<div dir="auto">Hey there... Great work Maureen... Like the format, pace and content overall, *but* I (obviously) did it in EN and I am an avid and speed reader, not sure 1- how the text heavy sections will work either for effective translations and for the less literate in any language... Yes I know the material was not *all* required to complete the knowledge checks, but if the material is worthy of full inclusion, then ot should be optimally accessible... That said nothing wrong with more audio running a sort 'read along' opportunity and I suspect accurate interpretation, will smooth over some translation glitches as well. 2 - if some of the knowledge checks and definately the pre test questions will need a cautionary review to avoid "forced" errors again due to literacy and language of choice for the course <div dir="auto"><br></div><div dir="auto">Ok I did it all on my Pixel 7 mobile with no glitches or hitches and I didn't open it in browser or as desktop site to do so, just right from the link... So all great news there... </div><div dir="auto"><br></div><div dir="auto">I agree with others, I would be reducing any pretest, and in an introductory rather than follow on style of course, I question the utility of pretesting at all ... you could perhaps use a *few* "what do you expect out of this". Or "what do you believe..." style questions and soften the "incorrect" language etc., But ... Also on the pretest I deliberately (and that wasn't as easy as you might think) got all the questions incorrect, and I could just continue through the course, so I wondered if the final Knowledge Check might be a duplication of pretesting and I could be shown the improvement but nope... So again I wonder about the utility... If it's not a gate or base why use it... </div><div dir="auto"><br></div><div dir="auto">In lesson 5 Knowledge Check question 3, is a duplicate from previous lesson, if deliberately done ok... but ... Also question 9 I believe the right answer is marked incorrect and so we may be promulgate 'fake news' 😉</div><div dir="auto"><br></div><div dir="auto">In Section 10 question 1 I always suggest making a negative question easier to note, so I would *bold* or Capitalise *NOT* in the question.</div><div dir="auto"><br></div><div dir="auto">Also I also did an all questions incorrect so 0 score in the final Knowledge Check and it didn't require me to retake until I did pass so I would change that setting, (and yes I had to do a 100% retake anyway to make myself feel better 😋)</div><div dir="auto"><br></div><div dir="auto">Hey you asked for feedback 😃😘🫂😃</div><div dir="auto"><br></div><div dir="auto">But seriously great job and an excellent 👍👌👍 draft of what I trust will be a very well received course and valued resource...</div><div dir="auto"> </div></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Mon, 13 Feb 2023, 03:56 Maureen Hilyard via Apralo-policy, <<a href="mailto:apralo-policy@icann.org">apralo-policy@icann.org</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir="auto">Hi Namra <div dir="auto"><br></div><div dir="auto">I like the scenario situation too. Thank you for the suggestion. I know it is offered in Storyline360 which is another course format in Articulate but I'll see if it is also possible in Rise360 which is what I used for this course (because it looked easier for a first-timer 😊).</div><div dir="auto"><br></div><div dir="auto">Thank you for getting back to me so quickly.</div><div dir="auto"><br></div><div dir="auto">Articulate also ensures that their courses are accessible from all sorts of devices too so it would be good to know if it was also appropriate on your mobile as on a laptop. </div><div dir="auto"><br></div><div dir="auto">M<br><div dir="auto"><br></div><div dir="auto">.</div></div></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Sun, 12 Feb 2023, 6:16 am Namra Naseer, <<a href="mailto:fr.namra@gmail.com" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">fr.namra@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr"><span style="font-family:Söhne,ui-sans-serif,system-ui,-apple-system,"Segoe UI",Roboto,Ubuntu,Cantarell,"Noto Sans",sans-serif,"Helvetica Neue",Arial,"Apple Color Emoji","Segoe UI Emoji","Segoe UI Symbol","Noto Color Emoji";white-space:pre-wrap;background-color:rgb(255,255,255)"><font color="#000000">Hello Maureen. Having gone through the course, I believe it is well-paced from a learner's perspective. The interactive videos are of high quality. I have a suggestion that perhaps including some scenarios of DNS abuse and having the learners choose appropriate responses can be added as an engagement activity/quiz. </font></span><br></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Sun, Feb 12, 2023 at 7:14 PM Maureen Hilyard via Apralo-policy <<a href="mailto:apralo-policy@icann.org" rel="noreferrer noreferrer" target="_blank">apralo-policy@icann.org</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-style:solid;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div dir="auto">Thank you so much Ali.<div dir="auto"><br></div><div dir="auto">The pretest? Yes.. I can reduce that.</div><div dir="auto">I made that 10 questions because the post-test was 10 questions.. but in hindsight it is better for them to have a quick test and then get going with the course.</div><div dir="auto"><br></div><div dir="auto">That's great.. and thanks for getting back to me so quickly too.. awesome team. </div><div dir="auto"><br></div><div dir="auto">M</div></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Sun, 12 Feb 2023, 3:59 am Ali Almeshal, <<a href="mailto:dralialmeshal@gmail.com" rel="noreferrer noreferrer" target="_blank">dralialmeshal@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-style:solid;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div dir="auto">Thanks Maureen,<div> I have navigate through the course quickly and founded to be very much interesting for anyone willing to learn about DNS abuse. The way it is presented is attractive. Just a note for the first quiz I believe it is a bit long if you can shorten it will be better.</div><div>Regards <br><br><div dir="ltr">Sent from my iPhone</div><div dir="ltr"><br><blockquote type="cite">On 12 Feb 2023, at 4:27 PM, Maureen Hilyard via Apralo-policy <<a href="mailto:apralo-policy@icann.org" rel="noreferrer noreferrer noreferrer" target="_blank">apralo-policy@icann.org</a>> wrote:<br><br></blockquote></div><blockquote type="cite"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr">Hi Shreedeep and the AP Policy Forum members<div><br></div><div>After my presentation to the Policy Forum on the DNS Abuse Institute (and my ongoing interest in building useful resources related to policy issues) I wondered how I might promote the topic more (as a member of its Advisory Council).</div><div><br></div><div>During the Xmas holidays, I had picked up a little video programme and was going to make a short video and then I decided to purchase Articulate, an online course production programme. I'd be really interested in hearing from anyone who uses Articulate already! </div><div><br></div><div>But the DNS Abuse Institute topic was easy for me as my first topic because it is still part of my ICANN work and after several weeks of effort, I have finally produced my first online course using Articulate. Ive tried to cover different perspectives and I also hope it is manageable for non-English speakers in our community. </div><div><br></div><div>Now I need to have it critiqued. And if anyone is willing to be a volunteer, I have attached a temporary link to Articulate so that people can trial and comment on the course, and send these back to me so I can make any changs. <u>The link below only lasts for a week </u>so I need feedback asap on anything - proofreading; too much or too little text; too many or too few pics; too many topics, etc. </div><div><br></div><div>My purpose was to grow some understanding about DNS Abuse and the Institute among our AP community. It is a narrow focus but it was an opportunity to use Articulate's features and it was fun putting it together.. But my ongoing problem will be locating an LMS if we want to measure its use or just finding somewhere to be able to access the course more permanently. </div><div><br></div><div>The link is to the draft is: </div><a href="https://rise.articulate.com/share/wAj0HHewISQD0ukQ8j9PjqpunHgC39Vk" rel="noreferrer noreferrer noreferrer" target="_blank">https://rise.articulate.com/share/wAj0HHewISQD0ukQ8j9PjqpunHgC39Vk</a><div>Password: DNSAI<br></div><div><div><br></div><div>I hope this works and would really appreciate some feedback if you have the time within the next week or so.<br></div><div><br></div><div>Maureen<br></div><div><br clear="all"><div><br></div>-- <br><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><img width="96" height="96" src="https://ci3.googleusercontent.com/mail-sig/AIorK4xnFjHTaFRpG3h7tOgayHbqYNZN3UdxQjUYRyqnVD0OcfsYReG0urX2Y1WOQyQ7_ZWcY0-tWk4"><div><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt;color:rgb(91,155,213)">Maureen Hilyard</span></b>
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