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<p>Hi Mallory,</p>
<p>Yes, we did.</p>
<p>Here are the final versions:-</p>
<p>Human Rights Gap Analysis for ICANN’s Universal Acceptance
Roadmap for Domain Name Registry and Registrar Systems:-
<a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="https://itp.cdn.icann.org/public-comment/proceeding/Universal%20Acceptance%20Roadmap%20for%20Domain%20Name%20Registry%20and%20Registrar%20Systems%20%20-31-08-2022/submissions/Cross-Community%20Working%20Party%20on%20ICANN%20and%20Human%20Rights%20(CCWP-HR)%20/Final%20CCWP-HR%20HRGA%20on%20Universal%20Acceptance%20Roadmap%20for%20Domain%20Name%20Registry%20and%20Registrar%20Systems%20-31-10-2022.pdf">https://itp.cdn.icann.org/public-comment/proceeding/Universal%20Acceptance%20Roadmap%20for%20Domain%20Name%20Registry%20and%20Registrar%20Systems%20%20-31-08-2022/submissions/Cross-Community%20Working%20Party%20on%20ICANN%20and%20Human%20Rights%20(CCWP-HR)%20/Final%20CCWP-HR%20HRGA%20on%20Universal%20Acceptance%20Roadmap%20for%20Domain%20Name%20Registry%20and%20Registrar%20Systems%20-31-10-2022.pdf</a></p>
<p>Human Rights Gap Analysis for ICANN’s Pilot Holistic Review Draft
Terms of Reference:-
<a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="https://itp.cdn.icann.org/public-comment/proceeding/Pilot%20Holistic%20Review%20Draft%20Terms%20of%20Reference-30-08-2022/submissions/Cross-Community%20Working%20Party%20on%20ICANN%20and%20Human%20Rights%20(CCWP-HR)/Final%20CCWP-HR%20HRGA%20for%20Pilot%20Holistic%20Review%20Draft%20Terms%20of%20Reference-10-11-2022.pdf">https://itp.cdn.icann.org/public-comment/proceeding/Pilot%20Holistic%20Review%20Draft%20Terms%20of%20Reference-30-08-2022/submissions/Cross-Community%20Working%20Party%20on%20ICANN%20and%20Human%20Rights%20(CCWP-HR)/Final%20CCWP-HR%20HRGA%20for%20Pilot%20Holistic%20Review%20Draft%20Terms%20of%20Reference-10-11-2022.pdf</a></p>
<p>Human Rights Gap Analysis for ICANN’s Proposed Amendments to the
SLA for the IANA Numbering Services:-
<a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="https://itp.cdn.icann.org/public-comment/proceeding/Proposed%20Amendments%20to%20the%20SLA%20for%20the%20IANA%20Numbering%20Services-13-09-2022/submissions/Cross-Community%20Working%20Party%20on%20ICANN%20and%20Human%20Rights%20(CCWP-HR)/CCWP-HR%20HRGA%20for%20Proposed%20Amendments%20to%20the%20SLA%20for%20the%20IANA%20Numbering%20Services-18-11-2022.pdf">https://itp.cdn.icann.org/public-comment/proceeding/Proposed%20Amendments%20to%20the%20SLA%20for%20the%20IANA%20Numbering%20Services-13-09-2022/submissions/Cross-Community%20Working%20Party%20on%20ICANN%20and%20Human%20Rights%20(CCWP-HR)/CCWP-HR%20HRGA%20for%20Proposed%20Amendments%20to%20the%20SLA%20for%20the%20IANA%20Numbering%20Services-18-11-2022.pdf</a></p>
<p>Human Rights Gap Analysis for ICANN’s Draft IANA and PTI FY24
Operating Plan and Budgets:-
<a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="https://itp.cdn.icann.org/public-comment/proceeding/Draft%20IANA%20and%20PTI%20FY24%20Operating%20Plan%20and%20Budgets-15-09-2022/submissions/Cross-Community%20Working%20Party%20on%20ICANN%20and%20Human%20Rights%20(CCWP-HR)/CCWP-HR%20HRGA%20for%20Draft%20IANA%20and%20PTI%20FY24%20Operating%20Plan%20and%20Budgets-17-11-2022.pdf">https://itp.cdn.icann.org/public-comment/proceeding/Draft%20IANA%20and%20PTI%20FY24%20Operating%20Plan%20and%20Budgets-15-09-2022/submissions/Cross-Community%20Working%20Party%20on%20ICANN%20and%20Human%20Rights%20(CCWP-HR)/CCWP-HR%20HRGA%20for%20Draft%20IANA%20and%20PTI%20FY24%20Operating%20Plan%20and%20Budgets-17-11-2022.pdf</a></p>
<p>I will be sending an email shortly with a doodle poll for us to
discuss more potential submissions for the future.<br>
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<p>Best Regards,</p>
<p>Ephraim Percy Kenyanito<br>
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<p><font face="monospace">These are both great. They are short and
to the point.</font></p>
<p><font face="monospace">Did they get submitted as comments
already?</font></p>
<p><font face="monospace">-Mallory<br>
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<p><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Dear
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<p><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">I had
volunteered during our last NCSG call to draft the first
draft Human Rights Gap Analysis for two public comments,
I have been lucky to be able to work on the drafts with
two CCWP-HR members please find two drafts here:</font></p>
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<p style="margin-bottom: 0in"><font face="Times New
Roman, Times, serif"><span lang="en-US">Universal
Acceptance Roadmap for Domain Name Registry and
Registrar Systems</span> – 31 Oct- <a
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href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jX53V0I2XKuGnhgCHLAvoy9eHg8lQuks4U6oBQhJKZY/edit"
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Roman, Times, serif"><span lang="en-US">Pilot
Holistic Review Draft Terms of Reference – </span><span
lang="en-US">10 Nov- <a
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href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/10CK9s2r1WldKAOzZJvk35lkdQE5t8fa-JExnlJXUM4Y/edit"
moz-do-not-send="true">https://docs.google.com/document/d/10CK9s2r1WldKAOzZJvk35lkdQE5t8fa-JExnlJXUM4Y/edit</a><br>
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<p><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">We welcome
your feedback.</font></p>
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<p><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Please feel
free to add any comments etc and I will be happy to
share a second version ASAP.</font><br>
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