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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Dear Farzaneh,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> ws2-so_ac-bounces@icann.org [mailto:ws2-so_ac-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>farzaneh badii<br>
<b>Sent:</b> 24 October 2016 14:07<br>
<b>To:</b> Kavouss Arasteh<br>
<b>Cc:</b> ws2-so_ac@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Ws2-so_ac] WS 2 SO/AC Accountability progress report<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Thank you, Mr. Arasteh and Matthew for the comments. <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I have made some changes to the document based on Matthew's comment and have accepted the useful changes Mr. Arasteh added to the document. I have tried to polish the document so had to make some minor changes and strike out one of the
sentences that was changed. I hope that is ok. This document will be sent to the CCWG today.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Farzaneh <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On 21 October 2016 at 21:51, Kavouss Arasteh <<a href="mailto:kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com" target="_blank">kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">2016-10-21 17:25 GMT+02:00 matthew shears <<a href="mailto:mshears@cdt.org" target="_blank">mshears@cdt.org</a>>:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p>In (1) I would bullet the tracks and use the actual track descriptions from WS2 just for clarity's sake.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p>Matthew<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On 21/10/2016 15:56, farzaneh badii wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Please find attached the preliminary progress report of the WS 2 group on SO/AC Accountability. Please send your comments, edits and responses within 48 hours as we need to finalize the report by Monday 24th October the latest.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">As a supplemental report, we might attach our work in progress document available here : <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WTRZZJ9B3Q6BHP6AlDHmoiep8NeshNpomBNM4bBXYpA/edit" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WTRZZJ9B3Q6BHP6AlDHmoiep8NeshNpomBNM4bBXYpA/edit</a><o:p></o:p></p>
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