[Accountability-dt] Last Call for Comments!

[Izumi Okutani]

> Almost 16:00 UTC -- last call for comments on the document. Izumi did you
> wish to resubmit as David suggested?

Yes, and apologies for late response as it was already the weekend here
by the time I got the responsed + public holiday today. Athina has just
sent the ones which reflected this (without adding anything additional).

Regards,
Izumi


(2014/11/01 0:57), Grace Abuhamad wrote:
> Hi all,
> Almost 16:00 UTC -- last call for comments on the document. Izumi did you
> wish to resubmit as David suggested?
> I will compile Bart and Matthew's comments into one document and send you
> all a redline and clean version to circulate over the weekend.
> Best,
> Grace
> 
> On 10/31/14 7:50 AM, "Fares, David" <DFares at 21cf.com> wrote:
> 
>> Izumi,
>>
>> It is very difficult to track your edits.  Would it be possible to
>> incorporate them into the clean version?
>>
>> Thanks,
>> Dvid
>>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: accountability-dt-bounces at icann.org
>> [mailto:accountability-dt-bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of Izumi Okutani
>> Sent: 31 October 2014 09:54
>> To: Grace Abuhamad; accountability-dt at icann.org
>> Subject: Re: [Accountability-dt] Notes from the Meeting and Next Steps
>>
>> Dear DT Team,
>>
>>
>> Many thanks to Grace for compiling the edits.
>>
>> It's looking good overall. Attached are small additional edits by Athina
>> Fragkouli and myself.
>>
>> As a minor observation:
>>   - Our edits are based on the redline version, and we observed some
>>     differences between clean and redline versions.
>>   - We weren't sure whether this was intentional, e.g, waiting for
>>     additional inputs, but commented where we noticed.
>>
>>
>> Regards,
>> Izumi
>>
>>
>> (2014/10/31 10:00), Grace Abuhamad wrote:
>>> Hello all,
>>>
>>> Following up with the Charter attached. There is a redline version and
>>> a clean version with incorporated notes from the call earlier today.
>>> The "clean" version is of course easier to work with, and Thomas has
>>> already provided his text.
>>>
>>> Please submit your comments and/or edits by Friday, 31 October at 16:00
>>> UTC.
>>> I'll then consolidate everything and provide you with a charter to
>>> circulate to your respective communities over the weekend.
>>>
>>> Outstanding Action Items:
>>> Action: Keith to provide questions asap no later then Monday
>>> Action: Bart to provide input about final recommendations
>>>
>>> Best,
>>> Grace
>>>
>>>
>>> From:  Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad at icann.org>
>>> Date:  Thursday, October 30, 2014 11:49 AM
>>> To:  "accountability-dt at icann.org" <accountability-dt at icann.org>
>>> Subject:  [Accountability-dt] Notes from the Meeting and Next Steps
>>>
>>> Hi all,
>>>
>>> Attached are the notes from today's meeting. I will send the charter
>>> soon.
>>> Below, I've listed the action items and next steps:
>>>
>>> Actions:
>>>
>>> Action: Propose language grey area issue (Avri)   COMPLETE
>>> Action: Keith to provide questions asap no later then Monday
>>> Action: Reshuffle items of work (from option1 and option 2) into sub
>>> section then giving the CCWG a non-exhaustive list for their work
>>> [Thomas with help from Grace]
>>> Action: Bart to provide input about final recommendations
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Next Steps:
>>>
>>> - Staff to consolidate notes, action items by today before midnight
>>> UTC
>>> - Bart, Thomas, Keith have drafting comments to supply
>>> - Take comments from DT until tomorrow 16:00 UTC
>>> - Staff will re-send clean version to group to share with respective
>>> communities over the weekend
>>> - Call on Monday at 11:00 UTC
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
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