[bylaws-coord] Agreed text for the first sentence of the Mission

Wed Apr 20 15:00:20 UTC 2016

Whatever we go with please note that the comma after ³Domain Name System²
has to go to make sure that the verb (coordinates) applies to the second
clause

J. Beckwith Burr 
Neustar, Inc. / Deputy
General Counsel & Chief Privacy Officer
1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington D.C. 20006
Office: +1.202.533.2932  Mobile: +1.202.352.6367 / neustar.biz
<http://www.neustar.biz>

On 4/20/16, 10:45 AM, "Andrew Sullivan" <ajs at anvilwalrusden.com> wrote:

>I can support that.  (I think it's an improvement.)
>
>A
>
>On Tue, Apr 19, 2016 at 08:58:17PM +0000, Burr, Becky wrote:
>> FYI, we are also discussing this language with Registries and
>>Registrars (thanks Keith)
>> 
>> ³Coordinates the allocation and assignment of names in the root zone of
>>the Domain Name System, and the associated policies governing the
>>allocation and assignment of names by gTLD registry operators and ICANN
>>accredited registrars.²
>> 
>> J. Beckwith Burr
>> Neustar, Inc. / Deputy General Counsel & Chief Privacy Officer
>> 1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington D.C. 20006
>> Office: +1.202.533.2932  Mobile: +1.202.352.6367 /
>>neustar.biz<http://www.neustar.biz>
>> 
>> From: <Burr>, Becky Burr
>><becky.burr at neustar.biz<mailto:becky.burr at neustar.biz>>
>> Date: Tuesday, April 19, 2016 at 3:37 PM
>> To: "Mueller, Milton L" <milton at gatech.edu<mailto:milton at gatech.edu>>,
>>Andrew Sullivan <ajs at anvilwalrusden.com<mailto:ajs at anvilwalrusden.com>>
>> Cc: ICANN-Adler <ICANN at adlercolvin.com<mailto:ICANN at adlercolvin.com>>,
>>Daniel Halloran 
>><daniel.halloran at icann.org<mailto:daniel.halloran at icann.org>>, Sidley
>>ICANN CCWG 
>><sidleyicannccwg at sidley.com<mailto:sidleyicannccwg at sidley.com>>,
>>"bylaws-coord at icann.org<mailto:bylaws-coord at icann.org>"
>><bylaws-coord at icann.org<mailto:bylaws-coord at icann.org>>, Amy Stathos
>><amy.stathos at icann.org<mailto:amy.stathos at icann.org>>
>> Subject: Re: [bylaws-coord] Agreed text for the first sentence of the
>>Mission
>> 
>> Yes, I¹ve put it out for broader comment Milton.  But Keith is the
>>other Registry SG rep on the CCWG, so that is why I checked with him
>>first
>> 
>> J. Beckwith Burr
>> Neustar, Inc./Deputy General Counsel & Chief Privacy Officer
>> 1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington D.C. 20006
>> Office:+1.202.533.2932  Mobile:+1.202.352.6367
>>/neustar.biz<http://www.neustar.biz>
>> 
>> From: <Mueller>, Milton L <milton at gatech.edu<mailto:milton at gatech.edu>>
>> Date: Tuesday, April 19, 2016 at 3:35 PM
>> To: Becky Burr <becky.burr at neustar.biz<mailto:becky.burr at neustar.biz>>,
>>Andrew Sullivan <ajs at anvilwalrusden.com<mailto:ajs at anvilwalrusden.com>>
>> Cc: ICANN-Adler <ICANN at adlercolvin.com<mailto:ICANN at adlercolvin.com>>,
>>Daniel Halloran 
>><daniel.halloran at icann.org<mailto:daniel.halloran at icann.org>>, Sidley
>>ICANN CCWG 
>><sidleyicannccwg at sidley.com<mailto:sidleyicannccwg at sidley.com>>,
>>"bylaws-coord at icann.org<mailto:bylaws-coord at icann.org>"
>><bylaws-coord at icann.org<mailto:bylaws-coord at icann.org>>, Amy Stathos
>><amy.stathos at icann.org<mailto:amy.stathos at icann.org>>
>> Subject: RE: [bylaws-coord] Agreed text for the first sentence of the
>>Mission
>> 
>> Hmmm, not sure that the two largest incumbent registries with
>>established contracts are all that we need to hear from, is there a way
>>to interface with the broader group?
>> 
>> From: Burr, Becky [mailto:Becky.Burr at neustar.biz]
>> Sent: Tuesday, April 19, 2016 2:56 PM
>> To: Mueller, Milton L <milton at gatech.edu<mailto:milton at gatech.edu>>;
>>Andrew Sullivan <ajs at anvilwalrusden.com<mailto:ajs at anvilwalrusden.com>>
>> Cc: ICANN-Adler <ICANN at adlercolvin.com<mailto:ICANN at adlercolvin.com>>;
>>Daniel Halloran 
>><daniel.halloran at icann.org<mailto:daniel.halloran at icann.org>>; Sidley
>>ICANN CCWG 
>><sidleyicannccwg at sidley.com<mailto:sidleyicannccwg at sidley.com>>;
>>bylaws-coord at icann.org<mailto:bylaws-coord at icann.org>; Amy Stathos
>><amy.stathos at icann.org<mailto:amy.stathos at icann.org>>
>> Subject: Re: [bylaws-coord] Agreed text for the first sentence of the
>>Mission
>> 
>> I have chatted with Keith Drazek and we are now comfortable
>> 
>> J. Beckwith Burr
>> Neustar, Inc./Deputy General Counsel & Chief Privacy Officer
>> 1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington D.C. 20006
>> Office:+1.202.533.2932  Mobile:+1.202.352.6367
>>/neustar.biz<http://www.neustar.biz>
>> 
>> From: <Mueller>, Milton L <milton at gatech.edu<mailto:milton at gatech.edu>>
>> Date: Tuesday, April 19, 2016 at 2:43 PM
>> To: Becky Burr <becky.burr at neustar.biz<mailto:becky.burr at neustar.biz>>,
>>Andrew Sullivan <ajs at anvilwalrusden.com<mailto:ajs at anvilwalrusden.com>>
>> Cc: ICANN-Adler <ICANN at adlercolvin.com<mailto:ICANN at adlercolvin.com>>,
>>Daniel Halloran 
>><daniel.halloran at icann.org<mailto:daniel.halloran at icann.org>>, Sidley
>>ICANN CCWG 
>><sidleyicannccwg at sidley.com<mailto:sidleyicannccwg at sidley.com>>,
>>"bylaws-coord at icann.org<mailto:bylaws-coord at icann.org>"
>><bylaws-coord at icann.org<mailto:bylaws-coord at icann.org>>, Amy Stathos
>><amy.stathos at icann.org<mailto:amy.stathos at icann.org>>
>> Subject: RE: [bylaws-coord] Agreed text for the first sentence of the
>>Mission
>> 
>> Becky
>> Does this mean we are waiting for you to sound out the registries, and
>>registrars, on whether they find this acceptable?
>> 
>> I agree with Andrew that it is up to registries and registrars to tell
>>us whether they consider this acceptable or not. From my limited point
>>of view, it seemed a bit expansive but not as bad as some of the
>>alternatives. I share Andrew¹s concerns, however, so if the Rys and Rrs
>>don¹t see this expanding the scope of the picket fence it would be hard
>>for others to object. They are the most directly affected party and any
>>objections are not going to go anywhere without their support anyway.
>> 
>> --MM
>> 
>> 
>>From:bylaws-coord-bounces at icann.org<mailto:bylaws-coord-bounces at icann.org
>>> [mailto:bylaws-coord-bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of Burr, Becky
>> Sent: Monday, April 18, 2016 8:18 PM
>> To: Andrew Sullivan
>><ajs at anvilwalrusden.com<mailto:ajs at anvilwalrusden.com>>
>> Cc: ICANN-Adler <ICANN at adlercolvin.com<mailto:ICANN at adlercolvin.com>>;
>>Daniel Halloran 
>><daniel.halloran at icann.org<mailto:daniel.halloran at icann.org>>; Sidley
>>ICANN CCWG 
>><sidleyicannccwg at sidley.com<mailto:sidleyicannccwg at sidley.com>>;
>>bylaws-coord at icann.org<mailto:bylaws-coord at icann.org>; Amy Stathos
>><amy.stathos at icann.org<mailto:amy.stathos at icann.org>>
>> Subject: Re: [bylaws-coord] Agreed text for the first sentence of the
>>Mission
>> 
>> +1.  I feel somewhat concerned and have reached out to confirm this
>>works as a way forward.
>> 
>> Becky Burr
>> Sent from my iPhone
>> 
>> On Apr 18, 2016, at 20:01, Andrew Sullivan
>><ajs at anvilwalrusden.com<mailto:ajs at anvilwalrusden.com>> wrote:
>> Hi,
>> 
>> On Mon, Apr 18, 2016 at 11:46:54PM +0000, Rosemary E. Fei wrote:
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> ³Coordinates the allocation and assignment of names in the root zone of
>>the Domain Name System, and the allocations and assignment of names by
>>gTLD registry operators and ICANN accredited registrars.²
>> 
>> 
>> As I suggested on the call yesterday, I have some reservations about
>> this, but I'll swallow them.
>> 
>> I continue to believe it is factually incorrect.  Registries and
>> registrars do the actual allocation and assignment.  ICANN is the
>> organization in which those other organizations convene in order to
>> co-ordinate their policies, and ICANN imposes such co-ordination as a
>> condition of being able to operate within the ICANN-controlled domain
>> name space.  But if gTLD registries and ICANN-accredited registrars
>> aren't going to complain, I'm not going to either.  It is an enormous
>> improvement over the previous proposal (to remove "in the root zone").
>> 
>> Best regards,
>> 
>> A
>> 
>> --
>> Andrew Sullivan
>> ajs at anvilwalrusden.com<mailto:ajs at anvilwalrusden.com>
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