[atrt2] URGENT: Final Draft RFP

Alan Greenberg alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca
Fri Jun 28 21:50:09 UTC 2013


Avri, I will let you do the next revision and am attaching the Word 
document. I don't have the time at the moment.

Alan

At 28/06/2013 04:32 PM, Avri Doria wrote:
>Thanks
>
>avri
>
>On 28 Jun 2013, at 16:23, Larry Strickling wrote:
>
> > I'm fine with your friendly amendment.
> >
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: atrt2-bounces at icann.org [mailto:atrt2-bounces at icann.org] On 
> Behalf Of Avri Doria
> > Sent: Friday, June 28, 2013 4:17 PM
> > To: ATRT2
> > Subject: Re: [atrt2] URGENT: Final Draft RFP
> > Importance: High
> >
> > Hi,
> >
> >
> >
> > On 28 Jun 2013, at 16:03, Larry Strickling wrote:
> >
> >> I propose that language be added to include that concept in the 
> last paragraph of the scope of work as follows:  "benchmark the 
> ICANN PDP process against other relevant multistakeholder 
> processes."  We can add this phrase after the parenthetical (See 
> Annex) in that bullet point.
> >
> > Good addition.
> >
> >> "to what extent the ICANN bylaw process by which the GAC submits 
> advice to the Board prevents or inhibits the participation of the 
> GAC in the PDP and whether the PDP process could be strengthened by 
> encouraging the submission of views and advice from the GAC and 
> governments earlier in the process."
> >
> > I am generally comfortable with this addition, however, in order 
> to not prejudice the question, would it be ok to:
> >
> > substitute "affects positively or negatively" for "prevents or inhibits?"
> >
> > Just to point out the different perspectives, my current 
> analysis, e.g., would be that by opting no to participate in the 
> full process as other stakeholder and then submitting advice at the 
> end of the process, the GAC actually increases its control over the 
> PDP process.  So while I fervently beleive that the process would 
> be strengthened by earlier GAC participation, I do not agree that 
> they are at all inhibited at this point.
> >
> > thanks
> >
> > avri
> >
> >
> >
> >
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