<div dir="ltr">Thanks for that, Chris. Sorry for the delay in responding, I'm just travelling at the moment.<div><br></div><div><div>I am attaching a revised version with the DIDP edits as well. The only changes from my end have been regarding the monitoring and evaluation role and the review of decisions to invoke the "frivolous and vexatious" exception, both of which are now recommended to be delegated to either the Ombudsman <b><u>OR</u></b> the Complaints Officer. <div><div><br></div><div>I had been holding off on circulating because Ed (and possibly Alberto...) had objected to that change, so I wanted to wait to see if anyone else wanted to weigh in after my response as to why I thought the lack of independence of the Complaints Officer wasn't disqualifying. If there are further thoughts on that matter, please don't hesitate to make yourself heard, as we can still reverse course if Ed's position resonates. </div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div><br></div></div></div></div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Fri, Jan 27, 2017 at 3:48 AM, Wilson, Christopher <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:cwilson@21cf.com" target="_blank">cwilson@21cf.com</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Thanks, David. Michael can add more, if needed, but the latest draft, which consisted of edits made by me, was sent to all by me on Jan. 12. My edits were made
in regard to feedback given on the plenary call with respect to the “interactions with governments” recommendation. Also on January 12, Michael provided a response to the concerns raised on the plenary call. I don’t believe he made additional substantive
edits. <u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1f497d">My suggestion to the subgroup is to review those Jan. 12 emails first and foremost. Additionally, Michael sent an email to the subgroup on Jan. 22 noting that
some minor tweaking to the draft will occur re the role of the Ombudsman, in response to feedback he received from his engagement with the Ombudsman subgroup rapporteur and the current Ombudsman. He also responded via email to Ed on Jan. 24.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1f497d">I believe at this point the subgroup should review the draft sent on Jan. 12 and Michael’s responses from Jan. 22 and Jan. 24. I think the goal would be to get
plenary 2<sup>nd</sup> reading on the next plenary call on Feb. 8. <u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Hope this provides some clarity.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"> <a href="mailto:ws2-transparency-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">ws2-transparency-bounces@<wbr>icann.org</a> [mailto:<a href="mailto:ws2-transparency-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">ws2-transparency-<wbr>bounces@icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>McAuley, David<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, January 25, 2017 12:34 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href="mailto:ws2-transparency@icann.org" target="_blank">ws2-transparency@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Ws2-transparency] Recommendation from Göran<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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</span><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Thanks Thomas,<u></u><u></u></span></p><div><div class="h5">
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Michael and Chris, I have two questions, prompted in part by this note from Thomas and Ed Morris’s e-mail this past weekend about the role of the Complaints Officer.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">The questions are these: will there be another draft report? (I thought some wordsmithing might follow the plenary meeting), and how will we assess when we have reached consensus
on a final report? <u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Through a couple of wordsmithing cycles some of my concerns have been addressed. But when I read the final report (or reread the last one if that is final) I could have a remaining
concern or two. <u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">And so I am asking about determining consensus for submitting a final report to the plenary.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Thank you,<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<a href="mailto:ws2-transparency-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">ws2-transparency-bounces@<wbr>icann.org</a> [<a href="mailto:ws2-transparency-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">mailto:ws2-transparency-<wbr>bounces@icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Thomas Rickert<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, January 25, 2017 11:57 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href="mailto:ws2-transparency@icann.org" target="_blank">ws2-transparency@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [EXTERNAL] [Ws2-transparency] Recommendation from Göran<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Dear colleagues,<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Göran asked us co-chairs to convey to your group that you might wish to take a closer look at the report he issued, which can be found in the President’s corner of the website. He says a lot of things the CCWG is asking for in terms of
transparency can be found there.<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Best,<u></u><u></u></p>
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