[CCWG-ACCT] V10 DRAFT for your review by 2 May at 01:00 UTC

Sat May 2 23:16:57 UTC 2015

Sébastien,

Je n’ai pas reçu la version V10. Tu peux me l’envoyer s’il te plait ?

Bonne nuit

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Sébastien Bachollet
Envoyé : vendredi 1 mai 2015 18:54
À : Grace Abuhamad; Accountability Cross Community
Objet : Re: [CCWG-ACCT] V10 DRAFT for your review by 2 May at 01:00 UTC
Importance : Haute

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Thanks for this version of the document.

I am not sure I will have time to read it all before the dead line :(

I send my first remarks and suggestion reading the
CCWG-Draft-Proposal-V10-redline.docx

Maybe you have already discuss some of those issues. Then apologies.

P4 - §3 –  I would highlight the following

These recommendations do not reflect CCWG-Accountability consensus at this
point.    

P6 - §16 – The CCWG-Accountability proposes the creation of a formal
membership body called the “SO/AC Membership” model.

I suggest to add «  it is the group’s reference option »   

P6 - §16 – The CCWG-Accountability proposes (it is the group’s reference
option) the creation of a formal membership body called the “SO/AC
Membership” model.

As it is in the same §16 in item 4 about the community powers

P9 - §32 – (and following) - 
 accountability involves the processes whereby
ICANN answers to its stakeholders for the impacts on those stakeholders of
ICANN’s decisions, policies and programs. 

I have since a long time a trouble with the use of ICANN in this (and other)
sentence. ICANN is all of us (Board/Staff/SO/AC
 therefore how ICANN can
answer to itself?

Are we thinking about one part of ICANN talking/answering to another part of
ICANN?

P19 - §58 – Not sure it is a good idea to have the ICANN bylaws referencing
to another document.

P23 - §97 – Seeking and supporting broad, informed participation reflecting
the functional, geographic, and cultural diversity of the Internet and its
usage at all levels of policy

Thanks for consideration.

All the best

Sébastien Bachollet

+33 6 07 66 89 33

Blog: http://sebastien.bachollet.fr/

Mail: Sébastien Bachollet <sebastien at bachollet.com>

De : Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad at icann.org>
Date : vendredi 1 mai 2015 03:23
À : Accountability Cross Community
<accountability-cross-community at icann.org>
Objet : [CCWG-ACCT] V10 DRAFT for your review by 2 May at 01:00 UTC

Dear all, 

Here attached is the CCWG-Accountability Draft Report V10. I have attached a
redline and a clean version (in Word and PDF). 

Version 10 incorporates the following: 

*	Changes from the CCWG-Accountability call on Thursday 30 April at
05:00 UTC
*	Edits from legal counsel (Sidley and Adler)
*	Approval from the CWG-Stewardship Chairs/Client Committee regarding
incorporation of CWG-Stewardship recommendations
*	Edits from Chairs and Rapporteurs 

Please send your edits, comments, etc to the mailing list by Saturday 2 May
01:00 UTC (24h from now). Staff will incorporate the edits over the weekend
so as to release a final version for Public Comment on Monday, 4 May. If
possible, edits are appreciate in track changes in the clean version so that
they are clearly marked and visible. There will be professional formatting
and copyediting done before publication, so we suggest that your time my be
best spent by focusing on the substance-related edits. 

Also, please remember to submit your feedback regarding the XPlane graphics
by Saturday as well. Adam will send a reminder re: XPlane. 

Almost there!

— Grace 

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