[CCWG-ACCT] Updated Executive Summary

[Grace Abuhamad]

Hi Sebastien, 

Thank you for your edits to the Executive Summary. These edits have been
incorporated in the final freeze version (attached).

Best, 
Grace

From:  Sébastien Bachollet <sebastien at bachollet.com>
Date:  Friday, July 31, 2015 at 11:23 AM
To:  Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad at icann.org>
Cc:  Accountability Cross Community
<accountability-cross-community at icann.org>
Subject:  Re: [CCWG-ACCT] Updated Executive Summary

Please find attached a redline version including some proposal to enhance
the Executive Summary.
All the best
Sébastien Bachollet
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Blog: http://sebastien.bachollet.fr/
Mail: Sébastien Bachollet <sebastien at bachollet.com>

De : <accountability-cross-community-bounces at icann.org> on behalf of Grace
Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad at icann.org>
Date : jeudi 30 juillet 2015 18:16
À : Robin Gross <robin at ipjustice.org>
Cc : Accountability Cross Community
<accountability-cross-community at icann.org>
Objet : Re: [CCWG-ACCT] Updated Executive Summary

> My apologies Robin. Your edit was indeed noted in the meeting notes. Here is
> the updated version with your edit included.
> 
> From: Robin Gross <robin at ipjustice.org>
> Date: Thursday, July 30, 2015 at 12:09 PM
> To: Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad at icann.org>
> Cc: Accountability Cross Community <accountability-cross-community at icann.org>
> Subject: Re: [CCWG-ACCT] Updated Executive Summary
> 
> This document still says a "culture of accountability" instead of
> "transparency" for WS2, as was pointed out in the call this morning.  WS2 is
> instituting at "culture of transparency" at ICANN.  Everything we do falls
> under "accountability" - WS2 addresses how "transparency" will help ICANN to
> be more accountable.
> 
> Thanks,
> Robin
> 
> 
> On Jul 30, 2015, at 8:56 AM, Grace Abuhamad wrote:
> 
>> Dear all, 
>> 
>> Sharing on Mathieu¹s behalf the updated Executive Summary:
>> 
>> Updates include:
>> - WS1 definition included
>> - language to clarify that powers are escalation path
>> - Added mention of IFR challenge (Sabine's point)
>> - removed () around Human rights WS2 issue.
>> 
>> Best, 
>> Grace
>> <Executive Summary_3007.docx><Executive Summary_3007_redline.docx><Executive
>> Summary_3007_redline.pdf><Executive
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