[CCWG-ACCT] Suggested edit from Chuck in CWG-Stewardship

Greg Shatan gregshatanipc at gmail.com
Fri Feb 5 18:14:27 UTC 2016


I support this change, both in my capacity as a CWG member and in my
capacity as a CCWG participant.

Greg

On Fri, Feb 5, 2016 at 1:05 PM, Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad at icann.org>
wrote:

> Dear all,
>
> Since the IRP is part of the CWG dependencies on the CCWG work, I had
> forwarded the IRP document for CWG review as well. So far, we have received
> one friendly edit (below) from Chuck Gomes that I am passing along before
> the deadline for comments.
>
> Thank you,
> Grace
>
>
> From: "Gomes, Chuck" <cgomes at verisign.com>
> Date: Friday, February 5, 2016 at 11:40 AM
> To: Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad at icann.org>, "cwg-stewardship at icann.org"
> <cwg-stewardship at icann.org>
> Subject: RE: CCWG Update
>
> In the 2nd Reading Conclusions, item 1.a.iii.1 says: “ICANN should
> consider modification of Registry Agreements with gTLD Operators to expand
> scope of arbitration available thereunder to cover PTI service complaints.”
> It seems to me that the wording should be stronger: “ICANN must modify
> Registry Agreements with gTLD Operators to expand scope of arbitration
> available thereunder to cover PTI service complaints.”
>
>
>
> I think the same change should be made later in the document when this
> sentence occurs again.
>
>
>
> Chuck
>
>
>
> *From:* cwg-stewardship-bounces at icann.org [
> mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces at icann.org
> <cwg-stewardship-bounces at icann.org>] *On Behalf Of *Grace Abuhamad
> *Sent:* Thursday, February 04, 2016 5:18 PM
> *To:* cwg-stewardship at icann.org
> *Subject:* [CWG-Stewardship] CCWG Update
>
>
>
> Dear CWG-Stewardship,
>
>
>
> Today the CCWG-Accountability published its latest version of its
> recommendations on the IRP. Please see attached for text, and provide any
> comments you may have. As noted in the email below:
>
>    - This version has been generated from the conclusion of the third
>    reading document and includes the modification required by the CWG for PTI
>    and has been reviewed by Becky Burr.
>    - As such you will find attached 3 versions, Word and PDF red lined as
>    well as a clean PDF version given the markups are extensive in some
>    sections.
>    - Once this legal review is completed *(48 hours -  *
>
> *​20:00 ​*
>
> * UTC Saturday)*, results of the review will be published on this list, a
> final version will be generated and posted for final CCWG comments.​
>
> I have highlighted the deadline above since it is important for the CWG to
> follow this timeline as well. Considering the time pressure that the CCWG
> is under, we should do our best to not delay them further. If you are able
> to post on the CCWG list directly, that would be more efficient for them.
> Otherwise, I will work with the co-Chairs to transfer the information in
> time.
>
>
>
> I have also attached two documents that help track the status of the
> CCWG-Accountability work overall.
>
>
>
> Best,
>
> Grace
>
>
>
> *From: *<acct-staff-bounces at icann.org> on behalf of Bernard Turcotte <
> turcotte.bernard at gmail.com>
> *Date: *Thursday, February 4, 2016 at 2:45 PM
> *To: *Accountability Cross Community <
> accountability-cross-community at icann.org>, ACCT-Staff <
> acct-staff at icann.org>
> *Subject: *[Acct-Staff] CCWG - Recommendation 7 - Final draft version for
> legal review
>
>
>
>>
> All,
>
>
>
> ​Per the request of the co-chairs we are publishing the final draft
> version of  Annex 7  for legal review.
>
>
>
> This version has been generated from the conclusion of the third reading
> document and includes the modification required by the CWG for PTI and has
> been reviewed by Becky Burr.
>
>
>
> As such you will find attached 3 versions, Word and PDF red lined as well
> as a clean PDF version given the markups are extensive in some sections.
>
>
>
> Once this legal review is completed (48 hours -
>
> ​20:00 ​
>
> UTC Saturday), results of the review will be published on this list, a
> final version will be generated and posted for final CCWG comments.​
>
>
>
> ​Thank You.
>
>
>
> B​ernard Turcotte
>
> ICANN Staff Support for CCWG
>
>
>
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