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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Dear Greg, dear all<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">As mentioned in the chat at the last meeting I am sending suggested changes to the report in order to take into account the comments made by Denmark.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">The purpose is – if more choices of law in the RA and RAA and also choices of Venue in the RA are made available – that it then should be up to
Registries and Registrars to decide the applicable law and venue. It should not be part of the negotiation when entering into a contract with ICANN.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><![if !supportLists]><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">1)<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Page 20, last line: Delete “(or at least to negotiate for)”.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Page 21, 1st paragraph: Replace ”The method of “choosing” from the menu also needs to be considered. The registry could simply be able
to make a choice from the menu, or it could be part of the registry’s negotiations with ICANN.” with “The method of “choosing” from the menu also needs to be considered. The Sub-group recommends that it should be up to the registry to choose from the menu.
It should not be part of the registry’s negotiations with ICANN.”<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><![if !supportLists]><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">3)<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Page 25: Add the following sentence after the last bullet point in the section with the title “Choice of law in Registry Agreements”:
“If a menu approach is implemented then it should be up the Registry to choose from the menu.”<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">I hope the above suggestions are helpful.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Best,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Finn<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">Fra:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> Ws2-jurisdiction [mailto:ws2-jurisdiction-bounces@icann.org]
<b>På vegne af </b>Greg Shatan<br>
<b>Sendt:</b> 31. januar 2018 06:14<br>
<b>Til:</b> ws2-jurisdiction<br>
<b>Emne:</b> [Ws2-jurisdiction] Copy of Jurisdiction Subgroup Draft Report for Suggested Revisions<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif"">All.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif"">There is a working copy of the Jurisdiction Subgroup's report as it was put out for public comment in Google Docs at
<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1H-8AKrebLqPFHNCyUavzgJXxMkNnxo28zhG1CYdNzlI/edit?usp=sharing">
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1H-8AKrebLqPFHNCyUavzgJXxMkNnxo28zhG1CYdNzlI/edit?usp=sharing</a>.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif"">Any proposed revisions to the report based on the public comments will be added to this document. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif"">For your convenience, I have attached Word and PDF copies of the report to this email. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif"">I look forward to our call.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif"">Best regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif"">Greg<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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