<div dir="ltr">Dear Maureen,<div><br></div><div>First congratulations on creating this educational module. It must have been a lot of work for you. This is really helpful. I also liked that the module is flexible, allowing users to go through it at their own pace.</div><div><br></div><div>I took some time to revert as I went through the modules.</div><div><br></div><div>While the initial questions can be reduced, some text reduced and pictures used as some have previously suggested, observed some places where there were some typos</div><div><br></div><div>1. In the session PIR and its DNS Abuse plan, in the first slide PIR is mentioned as P.I.R. . Perhaps that could be corrected.</div><div><br>2. In Section "the creation of the ......" second question there is a typos DNS has been mentioned as DNs. <br><br>3. In the educational resource DNSAI is written as D.N.S.A.I, PIR as P.I.R<br><br>4. In Welcome session APRALO is mentioned as A.P. RALO </div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div>Regards,</div><div><br></div><div>Amrita<br><br></div><div><br></div></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Mon, 13 Feb 2023 at 13:48, Maureen Hilyard via Apralo-policy <<a href="mailto:apralo-policy@icann.org">apralo-policy@icann.org</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div dir="auto">Good call Naveed. <div dir="auto"><br></div><div dir="auto">Perhaps a slight rewording of the introduction to incorporate learning outcomes. However keeping a record of user assessments are not possible if the course is only accessible from a web server rather than an LMS platform. <div dir="auto"><br></div><div dir="auto">But I guess we could prepare for a possible eventuality that ICANN may offer our O&E WG an LMS space for courses that our members may prepare on different policy issues. I'd be happy to help them with this.</div><div dir="auto"><br></div><div dir="auto">M</div></div></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Sun, 12 Feb 2023, 10:08 pm Naveed Bin Rais, <<a href="mailto:naveedbinrais@gmail.com" target="_blank">naveedbinrais@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr">Hi Maureen,<div><br></div><div>Great initiative, and the course is useful. I agree with most of the comments provided and I shall provide my input later as well. </div><div><br></div><div>Just a quick note, it might be useful to add learning outcomes of the course and intended audience (may say everyone as intended audience) at the landing page in the form of bullet points. </div><div><br></div><div>Regards,</div><div><br></div></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Sun, Feb 12, 2023 at 5:27 PM Maureen Hilyard via Apralo-policy <<a href="mailto:apralo-policy@icann.org" rel="noreferrer" target="_blank">apralo-policy@icann.org</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr">Hi Shreedeep and the AP Policy Forum members<div><br></div><div>After my presentation to the Policy Forum on the DNS Abuse Institute (and my ongoing interest in building useful resources related to policy issues) I wondered how I might promote the topic more (as a member of its Advisory Council).</div><div><br></div><div>During the Xmas holidays, I had picked up a little video programme and was going to make a short video and then I decided to purchase Articulate, an online course production programme. I'd be really interested in hearing from anyone who uses Articulate already! </div><div><br></div><div>But the DNS Abuse Institute topic was easy for me as my first topic because it is still part of my ICANN work and after several weeks of effort, I have finally produced my first online course using Articulate. Ive tried to cover different perspectives and I also hope it is manageable for non-English speakers in our community. </div><div><br></div><div>Now I need to have it critiqued. And if anyone is willing to be a volunteer, I have attached a temporary link to Articulate so that people can trial and comment on the course, and send these back to me so I can make any changs. <u>The link below only lasts for a week </u>so I need feedback asap on anything - proofreading; too much or too little text; too many or too few pics; too many topics, etc. </div><div><br></div><div>My purpose was to grow some understanding about DNS Abuse and the Institute among our AP community. It is a narrow focus but it was an opportunity to use Articulate's features and it was fun putting it together.. But my ongoing problem will be locating an LMS if we want to measure its use or just finding somewhere to be able to access the course more permanently. </div><div><br></div><div>The link is to the draft is: </div><a href="https://rise.articulate.com/share/wAj0HHewISQD0ukQ8j9PjqpunHgC39Vk" rel="noreferrer" target="_blank">https://rise.articulate.com/share/wAj0HHewISQD0ukQ8j9PjqpunHgC39Vk</a><div>Password: DNSAI<br></div><div><div><br></div><div>I hope this works and would really appreciate some feedback if you have the time within the next week or so.<br></div><div><br></div><div>Maureen<br></div><div><br clear="all"><div><br></div>-- <br><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><img width="96" height="96" src="https://ci3.googleusercontent.com/mail-sig/AIorK4xnFjHTaFRpG3h7tOgayHbqYNZN3UdxQjUYRyqnVD0OcfsYReG0urX2Y1WOQyQ7_ZWcY0-tWk4"><div><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;color:rgb(91,155,213)">Maureen Hilyard</span></b>
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