<div dir="ltr"><div>Dear All,</div><div>Pls find attached my comment in redlines</div><div>Regards</div><div>Arasteh</div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">2016-10-21 17:25 GMT+02:00 matthew shears <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:mshears@cdt.org" target="_blank">mshears@cdt.org</a>></span>:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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<p>Hi</p>
<p>In (1) I would bullet the tracks and use the actual track
descriptions from WS2 just for clarity's sake.<br>
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<div class="m_5420069253287094650moz-cite-prefix">On 21/10/2016 15:56, farzaneh badii
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<div dir="ltr">Dear all,
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<div>Please find attached the preliminary progress report of the
WS 2 group on SO/AC Accountability. Please send your comments,
edits and responses within 48 hours as we need to finalize the
report by Monday 24th October the latest.</div>
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<div>As a supplemental report, we might attach our work in
progress document available here : <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WTRZZJ9B3Q6BHP6AlDHmoiep8NeshNpomBNM4bBXYpA/edit" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/<wbr>document/d/<wbr>1WTRZZJ9B3Q6BHP6AlDHmoiep8Nesh<wbr>NpomBNM4bBXYpA/edit</a></div>
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<div>Cheryl, Farzi, Steve</div>
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