[Ws2-so_ac] WS 2 SO/AC Accountability progress report

[Giovanni Seppia]

Dear Farzaneh,

Thanks for it.

Please see the report in attachment. I made few style and typo edits.

Best,

Giovanni


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From: ws2-so_ac-bounces at icann.org [mailto:ws2-so_ac-bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of farzaneh badii
Sent: 24 October 2016 14:07
To: Kavouss Arasteh
Cc: ws2-so_ac at icann.org
Subject: Re: [Ws2-so_ac] WS 2 SO/AC Accountability progress report

Thank you, Mr. Arasteh and Matthew for the comments.

I have made some changes to the document based on Matthew's comment and have accepted the useful changes Mr. Arasteh added to the document. I have tried to polish the document so had to make some minor changes and strike out one of the sentences that was changed. I hope that is ok. This document will be sent to the CCWG today.

Best

Farzaneh

On 21 October 2016 at 21:51, Kavouss Arasteh <kavouss.arasteh at gmail.com<mailto:kavouss.arasteh at gmail.com>> wrote:
Dear All,
Pls find attached my comment in redlines
Regards
Arasteh

2016-10-21 17:25 GMT+02:00 matthew shears <mshears at cdt.org<mailto:mshears at cdt.org>>:

Hi

In (1) I would bullet the tracks and use the actual track descriptions from WS2 just for clarity's sake.

Matthew

On 21/10/2016 15:56, farzaneh badii wrote:
Dear all,


Please find attached the preliminary progress report of the WS 2 group on SO/AC Accountability. Please send your comments, edits and responses within 48 hours as we need to finalize the report by Monday 24th October the latest.

As a supplemental report, we might attach our work in progress document available here : https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WTRZZJ9B3Q6BHP6AlDHmoiep8NeshNpomBNM4bBXYpA/edit


Best regards,

Cheryl, Farzi, Steve

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