation". What did happen were repeated
                    discussions on possibility of seeking immunity for
                    ICANN under the US's International Organisations
                    Immunity Act... Why dont we mention the actual
                    discussion that took place in the group -- however
                    inadequately, despite many members repeated requests
                    for a proper discussion --  then put in what was
                    hardly discussed?<br>
                    <br>
                    Next, the report says that it chose to priortize the
                    two issues of OFAC and choice of jurisdiction in
                    contracts among many possible issues. I just want to
                    be reminded which decision it refers to, and taken
                    when. In any case, I disassociate myself from any
                    such decision. But please do point me to the
                    relevant decision of the sub group. <br>
                    <br>
                    I am also not clear about <br>
                    <br>
                    "The Subgroup understands that it cannot require
                    ICANN to make amendments to the RA or the RAA "
                    (said with regard to choice of jurisdiction
                    recs)..... Why so? Sorry if this has already been
                    discussed, but fell be grateful if the reason is
                    explained to me.<br>
                    <br>
                    I do also note that there is really no
                    recommendation with regard to choice of jurisdiction
                    issue but just a series of musings. This fact that
                    no rec is being made in this regard should be very
                    clearly stated.<br>
                    <br>
                    So, finally the only substantial thing I understand
                    the group to be saying is that it wants ICANN to be
                    more specifically clear that it will try to seek
                    OFAC licence for all otherwise legitimate cases, and
                    that ICANN should explore (only explore) general
                    OFAC licences -- which rec is also made with too
                    much defensiveness. <br>
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                    And it wants to say nothing on jurisdictional
                    immunity issue, in fact completely censor the issue
                    out of the report, even in parts which just
                    factually deal with discussions that happened in the
                    group. <br>
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                    More later, <br>
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                    thanks, parminder <br>
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                    PS: Excuse me for the hurried comments, I am at some
                    place right now where I am very constrained in time.
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                          style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">I have
                          added a summary of the Choice of Law and
                          Choice of Venue Recommendation to the
                          Executive Summary, based on the current state
                          of that Recommendation in the Google doc.</div>
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                          style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">The
                          Draft Report is attached in Word and PDF
                          versions.  The Google doc is (still) at <a
href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/135c03wFSIlz1Lqdv6Tte8sw7tMinsQEgy0CoNtRXT4Y/edit?usp=sharing"
                            target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">https://docs.google.com/<wbr>document/d/<wbr>135c03wFSIlz1Lqdv6Tte8sw7tMins<wbr>QEgy0CoNtRXT4Y/edit?usp=<wbr>sharing</a></div>
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                          style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">I will
                          circulate that Recommendation next, in Word
                          and PDF versions, as it now stands.</div>
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                          style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">These
                          documents will be discussed on tomorrow's
                          call.  An agenda will be circulated shortly.</div>
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