[cc-humanrights] Draft presentations GAC & Constituencies

[Avri Doria]

Hi,

thanks. 

That is what I get for missing meetings: Making contents about issues
already resolved when reviewing materials to prep for a session..

avri




On 23-Jun-15 09:38, Niels ten Oever wrote:
> Hi Avri,
>
> The presentation is from the CCWP, as are the reports. Marilia said
> after the GAC WG session that the Article19 logo on page 1 of the
> presentation might be confusing, so I have removed it now.
>
> We talked about the status of the report during the last call and
> agreed that we could publish this as a report by the CCWP yet because
> of lack of time, therefore we made it an Article19 report with the
> current title (Issue report to the CCWP). I hope that during the
> working session we will be able to set out a process for the CCWP to
> adopt this report.
>
> That is also the reason why no authors are mentioned to ensure that
> there is no confusion. I would be more than happy to add all authors
> and contributors when we can adopt the report as CCWP report (which
> was the intention all along).
>
> Best,
>
> Niels
>
>
> Niels ten Oever
> Head of Digital
>
> Article 19
> www.article19.org
>
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> On 06/23/2015 09:22 AM, Avri Doria wrote:
> > Hi,
>
> > I have question, is this from Article 19 or the WP?  Same for the
> > report.
>
> > I think that cross WP materials should perhaps list thanks at the
> > end to those who paid for the work, but it makes me uncomfortable
> > to see it used as if they are the ones creating the work.
>
> > I also think that if any authors is listed, all of the
> > authors/contributors should be listed.
>
> > Just saying
>
> > avri
>
>
>
>
> > On 21-Jun-15 15:18, Niels ten Oever wrote:
> >> Thanks you Stephanie and the others that commented on the Skype
> >> channel, please find the updated version attached.
> >>
> >> Best,
> >>
> >> Niels
> >>
> >> Niels ten Oever Head of Digital
> >>
> >> Article 19 www.article19.org
> >>
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> >>
> >> On 06/21/2015 01:33 PM, Stephanie Perrin wrote:
> >>> Since it is PDFed, I cannot edit.  Here are my Comments: 1.  ON
> >>> the title page it would be great if you could identify
> >>> yourself as NCSG. 2.  The fine print is way, way too small.
> >>> The ownership/authorship of those reports must be more
> >>> prominent, and at least legible. Title or topic of report in a
> >>> couple of words would be helpful, particularly to non-english
> >>> speakers 5.  Get rid of the blank space, put an apostrophe in
> >>> ICANN's Since we will be referring to the Ruggies principles,
> >>> it might be good to add that to this slide (bullet one) again,
> >>> to help folks follow the discussion better. 6.  I am a little
> >>> worried that this last slide looks too ambitious.....but if the
> >>> group feels our community is ready for it, damn the torpedoes.
> >>> IMHO, we are not ready yet.... Thanks Niels for the opportunity
> >>> to comment! Stephanie On 2015-06-21 11:41, Niels ten Oever
> >>> wrote:
> >>>> Hi all,
> >>>>
> >>>> I've been asked to give an overview of our CCWP work at the
> >>>> GAC WG and at several constituencies, for this I made a draft
> >>>> presentation. Please find it attached. Looking forward to
> >>>> hear what you think.
> >>>>
> >>>> The presentations should take a maximum of 15 minutes,
> >>>> including Q&A, so I'd like to keep it short. Let me know if
> >>>> you thing something is missing or should be reformulated.
> >>>>
> >>>> I'll also work on a presentation of the report for Wednesdays
> >>>> session, I will send that to you when it's ready for
> >>>> comments.
> >>>>
> >>>> Looking forward to hear from you.
> >>>>
> >>>> Best,
> >>>>
> >>>> Niels
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>>
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