[atrt2] small items on the recommendations in Draft #3 (Clean)
Avri Doria
avri at acm.org
Sun Dec 29 19:12:03 UTC 2013
Hi,
I don't think any of these are contentful, except maybe the last one,
but probably not even that one.
Am now going to try and read through the rest of it for one last time.
avri
page 2
only an assessment of ICANN’s implementation of those Recommendations only
(double 'only')
in 9.5 page 8
don't need both the parenthetical with url and the footnote with the url.
page 10
it believes that it may establish gTLD policy7 in the event that the
(in line footnote number in wrong font.)
page 11
12.4. In order to improve accountability and transparency ICANN’s
Board should base the yearly budgets on a multi-annual strategic plan
and corresponding financial framework [covering e.g. a three-year
period]. This rolling plan and framework should reflect the planned
activities and the corresponding expenses in that multi-annual period.
This should include specified budgets for the ACs and SOs. ICANN’s
[yearly] financial reporting shall ensure that it is possible to track
ICANN’s activities and the related expenses with particular focus on the
implementation of the [yearly] budget. The financial report shall be
subject to public consultation.
(what does it mean that some text is in square brackets. Is it using
diplomatic convention of listing controversial text that way. It is the
only instance in the recommendations of [] so I don't understand their
usage. Should they be parenthesis? )
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