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<p><font face="monospace">Thanks for sharing, Ephraim. I've made
some comments. Mostly I think it's good and for wider reach
perhaps just needs a bit more careful introductory language for
folks not that familiar with ICANN or its WHOIS-tangential
processes over the last 4+ years.</font></p>
<p><font face="monospace">Thanks!</font></p>
<p><font face="monospace">-Mallory</font><br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 6/15/22 12:50 PM, Ephraim Percy
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<p><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Dear CCWP-HR,</font></p>
<p><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Please find the
prose document here:
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<p>Dear team,</p>
<p>Hope you are all well.</p>
<p>This is in reference to previous conversations on the topic.</p>
<p>Franc (copied here in this email) has been helpful in looking
through the documents.<br>
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Please find attached the analysis here: <a
href="https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1R0j8RwbUrxbPxVIe_5Hgc4CRNUaXkSoyZ-xXNF1N5h8/edit?usp=sharing"
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<p style="margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: 100%">The document
contains two sheets;</p>
<p style="margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: 100%">First, EPDP
HRIA- analyses the EPDP Phase 2 Recommendations which inform
the ODA Report.</p>
<p style="margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: 100%">Second, ODA
HRIA- analyses the ODA Recommendations which aims to implement
the EPDP Report.</p>
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<p style="margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: 100%">FYI- The ODA
Report is informed by the EPDP Report though in some instances
ICANN might have misunderstood the EPDP Report and ICANN Board
wrote to the GNSO Council raising this questions:</p>
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<p style="margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: 100%">Whether the
ODA has correctly interpreted the intent of the SSAD
recommendations in the proposed implementation;</p>
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<p style="margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: 100%">Whether the
ODA has overlooked any key aspects of the SSAD
recommendations that should be factored in by the ICANN
Board when it considers the recommendations;</p>
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<p style="margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: 100%">Its view on
the concerns identified by the ICANN Board and potential
options that could be considered, either in the form of
changes to the proposed implementation or the policy
recommendations themselves, to address these concerns
(note, these are expected to be high level suggestions at
this stage);</p>
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<p style="margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: 100%">Any other
aspects that help inform the Council’s deliberations and
consultation with the ICANN Board.</p>
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<p style="margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: 100%">For background
here are the original documents that were being analysed:</p>
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<p style="margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: 100%">EPDP Phase
2 Final Report: <a
href="https://gnso.icann.org/sites/default/files/file/field-file-attach/epdp-phase-2-temp-spec-gtld-registration-data-2-31jul20-en.pdf"
class="moz-txt-link-freetext" moz-do-not-send="true">https://gnso.icann.org/sites/default/files/file/field-file-attach/epdp-phase-2-temp-spec-gtld-registration-data-2-31jul20-en.pdf</a>
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<p style="margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: 100%">ODA Final
Report: <a
href="https://www.icann.org/en/system/files/files/ssad-oda-25jan22-en.pdf"
class="moz-txt-link-freetext" moz-do-not-send="true">https://www.icann.org/en/system/files/files/ssad-oda-25jan22-en.pdf</a>
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<p style="margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: 100%">I look forward
to your feedback as I begin working on the prose report which
I hope to complete the first version by June 7<sup>th</sup>
and will be scheduled to be maximum 10 pages for transmission
to the board via NCSG (which CCWP-HR is seated).</p>
<p style="margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: 100%">Please feel
free to let me know in case of any questions.<br>
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