[CCWG-ACCT] COMMENTS/EDITS by 17:00 UTC today - Draft statement - Frankfurt Meeting

[Julia Katja Wolman]

Dear Co-Chairs, Colleagues,

Firstly, I would like to thank you all for a constructive and productive meeting and for the positive spirit, in which it was held.

Secondly, thank you for circulating the Draft Statement so quickly. I have a few comments to the Draft Statement (see also attached doc.):

·         Page 1, 2nd par.: In the absence of yet having a formal agreement on the different (revised) documents, I propose to change "(... ),including agreement on" to "(...),including initial agreement on" (which is already used in the Draft Statement on page 2, 3rd para.

·         Propose to include time/date for the scheduled sessions in Singapore.

·         Link to/attachment of all referenced and revised documents mentioned in the Draft Statement.


Best regards,

Julia



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Fra: accountability-cross-community-bounces at icann.org [mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces at icann.org] På vegne af Alice Jansen
Sendt: 22. januar 2015 14:08
Til: accountability-cross-community at icann.org
Emne: [CCWG-ACCT] COMMENTS/EDITS by 17:00 UTC today - Draft statement - Frankfurt Meeting

Dear all,
On behalf of the CCWG-Accountability Co-Chairs, please find attached a draft statement (Frankfurt - 19-20 January) for your consideration.
Please flag any edits and/or comments you may have by today - Thursday, 22 January - 17:00 UTC.
Thank you
Best regards
Alice
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