[atrt2] Item 12 - Olivier's Proposed Language

Demi Getschko demi at nic.br
Thu Sep 19 23:40:07 UTC 2013


+1 on Steve's friendly amendment on Olivier proposal...
demi


On 09/19/2013 08:34 PM, Steve Crocker wrote:
> I'm ok with the intent of this.  I'd rather not cast the choices as 
> "accepting or refusing.". There are plenty of situations where the 
> result will be more nuanced.  Let me suggest "explaining what action 
> it took and the rationale for doing so.". Anything similar, 
> particularly if it's written more smoothly, is ok with me.
>
> Thanks,
>
> Steve
>
> Sent from my iPhone
>
> On Sep 19, 2013, at 6:37 PM, Alice Jansen <alice.jansen at icann.org 
> <mailto:alice.jansen at icann.org>> wrote:
>
>> Dear Review Team Members,
>>
>> Please find enclosed Olivier's proposed language:
>>
>> /The Advice of ICANN advisory committees shall be duly taken into 
>> account. The ICANN Board will respond to advice from all advisory 
>> committees explaining its rationale for accepting or refusing their 
>> advice./
>>
>> This relates to item 12. Enclosed you will find a link to Avri's 
>> template: https://community.icann.org/display/ATRT2/Issue+12+Template
>> *
>> *
>> Thanks,
>>
>> Best regards
>>
>> Alice
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