[Ws2-so_ac] WS 2 SO/AC Accountability progress report

[Kavouss Arasteh]

Dear All,
Pls find attached my comment in redlines
Regards
Arasteh

2016-10-21 17:25 GMT+02:00 matthew shears <mshears at cdt.org>:

> Hi
>
> In (1) I would bullet the tracks and use the actual track descriptions
> from WS2 just for clarity's sake.
>
> Matthew
>
> On 21/10/2016 15:56, farzaneh badii wrote:
>
> Dear all,
>
>
> Please find attached the preliminary progress report of the WS 2 group on
> SO/AC Accountability. Please send your comments, edits and responses within
> 48 hours as we need to finalize the report by Monday 24th October the
> latest.
>
> As a supplemental report, we might attach our work in progress document
> available here : https://docs.google.com/document/d/
> 1WTRZZJ9B3Q6BHP6AlDHmoiep8NeshNpomBNM4bBXYpA/edit
>
>
> Best regards,
>
> Cheryl, Farzi, Steve
>
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