[Ws2-so_ac] Updated draft 1.1 report for our call on 23-Feb

[Seun Ojedeji]

Hello Steve,

I am unable to make comments on the Gdocs as it seem to be in "view only"
mode?

Regards

On Wed, Feb 22, 2017 at 3:48 AM, Steve DelBianco <sdelbianco at netchoice.org>
wrote:

> Thanks for the active reviewing that many of you have already done.
>
> In the attached docs/PDF, I incorporated Google doc edits and comments
> provided thus far, by:
>
> Tom Dale (GAC)
> Joan Kerr (NPOC)
> Juan Manuel Rojas (NPOC)
> Poncelelt Ileleji (NPOC)
> Anonymous
>
>
> I also added review elements from the questionnaire response completed by
> the Registries Stakeholder Group (RySG).   Our WG somehow did not receive
> the RySG response when it was circulated to staff on 19-Jan.   (the RySG
> response is now posted on our wiki
> <https://community.icann.org/pages/viewpage.action?pageId=59643284>)
>
> Here are ways you can continue to suggest edits:
> 1. Reply all with an email offering comments.
> 2. Mark-up the attached Word Doc Draft 1.1 (use track changes, please).
> 3. Suggest comments on the Google Doc Draft 1.1 (clean) at
> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xDVHUW6p5bS_
> Zedq61fBlH7UFZ4LH6lmp462iaVI2Pw/edit?usp=sharing
>
>
>
>
> From: Steve DelBianco <sdelbianco at netchoice.org>
> Date: Monday, February 20, 2017 at 2:47 PM
> To: "ws2-so_ac at icann.org" <ws2-so_ac at icann.org>
> Cc: Brenda Brewer <mssi-secretariat at icann.org>, farzaneh badii <
> farzaneh.badii at gmail.com>, Cheryl Langdon-Orr <langdonorr at gmail.com>
> Subject: Draft report for review before next call on 23-Feb
>
> As promised on our last call, we consolidated all 3 tracks of our work
> into a single DRAFT report (PDF and MSWord attached).
>
> We added links to the home page and charter of the 3 groups who did not
> respond to our questionnaire (RrSG, RySG and NPOC)
>
> Please review and offer edits before our upcoming working group call on
> 23-Feb @ 05:00 UTC.
>
> Here are some ways you can suggest edits before our call:
>
> 1. Reply all with an email offering comments.
> 2. Mark-up the attached Word Doc (use track changes, please).
> 3. Suggest comments on the Google Doc version at https://docs.google.com/
> document/d/14y1GB9vGhsWXVXtdtZmAjCWwzKVfrLfwDQYksrkDD94/edit?usp=sharing
>
> On our call we can do first reading for our working group, and discuss
> edits and additions for our second reading a week later.   If we can make
> that schedule work, we can offer our report to the CCWG Plenary at our
> face-to-face meeting at Copenhagen on 10-March.
>
> Best,
> Steve, Cheryl, and Farzi
>
>
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