[atrt2] Draft Report - version 1 for review

[Brian Cute]

Thanks for the question Avri.  Given that the draft was circulated later
than planned (due to Review Team editing efforts), the request is for all
edits be sent in by 2100 UTC on Monday.  For purposes of clarity, that
would be 5:00p.m. Monday U.S. EDT.

I would ask that edits be focused on substance and quality of assessment
issues, as opposed to punctuation, grammar etc.  The full document will be
edited for punctuation grammar, spelling etc.  The most important edits
from Review Team members would speak to the quality of the assessments.
 Thank you.

Regards,
Brian

On Sunday, October 6, 2013, Avri Doria wrote:

> Hi,
>
> What's the deadline on this review by the team?  We had talked about it
> being over the weekend.  Is that still the request?
>
> thanks
>
> avri
>
> On 5 Oct 2013, at 20:20, Larisa B. Gurnick wrote:
>
> > Dear Review Team,
> > Attached is the Draft Report for your review.  It consolidates all the
> sections circulated by the Review Team thus far.  This document is also
> available on the wiki.
> >
> > Please note the following:
> > 1.       Brian will add text to create a smooth transition from the
> introduction section to the “templates” or detailed assessment section.
> > 2.       Green highlights reference the wiki rows for ease of reference
> – these will need to be removed before publication.
> > 3.       References to New Recommendations made by ATRT 2 and the
> underlying “templates” or detailed assessments will need to be mapped out
> and numbered more clearly.
> > 4.       I took the liberty to provide several suggested edits in the
> beginning portion of the draft.
> > 5.       Formatting will be standardized later.
> >
> > As you have not specified the method that you would like to follow to
> consolidate edits and revisions, staff suggests that your individual
> comments and edits be made in the attached document in redline mode (i.e.
> track changes) and circulated to all.   Once you reach a consensus on which
> changes should be incorporated in the report, staff will make final
> revisions to the master document.    We will coordinate this with Brian.
> >
> > Please let me, Charla or Alice know if you are experiencing any
> difficulties with this file – it is quite large.
> >
> > Best regards,
> >
> > Larisa B. Gurnick
> > Consultant/Senior Director, Organizational Reviews
> > Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)
> > larisa.gurnick at icann.org
> > 310 383-8995
> >
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